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Ryuranger
08-08-2003, 12:40 PM
“I, Ranger,” - Chapter Five: Into the Darkness

Moonlight streaked through the canopy of trees above me, casting a pale glow across the dozen soldiers escorting me to the Drikeshi Pits.

The Drikeshi lived underground in a hive-like structure, and all were dedicated to the protection of their queen-mother. The entrance to their lair was miles away from the nearest city and buried deep within the woods.

The Empress hadn’t forced me to turn myself in to the creatures; I had volunteered. The children were kidnapped because of me, and I had to do whatever I could to get them back.

The Empress had assured me that the guard escort was merely a formality and had even provided a change of dress for me. She assured me the outfit provided would be more suitable to my plans for escape after the children were freed.

My slacks were loose fitting black leather that wrapped around dark boots. A line of black cloth served as my belt. I wore a matching black sleeveless tunic of leather over a baggy shirt of dark, rusty red. My forearms were covered in black straps, each hiding a small dagger. My hands were bound in cuffs that I could have easily snapped out of.

Mordont nudged me in the back with the handle of his sword. “Faster, Earther…”

I turned by head back to glare at Mordont. “Hit me again, and I’ll break off your wrist.”

Mordont laughed mockingly. “Another time perhaps…We’ve arrived.”

I looked out upon the stretch of woods before me and noticed nothing out of the ordinary…that was until patches of ground slid aside and dozens of reptilian soldiers climbed out from below the soil.

They stalked forward cautiously while holding jagged spears and sabers. Mordont stepped forward to address the soldiers and his fear seemed almost tangible.

“We have brought a gift for your Queen-Mother,” he said as he held his hand out towards me.

One of the reptilians stepped forward and wrinkled his brow as he tightened his grip on his spear. “Reija…” the creature hissed.

“That’s right,” I said as I stepped forward. “I’m here. Now release the hostages.”

The reptilian wrinkled his brow with confusion.

A twisted smile spread across Mordont’s face. “Oh yes…about the children…I lied.”

I was a fraction of a second away from snapping off my bindings and attacking Mordont when one of his guards slammed the end of his spear against the back of my neck. Darkness consumed me before I hit the ground.

***

My vision slowly blurred into focus and I found myself in a dark cave with only a single torch providing illumination. Iron bars imprisoned me within the cave, blocking the stony corridor I assumed led deeper into the Drikeshi pits.

I heard a small coughing from a dark corner in my cell of stone and realized I wasn’t alone.

“You’re awake I see,” a cold voice said from the dark corner. “Welcome to hell.”

I tried to stand, but my legs weren’t ready to move. “Who are you?”

The man leaned forward, letting the pale light creep across his face. His face was white and unshaven. His dark, unwashed hair was ruffled across the top of his head. He stared at me with brown, baggy eyes that betrayed endless nights of sleeplessness.

“I’m the last human you’ll ever see,” the man said as he flashed me a lopsided grin. “Quite a thought, isn’t it?”

I shook my head, keeping my expression stern. “I don’t think so…”

The man sighed. “Well you’re no fun. My name is Stefen. A pleasure.”

“I’m Tommy,” I answered, not sure what to think of the stranger. He seemed cocky and arrogant, and his spirits weren’t dampened by his imprisonment. “How’d you end up here?”

Stefen leaned back into his dark corner. “I’m a man of secrets, Tommy. You seem like someone who can understand that, yes?”

I shook my head, not wanted to engage in any pointless conversation about lives shrouded in secrecy.

“I suppose that’s fair,” I said as I stood and walked over to the bars holding us back from freedom. They were worn and appeared rusty, but were also quite sturdy. I could have easily morphed and ripped the bars apart like paper, but I felt it wise not to reveal my identity to the stranger I shared my cell with.

Stefen laughed with amusement as he watched me run my hands across the bars in search of weaknesses. I turned to glare at him. “Something funny?”

“But of course,” Stefen said as his grin widened. “Even if you did by some act of The Maker manage to break free from those bars…where would you go? Hmm? The snake-faces are everywhere down here. They’d rip you to shreds.”

“Underestimating me is a fatal mistake,” I said as I grabbed a hold of the weakest bar. I let the fire of my dragon power slowly ebb into the bar and weaken its integrity. I let the power ebb into my muscles, giving me the strength to snap the bar free.

Stefen opened his eyes wide with astonishment. “Seems there’s more to you than what appears, Tommy…”

“Secrets, Stefen,” I said as a lopsided grin spread across my face. “Secrets…”

--to be continued in part two. this thread. watch for it.
--for chapters one through four, visit www.angelfire.com/extreme3/p_rangersx/IRanger.html

Qi
08-08-2003, 12:46 PM
Nice update.

Imperialwar
08-08-2003, 01:08 PM
Very Nice.

Lord ZEDD
08-08-2003, 07:03 PM
Awsome I was wondering when you would get the next chapter.

Ryuranger
08-21-2003, 09:57 PM
Okay...so "I, Ranger" is taking me forever and a day. Forgive the tardiness of this short but long-overdue update.
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Stefen and I walked side by side through the dark caverns of the Drikeshi pits, which reminded me of the old passages that ran beneath Rita’s moon palace, only darker and gloomier.

The stranger accompanying me had stealth skills greater than my own. We blended in with the shadows to avoid patrols and work groups. We moved in silence…that was until the ambush came.

Creatures best described as winged gremlins dropped onto our backs from stalagmites hanging from the cave ceiling. They clawed across my flesh, drawing blood, as they did the same to Stefen.

“Nasty little things,” Stefen shouted as he reached backwards and grabbed the gremlin by its arms. He pried the creature off his back and tossed it against a small group of incoming Drikeshi soldiers.

The Drikeshi were taken by surprised as the gremlin slammed into them, giving Stefen time to move in and tackle against the lead soldier. He slammed his elbow against the creature’s ribs and slammed him to the ground.

Stefen grabbed hold of the fallen creature’s jagged blade and sprang to his knees as he thrust the sword through another soldier’s stomach, spilling its innards over the cave floor.

“They die messy,” Stefen said as he rose to his feet and swung his blade horizontally, decapitating another soldier.

I reached back towards the gremlin on my back and grabbed a hold of its head. I twisted, snapping its neck as the creature fell to the ground in a lifeless hump.

I sprinted over to Stefen as fast as I could and launched a flying sidekick that slammed against a soldier’s chest.

“Not bad,” Stefen said as he tossed me a jagged saber he had picked up from a fallen soldier.

“Thanks,” I said as I grabbed the blade in time to parry a blow from an incoming Drikeshi.

We stood side by side as a seemingly unstoppable wall of Drikeshi soldiers continued to push us back. We cut down soldiers left and right, switching positions, parrying blows, covering each others backs, but the enemy was too massive.

I was about ready to morph when a high-pitched wail echoed through the cavern. I grabbed a hold of my ears as the sound seemed to pierce my skull. The noise had the same effect on Stefen as well as the Drikeshi.

“What is that?” I asked through clenched teeth, hoping Stefen would have an answer.

“Nothing good,” Stefen answered as he covered his ears as well.

The noise stopped as I rose back to my feet. The lines of soldiers spread out to the sides of the wall as a massive amphibious creature walked through the ranks.

“That must be loud mouth,” I said as I stood in a defensive stance alongside Stefen. I took notice for the first time that Stefen’s defensive stance was rather solid. Whoever he was, he definitely had some martial skill.

The amphibian looked down on the two of us as his gills opened and closed with each breath he took. “The Queen-Mother will see you now…”

I arced my eyebrow. “What?”

“The Queen-Mother said she wishes to see you,” the creature said as he leaned down. “I’m assuming she meant alive, but if you don’t cooperate, I could easily be mistaken.”

I looked to Stefen, and he nodded at me as if going to the Queen-Mother would be the best option. I suppose it’s better than the alternative, I thought to myself. Fighting my way through an endless horde of reptiles doesn’t seem like too much fun.

---to be continued in part three. this thread. watch for it...

Ryuranger
08-21-2003, 10:24 PM
***

The Queen-Mother’s chamber resembled a giant and stony version of the inside of a bee hive. She sat upon a tall, jagged throne in the front of the room. She was quite hideous.

She had a tall and lean insectoid body covered in a dark purple shell that seemed almost like animal hide. She had at least six arms and around eight legs from what I could see. Small maggots that appeared to be feasting on her flesh prevented a good description of her.

Her face was pale with two bubblous eyes that made it impossible to know where exactly she was looking. Two mandibles protruded from her mouth that clicked together when we entered the room.

“The upworlders brought you here to be fodder, Reija,” the Queen-mother said in a high hissing voice as her mandibles vibrated.

Stefen looked at me from the corner of his eye. “Ranger?”

“I’ll explain later,” I said quietly without taking my eyes off the Queen-Mother.

“To whom are you allied?” the Queen-Mother asked as she leaned forward.

“No one,” I answered simply.

The Queen picked up one of the maggots in her hand and watched it with what I thought was the equivalent of a loving gaze. “And yet you slaughtered my precious children. Why?”

I wrinkled my brow at the Queen-Mother, not wanted to show any fear. “I was protecting those soldiers. Your children were slaughtering them.”

“In self defense,” the Queen-Mother spat. “We wish only to be left alone, and yet the Empress send her hordes, her armies, against us! She is not content to share this world.”

I opened my eyes wide with shock. “How can I believe what you’re saying is true?”

“Assume that it is true,” the Queen-Mother said. “What would you do, Earther?”

I hesitated. What would I do? I couldn’t aide the Queen-Mother’s forces in any attack on the Eltarians, but I could defend her people if they were to come under attack. That wasn’t what I was sent to Eltar for, though.

Stefen nudged his shoulder against my back. “You best answer her majesity,” he said quietly.

I shook my head. “I don’t know. If what you’re saying is true, then I could defend your people for as long as I’m here, but I’m not sure how long that would be…”

“And you doubt because of our appearances,” the Queen-Mother said in disappointment as she leaned back on her throne.

“To be honest, yes,” I answered. “I’ve only been to a few planets, and the inhabitants were all humanoid. Almost all non-humanoids I’ve met have tried to kill me or blow up planet.”

The Queen-Mother clicked her mandibles together as she tilted back her head and made a strange vibration I could have sworn was a laugh. “You bring an interesting point, Reijya.”

“Thanks,” I said, not knowing what to expect.

The Queen mother extended her left hands as she looked to the side of her chamber. A small opening iresed open in the hive wall.

“I will make a deal with you, Reijya,” the Queen-Mother said. “I sense that you are a man of honor. I will allow you to leave and speak with the Empress. Once she tells you the truth, return here. If you do not return, we will kill your cell-mate, as well as demolish the nearest Eltarian base camp.”

She was rather trusting to let me go, gambling I’d return to save the life of a man I had just met. Either that, or she was very perceptive.

“What happens after I come back?” I asked her.

“We will speak,” the Queen-Mother said. “Do not pretend to fear for safety or the safety of your friend. You possess enough power to bring this entire hive crumbling, and you know it.”

I nodded. She was right.

“Alright,” Tommy said. “It’s a deal.”

“You best be back, Tommy,” Stefen said.

“I will,” Tommy said. “Just after the good-hearted Empress answers a few questions. She better hope she gives the right answers.”

-- To be continued in Chapter Six...