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PHAETON
07-07-2003, 10:08 AM
Here is my second episode , although I’m not entirely finished with the first one I wanted to start on this while it was still fresh in my mind. Besides I have an bad case of writer’s block with the first episode.Please reply

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Angel Grove, California: 1795 AD.

In the recently settled town of Angel Grove, The British Redcoats have been policing this land from the north have been policing this land from recent Native American Raids. Every citizen and soldier of this town surround it’s town square. The sight with to them looks like two colorful, cloaked witches just saved their town from total destruction by large,bad Rat creatures. But in Reality the heroes are The Green and White Morphin Power rangers, with their superhuman powers and Technology were able to defeat the creatures. The rangers are discussing an important matter.

‘’Well maybe Zordon will think of something.’‘ The White Ranger says confidently as he raps his hand around the wand originally owned by The Wizard of Deception.

‘’You know you are right’‘The Green ranger says’‘The 90's are my world not this one. I think I can help the world as the Green ranger.’‘ The White Ranger nods his head in agreement. An young teenage girl pushes her way through the thick crowd. She finally gets up on the stage.

The White Ranger asks’‘Marissa what are you doing here.’‘

‘’I know I said that I was to stay here in this time and me an Adam go our separate ways. I know have realized that there was something special between us. So as my final decision I want to go to the future.’‘ Marissa says bravely as The Green ranger walks behind her an pats her on her shoulder.

‘’I don’t have any objections why you can’t come with us.’‘The Green Ranger says. The white ranger pauses and points the wand at here

‘’Alright She can come, but we will have to keep her as an surprise or Adam.’‘The two nod their heads as The white ranger summons the portal. In one giant leap the three into the portal and disappear from the Town Square without an trace.

Year Ranger
07-07-2003, 10:11 AM
sounds cool so far PHAETON!

OriginalRanger
07-07-2003, 10:52 AM
Nice! Great to see Marissa making a reappearance. I've been working on a fanfic idea recreating MMPR for a bit, and in a past version I had a time-tossed Marissa as a Purple Ranger (though in this one there was no clone Tommy her original location was moved to just-pre Revolution Jamestown, VA, and she was trapped in the present). I've always liked that character. I'm wondering what will happen between her and Adam now that she's in the 1990s.

It should be interesting how things go with two Tommys in the 1990s, and wondering how the clone Tommy can get his own life started with the confusion. Could he be joining the MMPR or going off alone?

I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. Keep up the good work.

PHAETON
07-07-2003, 01:44 PM
Hey guys here is the second part.I hope that ya'll will like it. Third part comes around tommorw or early Wensday.


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Chamber Of Command, Earth’s moon: 1994 AD.

Out on the large balcony of the Dark, still and Evil palace of its married Master. The Literal ‘’Muscle head’‘Known as Lord Zedd, Is scanning the Earth for any possible monsters. Unsatisfied with the results he shuts his super X-ray vison off in anger. Zedd pounds his metallic fist onto the ledge of the balcony.

‘’FINSTER !’‘ Lord Zedd yells, as and short dog- like creature appears to his master’s side.
Finster shudders ‘’Yes my Lord. What is it thy requires of me ?’‘

‘’I need you to recreate one of your previous monsters. Although I cant remember the name of my spouse’s creation, I know It slightly resembled that of an Chimera. I need that Monster Model!’‘

Finster asks’‘I now just the one. But why do you need the model sir?’‘

‘’So I can make it the most powerful monster, I have created. Ha-ah-aha’‘The evil Laughter continues as Finster scurries out of the room. We get closer to the sinister face of Lord Zedd

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The Command Center: 1994

Inside the Power Ranger’s base of operations. The five Teens stand waiting anticipantley for their teammates arrival. In a swirl of electrical and plasmic energies are displayed as the portal opens. Both Green and White Rangers step out of the portal unmorphed, Marissa is now where to be seen. The five rangers clap in for the friends. Zordon clears his throat.

‘’Tom, Let me be the first to Welcome you to the Power Rangers.’‘ We notice that everyone is clapping but Adam, Aisha is the first person who notices this walks over to his side.

Aisha Asks ‘’Adam, what is wrong.’‘

‘’ I’m just thinking about Marissa, that’s all.’‘ The clapping stops, as Tommy still carrying the wand makes Marissa appear. The two run towards each other and begin to hug and Kiss passionately.

Marissa laughs ‘’I’m okay Adam and I’m here to stay.’‘ After welcoming everyone, Adam holding the hand of Marissa

‘’So, Zordon what do you think, can she stay.’‘ There is an slight pause as Zordon thinks for an moment.

Zordon Bellows’‘Yes, after checking her personal and records. She is very legit, but you are in full responsibility of her. Are you sure take upon this heavy task ?’‘Adam shakes his head in Agreement

‘’Now to get to the important part. To solve the problem of Two Tommy’s . I have come to an decision. In this decision, Tom I’m afraid that from two days from now you will be leaving Earth to go to the troubled planet Edenoi.

Tom asks ‘’Hopefully this will be part of my destiny Zordon. Will I be able to keep my powers and my zord ?’‘



‘’ Since the recharged Dragonzord power coin is still in it’s prime it is able to support the mighty powers of Thunder.’‘ The viewing Globe turns alive as it shows The Dragonzord rising from it’s water home. ‘’Tom Oliver, I introduce to you the latest Zord equipped with Thunder technology.......THE PEGASUS !’‘

We watch as the old Dragonzord transforms into an creature we have never seen before. It’s head sheds it’s reptilian appearance to that of an furious black Stag. His sharp horn turns into a beautiful long mane. It’s arms and legs are transformed into huge hooved- upstuctions . Two huge black wings sprout from the back of the creature. Lastly the Dragonzord’s infamous tail is transformed into an shorter cat-o-nine tails like whip, snapping furiously. The New Pegasus Thunderzord stands up on it’s hind legs, steam is blown out of it nose and it makes an sound that would strike fear into the hearts of any evil how dares oppose It.

Tom smiles’‘ It’s beautiful, I’ve never seen anything like it before.’‘ Zordon nods his humongs head.

‘’It’s beauty is matched with it’s by it firepower. It strength and sheer power is said to match Serpentera Itself. Use it wisely my friends. Go now my children and may the power protect you.’‘
Kimberly hurries to Marissa’s side

‘’We are going to have an blast getting you up-to-date .’‘ Marissa smiles as all eight teens teleport away in the distinctive colored energies.

Year Ranger
07-08-2003, 08:40 AM
I just read the second part today and i loved it too!

Devious One
07-08-2003, 09:16 AM
It's a pretty good start, PHAETON, but I have to say there are a bunch of areas that could be improved. For instance, the scene with Marissa appearing like that, you could have at least did a build up to it instead of having Tom just wave his wand and she appear.

I have to say though, there is a great amount of potential in your writing. Just keep working on some areas and I do like the idea of Adam and Marissa being together. I've always liked that idea. Chow.

PHAETON
07-08-2003, 03:35 PM
Here is the third part. stay tunned for the next piece. Thanks for all the replies everyone. I really appreciate them. Enjoy


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Chamber of Command:1994 AD

Inside the mist Fortress of Lord Zedd self-proclaimed Emperor of everything he sees. Zedd is setting in his throne waiting for the monster scientist Finster. He hits his arm rest with his hand.

‘’By all that is evil, What is taking him so long.’‘ At the exact moment Lord Zedd begins to rise out of his throne, Finster rushes in with an small clay model.

Finster sighs’‘This is the model of Goatan the Storm-bringer. It was made from the Lion noble Trophy. It was an very Advanced monster for it’s time and it’ hurricanes could destroy the world.’‘

‘’FINSTER.....’‘Lord Zedd’s wife and former employee walks into the room staff in all. The old witch sighs’‘.....I thought I told you to finish doing research on that lost spell.’‘ The room breaks into heavy Argumentation as Zedd and Rita. Finster after putting his hands around his ears, feels that the yelling is simply unbearable

Finster Shouts ‘’THAT’S IT ......’‘The yelling stops as Finster continues ‘’I have had it with the both of you. Finster do this, Finster do that. I feel like freaki’n Cinderella. I have served as your servant for more than 15,000 years. I am not the young Corinthian I used to be. I am leaving to take over the world by myself. All I need are these two things...’‘ Finster holds out both of his hands. In a glow of green energy two objects appear, in his right hand lays his huge monster/spell book and in his left hand is the sharp as ever Sword of Darkness pulsating in a dark green glow

‘’.......You better enjoy your lives while you still can. Tootles.’‘ Finster teleports away in a flurry of gray smoke and water. The two monarchs are silent for a few seconds then break out in an joyful laughter.

Rita Cackles ‘’Come on Zeddy, I think there is an monster that you need me to help you recreate an monster.’‘ The two of them have an short kiss and then begin to recite something together.

‘’ Scabs, Weasels, Moons of Cryon and Trake, Remake this monster, half Goat, half Lion, and half Snake!’‘ After the spell is complete, the energy from Rita’s wand and Zedd’s staff causes glows an bright white. The light clears and the new version of Goatan steps out.

For the most of it he looks the same. However his once short and furry tail is now replaced with and six foot long tail. It shakes wildly as the sound of an rattle is heard. His once mammal slicing machine of an left arm is replaced by the head of an King Cobra, it eyes glowing an viscous red and venomous fangs are outstretched. The last two things notably different, are the fact he has an chromed Exoskeleton similar to that of Lord Zedd but fitted for his more animal appearance and he also carries an long staff that has and ancient looking Triangle. All three points glow and malaciousious red.

The monster roars’‘ I am Goatan Fang, The mighty Storm-Bringer. What is that you wish of me my lord.’‘Goatan Fang’s voice was actually a combination of all three animals in the most perfect rythmetic pattern imaginable.

‘’I want you to turn those power punks into snowcones! But I give you permission to crush the Green Ranger with all of the fury of Mother Nature.’‘ Lord Zedd says with uttermost anger.

Goatan Fang laughs ‘’It shall be DONE!’‘ With his last word uttered word. The beast Teleports away in an gray tornado. Zedd and Rita close near each other and begin to dance the waltz in laugh in all of the despicable Joy.

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The Juice Bar, Angel Grove:1994 AD

Inside the familiar hang out-work out Angel Grove Teen joint. Ernie the owner of one of the most successful business walks over to Adam Park’ and Melissa Earheart’s table. The now 20st century Marissa is wearing an pair of black jeans an purple turtleneck with an black jean jacket. She also wears her official Los Angeles Lakers hat backwards.

‘’Can I get you two anything ?’‘Ernie asks as he takes the top of his pin and readies to jot something down on his mini-notebook.
Marissa speaks first ‘’ I think an double vanilla and Chocolate milk shake in one glass, would be alright.’‘ Ernie writes the order down and gives Adam an salute. The owner walks off to serve other customers.

‘’ So how do you like 20st century Marissa, isn’t it an Thrill ride.’‘ Adam says as the two of them hold hands.

Marissa giggles’‘ Well, It’s pretty much like I imagined. Mechanical horses, colorful dressing, Communication using wires, and how about mysterious witches who protect the world in sixty foot tall mechanical things.’‘ The two break out in a quiet laughter,

‘’That was hilarious, I got some of the information on your foster parents.’‘ Adam says as he pulls out an packet of information and lays firmly on the table. Marissa gladly scups the papers.

Marissa is shocked ‘’How did you get all this ?’‘

‘’It wasn’t easy but I had Alpha come up with an permanent Record for you. It has all your grades, shot records, birth certificate, and you some of your history. So basically your set for life.

Marissa’‘ I really appreciate all that you have done for me Adam....’‘ The share an nice short kiss on the lips ‘’.....So how did I become a foster child anyways?’‘

‘’Your parents were in an Car accident when you were fourteen years old. For the past two years you been in over five homes across the state and now you will enter the home the Mitchell’s. The father, Bill is an Captain in the United States Navy. The mother is an Radiologist at The Angel Grove Medical Center and there daughter Dana how is Thirteen and attends Joseph Patrick Kennedy Jr. Middle school.’‘

Marissa says ‘’Now that’s impressive. I’m suppose to get there today at 4:00 clock.’‘ Ernie comes back with the double milk shake. Two straws sit in the one cup, Marissa takes Chocolate while Adam takes Vanilla . After romatinicly slurping down the shake, Adam’s communicator is activated.

Marissa picks up her denim purse and Adam puts the money on the table. The two hurry into an very famliar corner.

Adam whispers’‘ I read you Zordon, what’s going on ?’‘

‘’Adam, Lord Zedd and Rita have Reanimated the monster Goatan. It is attacking civillans at the lake, I will inform the others.’‘ The great sage Zordon booms as Adam gives Marissa an goodbye kiss.

Marissa smiles’‘ I’ll be at my foster parents house. Call me after you whop that monster’s butt .’‘ Adam nods his head as he transforms into a Black-colored column of pure energy, then disappears. Marissa happily walks out near the doors then trips. Acting like nothing happened she rushes out of the door.

comicstar100
07-08-2003, 10:41 PM
Not bad,can't wait to read the rest.

NiGhTRanGeR2003
07-08-2003, 11:06 PM
I cant wait for the rest but some how i think Merrisa isnt staying.

OriginalRanger
07-08-2003, 11:22 PM
This is coming out great. I love the attention to detail involving the creation of an identity for Marissa in modern times, and having her adopted into the Mitchells' (of PRLR) was a nice touch as well.

Technical-wise, I'd make everything past tense. For example, "At the exact moment Lord Zedd begins to rise out of his throne, Finster rushes in with an small clay model." would go to "At the exact moment Lord Zedd began to rise out of his throne, Finster rushed in with a small clay model." It sounds more like a book in that fashion.

Overall, terrific job. Keep on posting more installments. It's great to see more of the clone Green Ranger and Marissa. Keep up the good work.

PHAETON
07-10-2003, 12:27 PM
Hey guys this is my fourth installment. It includes three major fight scenes. Trust me, you will enjoy it. Keep posted for number 5



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Angel Grove Lake: 1994 AD


Today was an perfect day at the lake. Not to hot temperature, No clouds in the sky and absolutely no monster attacks. All that changes when an small, dark Tornado appears on the hot beach sand. Adults hurry to get their kids out of the water as Goatan Fang finally transforms back into his solid state,

‘’ Hello puny humans. My resurrection has happened at last. It’s time for you to meet the full wrath of mother nature.’‘ Goatan Fang roars, using his lion head he shoots an powerful Optic Blast at the Twenty people. The intense fire surrounds them, Goatan Fang laughs maliciously as he points his staff into the sky. Black rain clouds fill the sky, Huge Bolts of lighting are seen and thunder is heard with an mighty force. The wind starts to pick up speed and merciless rain batters on the poor civillans. Goatan Fang laughs, but it is soon cut off by an very familiar voice.

‘’Stop right there, Hurricane Goatan. The Power Rangers are here and about to take you out to sea.’‘ Goatan Fang turns around to see that is the New white ranger along with the other five familiar colors. They are all morphed in their battle stance with their Power Weapons in hand.

Goatan Fang Sneers ‘’I will not let history repeat Itself...’‘The chimera reaches an Lifeguard stand ‘’....I WILL NOT.’‘ He throws the stand full force into the rangers. With an slash of the animate Saba, the lifeguard stand breaks into two pieces.

Goatan Fang roars and begins to charge the rangers. Slashing away mercilessly with his claws, Goatan doesn’t expect one from The Red Ranger’s Power sword. Sparks fly from the monster’s chest, in the fury of retaliation Goatan Fang using his Goat Mouth Turns him into an solid block of Ice,

Yellow Ranger screams ‘’ Oh my god Rocky....’‘ The yellow Ranger turns toward the monster ‘’...You BASTARD.’‘ An flurry of yellow energy streams out the Power Daggers. The blasts hit Goatan Fang multiple times in the chest, The monster howls in pain as The yellow ranger slices off his right hand.

The chimera doesn’t expect an Bulldozer of an attack. The Blue and Black Rangers perform the infamous Double Whammy on the monster. Finally The White ranger using all the powers of saba unleashes them upon the Goat face. Since knowing that here Power Bow was ineffective against Goatan, so she fights with her blade blaster and strikes the monster wright in the back.

‘’Stop this the nonsense NOW !’‘ with one whip of his mighty tail, Goatan sends the five remanding flying though the Air.

‘By the wings of Horus, you shall be forever trapped in the Imackal Tornado .’‘ An huge bolt of Lighting streams into the staff. It glows with an blinding red light, Goatan Fang fires the energy at the energy. We watch as the five Power Rangers are enveloped in side the fiery whirlwind. In the inside, the five rangers are mystically strapped and Systematically lowered to the burning eye of the storm.

Billy says’‘We have try to contact Tom, He is the only one who can help us.’‘ The Tornado spins more violently and the rangers are lowered an inch towards the eye.

We are back outside the Imackal tornado, Goatan Fang makes his way towards the inner city trucking the Tornado along. He brings to enter the dark woods of the Town.

‘’Where do you think your Going.’‘ This voice matches with that of The Green Morphin Ranger, even in the harsh weather such as this. His golden armor gleams for more than a thousand sun shines. He performs his most infamous move, the flying Side Kick straight into Goatan Fang’s back. The monster flies straight into a tree. After regaining his bearings, The uber-monster begins uprooting the tree.

Goatan Fang sneers ‘’You wanna play dirty Ranger, So lets play.’‘ He swings the tree like it was some kind of club. The Green ranger narrowly misses it by performing ‘Tuck and roll. When he is back on his feet, he quickly fires an few shots from his Dragon Dagger. The shots make contact on the monster’s chest. In fury Goatan Fang hurls the tree, it’s slams the green ranger through several trees. The weakened Green Ranger struggles to get up. Goatan Fang leaps to the fallen ranger’s position. The evil Chimera picks up the ranger by the neck.

‘’Pathetic Ranger, It is time fore you and your powers to be wiped out of existence.’‘ Goatan Fang says triumphantly, as he squeezes his neck tighter and tighter.

Green Ranger awakens ‘’I wouldn’t count on it.’‘ The green ranger knees Goatan Fang in his lion hand. The monster drops him down quickly, when he finally gets his senses in check, The Green ranger is no where to be seen.

‘’You-hooh, I’m wright here.’‘ Goatan Fang sees The Arboreal Green ranger sitting high upon a thick branch of the oak tree. In an attack much like that of the Wind Ninja academy, The green Ranger lands finally on solid ground in his battle stance. Sparks erupt from all areas of the monster’s body.

Goatan Fang Says staggering ‘’I still have enough power to kill you.’‘ The weakened monster points his staff at the ranger. It fires an strange plasmic energy, The Dragon shield absorbs the energy then transfers it into the Dragon Dagger. An green bolt of energy is fired, it wraps around the staff and brakes it in half.

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Chamber of Command: 1994 AD

Meanwhile at the Chamber of Command, Lord Zedd watches the battle anticipantley with his red Super-Scope vision until the last turn of events.

‘’The Dragonzord will not be able to handle this monster super- sized.’‘ Zedd summons the familiar Grow Bombs ‘’Grow my monster, Grow.’‘ He throws the enlarging explosive device down into earth’s orbit.

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Goatan Fang receives the Grow Bomb in excellent Condition. In an simple task of taking off the spherical top, the monster is engulfed in the large explosion. An few seconds later, The lumbering City-destroying size. The Giant Goatan Fang attempts to step on the Green Ranger but misses.

‘’Now, Lets get this party started.’‘ Goatan Fang enforces as he attempts to blast the ranger with his Optic blast.

The Green ranger smirks’‘ Alright Big guy I hope you can hear this. I Need Thunderzord power, Now.’‘ The ranger puts his Dagger upon his lips and begins playing the famliar Dragonzord summoning tune. We see that on the other side of town, the slumbering Dragonzord Awakens and rises from the depths.

‘’ Dragonzord, Pegasus Thunderzord power !’‘ The green ranger commands, as Goatan fang waits patiently.
(Dragonzord Thunderzord transformation sequence)After we see the newly formed Pegasus Thunderzord rips some serious velocity to get from the Warehouse district to the city wood in five seconds. The Pegasus stares with an vicious glare at Goatan Fang, The green ranger teleports inside of the cockpit

The cockpit which lays inside the head of the beast, looks like an more spacious version of the dragonzord cockpit. Instead of having the familiar Dragon footprint insignia it is an ‘P’ with two black wings sticking out from both sides of it. Like the Tigerzord , The Pegasus has an insertion box for The Dragon Dagger. The Green ranger places the Dagger im for activation then goes busily to work on his new Zord.

‘’Alright Pegasus let’s show this clown how it is done.’‘ The Pegasus nods it’s head as Goatan Fang starts the battle off with an Electrical blast from it’s staff. The Pegasus gallops full speed and butts Goatan Fang in the chest. The monster goes flying into an nearby building. After recovering sends an flurry fireballs at the winged black stallion. Most make contact on the zord’s hull. The Pegasus flies off.

Goatan stands ‘’Go ahead and leave you coward. No mere zord can defeat me.’‘ Coming through the clouds like an bullet from hell. Goatan prepares to run away . The Pegasus lever’s itself and point’s it wings at his position. Hidden missiles make themselves noticed

‘’FIRE !’‘ The green ranger yells as The Pegasus unleashes the mighty missiles upon Goatan Fang. Sparks erupt from his body but he still stumbles around. The Pegasus unleashes an black smoke-like substance on the dying monster. It forma an cloud over him, He can’t move at all.

‘’Lets finish this dud off. Initiating Comet’s fury sequence.’‘ The green ranger says pushing more controls.
(Comets fury ,Pegasus Finishing move sequence)

We see the Pegasus Thunderzord soaring higher in the air than ever before. It flies until it reaches the highest point of altitude. Sticking it right leg out, the Pegasus plummets down through the earth’s atmosphere until it looks like an Comet. By the time It reaches the monster, Time temporarily stops. It restarts again when the head of the comet breaks the cloud and hits full force into the object.
(End Sequence)

Goatan Fang explodes on impact. After the explosion is seen, The Pegasus jumps hind legs and makes the sound that would strike fear into the most evil overlord of the universe.

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Back on the ground, The released Power rangers try to gather their bearings. We see the green ranger run down towards them. Everyone claps for him and pats him on the back.

Pink Ranger Laughs’‘ So who did The Pegasus hold up against Goatan Fang ?’‘

‘’ Well, All I can say is........ We kicked butt.’‘ Th Green ranger says as the others break into uproarious laughter.

The blue ranger says ‘’ Come on Tom, we need to head to the Command center so we can thaw-out Rocky.’‘

‘’You guys go ahead, I have some business to take care of.’‘ Before anyone can say anything, The Green Ranger Teleports way in a flash. The Power Rangers are left puzzled and bewildered.

PHAETON
07-11-2003, 08:37 AM
Anyone have, replies: I'll take compliments,criticsms they whole nine yards. Your replies are the only thing that keeps me going on the fic.

OriginalRanger
07-11-2003, 11:52 AM
Still going good. I wonder what the Tom is going off to do. Is Marissa next in line to be the Green Ranger? Keep going on this-I can't wait to find out what happens next.

NiGhTRanGeR2003
07-11-2003, 02:25 PM
Great Fan fiction, I got to tell you its hard to capture my attention. You have done a great job. Keep up the work.

PHAETON
07-14-2003, 10:07 AM
Hey readers, this is my fifth installment. The plot thickens in this part and please reply.

enjoy

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Angel Grove Park : 1994 AD

On the off campus are surrounding the school is considered The city park. It’s calm and refreshing atmosphere is nice even after a killer storm. We see Tom wearing his Bad Boy Green attire. He takes the bandana of his head and let the wind flow through his hair. The Green Ranger passes just by the small stream to the large grassy knoll that is sorta hidden from the public. As he steps on the wet grass. We recognize an long black cloak recently soaked by the rain. Tom kneels by it.

‘’You know what’s funny.....’‘Tom says to the cloak ‘’..That you are the closest thing, I have had as an father.’‘

An voice says ‘’Yeah isn’t that ironic.’‘ Tom whips around to see who is the mysterious Intruder is. It is an old Caucasian man wearing shaggy wool clothing. He has long black hair that reaches down to his waist and his face us entirely lit by some sort of eternal flame

Tom asks ‘’Who are you stranger. State your business now !’‘

‘’ I am the Wizard of Deception. My business is to help my son.’‘ Tom pounds his fist into the ground. The green ranger rises points his finger at him.

‘’How dare you call me your son. You created me from Thomas Oliver. I am just an soulless photocopy.’‘ Tom says angrily. The wizard tisks

‘’ I’m afraid so, You see the fact that Thomas Oliver was your Genetic Template nothing more.’‘

Tom sneers ‘’How can you say that ?’‘

‘’Let me start from the Beginning, You know that Tommy White Tiger powers are fueled by something called the white light.....’‘ Tom nods, The Wizard continues ‘’ The ‘Soul-Drive’ of The White Light sole purpose is to erase any Imperfections from the universe. So to be good is to be dangerous.’‘

Tom Interruptus ‘’ How can any person be Good but be also dangerous ?’‘

‘’The White Light is an being who sees the universe as an filthy little imperfect spec, Although no one knows where she is and when she will be unleashed upon the world. Now back to your case, after you were created, you were nothing but an physical shell of Tommy. Since the ‘Programed’ powers that flows in Tommy’s blood was passed on to you. Since you were untainted by any previous powers, your mind would have been fully control by The white light. Even with the Power of the Green Dragon Coin, you would still be driven to wipe out the impurity of the world.’‘

Tom laughs’‘ Okay I get know what a danger I could have been. But why I am not that Danger and how do you fit into this being ?’‘

‘’In order to make sure that you weren’t a threat to our plans. I used some of my own very essence to balance the nessectiey of Good and Evil. You can tap into both singly and but in very needed emergencies. So you may look exactly like Tommy Oliver, but on the inside you are totally different persona.’‘ The Wizard of Deception says wisely.

Tom smiles’‘So if you are My spiritual Father and The powers of the White Light are my mother. Why are you spending eternity in The shadow Realms ?’‘

‘’Extreme, Bad Decisions, That I must repay for. Look the only reason I’m here is to tell you, to don’t make the decisions I made. Don’t follow in my footsteps and That you have something many people’s logic can’t compute. It’s is the Choice.’‘ The word choice fade away with the Wizard Of Deception. After vanishing entirely, Tom takes out an match, after lighting it on the Wizard’s Wand. The Green Ranger burn’s his father’s cloak and then with almost no effort breaks the Wand.

Tom Whispers ‘’ I Won’t.’‘ The lone Green Ranger walks from the burning of his ‘Father’s earthly manifestation of his Sins. Walking in a slow pace, The green Ranger teleports away in an Column of Green energy.

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Mitchell House, Angel Grove : 1994 AD

We see an Yellow Cab pull up to an two story house. It’s architecture is beautiful with Double doors, white pickett fence, six black shudders that perfectly match the blend of Pink and black bricks. We see Melissa wave goodby to the Cab Driver who only asked for an small fee. Confidently, Melissa walks up to the door-way. She is about to ring the Doorbell when, the Doors fly open.

‘’That was weird, Anybody Home ?’‘ Melissa asks loudly, But nobody or nothing answers. The puzzled teen continues to walk, but very cautiously. She enters the family room, we can only see Three people’s back of their heads. The Mitchells are watching some old Disney cartoons on their Televison.

‘’Mr. Mitchell it is me Melissa Earheart , your new foster Child.’‘ The Tv is turned of so suddenly that it startles Marissa. The three members of the Mitchell family rise from the couch. In an almost militant like motion, the family’s left profile can only be seen. Finally all the utter tension is release when the Mitchells turn about face.

All three of their faces are sown entwine with that of an putty patroller. Their left eyes glow an Benevolent red shining across the cold gray faces. We see that their voice boxes has been ripped out entirely and are replaced by an small mechanical device, Right arms are pure clay with Stasis tubes running from the back to the arm, This two is sown together onto human flesh. In place of having two flesh legs, there are two clay leg formation that run down to the ankles to some metallic boots. More stasis tubes run from the boots to the legs of the organisms. Finally on there chest is an small circular pad that has an etched ‘F’ onto it.

Marissa screams at the sight of the hybrid organisms. She tries to run away but fails to get caught by Bill Mitchell. He holds her tight as he makes sure that she doesn’t get away. In a display of an flurry of Ice and Snow, Finster appears. But this isn’t the same old henchman of Rita Repulsa. He is taller, younger. His face is so covers in long white shaggy hair that you can only see his burning red eyes. He wears an and blue suit that has Ice spikes sticking from it. He holds the large Sword of Darkness in his hands.

‘’What did you do to them you Monster.’‘ Marissa asks angrily still trying to get lose of Bill’s death lock.

Finster Cackles ‘’ I’d like you to meet Adam, Lilith and Eve.....’‘ Marissa quickly glances at the three former humans then puts her focus back to Finster, ‘’........ My sweet Marissa, I want you to imagine beings that never sleep or eat. Beings who can morph into any shape or form possible. Beings who can regenerate after any attack and strong enough to pick up automobiles. Beings who have no feelings, The full potential o human brains and all controlled by Me. You see that these three are the first in my new race of humanoids I call ‘’Homo Puttiens’‘ The perfect race for my new world.

‘’So what is your big plan for your ‘new’ world and why do you need me?’‘ Melissa asks, still trying to get away.

‘’By tonight at midnight, After performing grueling rituals. My dream will finally come true, I shall become one with the Morphing Grid . Soon the world will be pure of Human filth and ripe for the taking. For you my dear you will be bait.’‘ Finster laughs as Marissa attempt to scream again. Finster throws some golden powder in her face. The teen falls asleep instantly.

Finster says’‘ Adam. Take the girl to the site of the ritual. I have an letter to write.’‘ Adam nods as he teleports away. Finster begins to cackle tremoundsly as we leave the sight of the Mitchell’s house.

NiGhTRanGeR2003
07-14-2003, 11:29 AM
Great story, Finster being his own master sure adds a twist.

PHAETON
07-16-2003, 10:21 AM
Hey guys here is the sixith installment. The nextr one should be comming in a day or so stay tuned.

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Mojave Desert: 1994 AD

In the once barren land of the Mojave Desert, most of it was replaced by an large launch pad. It strangely resembles that of Cape Canaveral. On the launch pad stands the mighty Pegasus Thunderzord who is not currently piloted, is waiting patiently for The Green Ranger. In the nearby small version of the control center placed low in the mountains could see everything. Inside it is an computer workhouse. Six small computer consoles, are being worked by the six Power Ranger Teens. Billy finally getting everything under control, he wipes the sweat of his brow.

‘’Tom Oliver begin to enter the Shuttle.’‘ Billy commands, as Tom nearly coming from out of no where walks slowly to his Thunderzord. The rangers take pictures pf this moment and the flashes are heard and Seen as well. Instead of doors opening and he walking inside like an normal space shuttle. The Green Ranger in uniform simply teleports inside the cockpit of the zord. After getting himself situated.

Tom Commands ‘’Pegasus Thunderzord Interstellar Mode Initiate.’‘
(Pegasus Thunderzord Interstellar Mode Sequence)

We See The Pegasus stand tall and Still as an statue. It then shoots of like supersonic Jet, we zoom in on it as the abdomen opens up and the legs fold into the abdomen. Next the two wings slid down the back of the animal until the get into a position common for an space shuttle. Finally The Head straightens, becoming the nose and Three formerly hidden boosters appear from the bottom of The newly formed Pegasus Space shuttle flies off through the depths of space. T
(End of sequence)


The Pegasus Thunderzord in Interstellar mode shines every so brightly. The green Ranger fastens himself inside the space shuttle.

‘’Countdown In 5-4-3-2-1, Ignition........ Lift Off.’‘ Billy says as The shuttle blast off through the atmosphere. The Green Ranger shakes violently as the shuttle pierces the atmosphere. The Rangers watch intently as The shuttle finally vanishes from view.

Aisha smirks ‘’Well I Guess were an Six-man team again.’‘ The other five Power Rangers nods

‘’You guys, I haven’t been able to get in contact with Marissa lately. I tried contacting Her foster parents but no one answered.’‘Adam says warily.

Tommy nods ‘’ Will check it out after we....’‘ The entire place blacks out. The Rangers are entirely baffled at what is going on. They find themselves in a large fortress like prison cell that is light by the stars. An thick smoke rises from the cold stone floor.

‘’The Dark Dimension.’‘ Tommy says reminceing Training as the Evil Green Ranger almost an year ago. The smell of Blood and Sweat still lingers in the mid of this warrior. An letter mysteriously falls from nowhere into Adam’s Hands

Adam asks ‘’What is this.’‘ The rangers surround The Black ranger. The letter reads

(Dear, Power Rangers

As you may or may not no, I have captured your prescious Marissa. I have trapped you in that vile Dark Dimension for one reason ‘To halt you’‘. You might be asking yourself, why won’t he just kill us. It is more complicated than that, you see when I ascend to become one with the morphing grid. The longer I stay on earth, the longer everyone connected to the morphing grid will perish. Eventually the earth itself will become an frozen wasteland just like my home planet. Enough about me. When you find away to get out of this place come to the Wharehouse district around Midnight. See you there Rangers

Your Henis Highness

Finster.)

That was the end of the letter. The six rangers scope the place out but isn’t striking abit of luck.. The last thing we see it Adam tearing apart the letter, then throwing it had hard against the misty floor.

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Ryuranger
07-16-2003, 06:47 PM
this is looking good. i love "what if" fics...as well as fics from the mmpr era. good job.

PHAETON
07-17-2003, 11:40 AM
Here is my sixth Installment, you'll love it and you can't even guess what happens next. The Final piece is comming up tommorw. Plese reply and have a great time.

Enjoy

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Warehouse District, Angel Grove: 1994

It is eleven O’ clock at night. The cool night air sweeps both Finster’s and Marissa’s know robed bodies. Finster wears and long black ceremonial robe and Marissa her self is wearing an strapless red dress the falls down to her ankles. Chains shackles her to an nearby chimney As they stand on the three story tall building with an large metal plank stick out of it, Finster closes his book and walks over to her.

‘’Is there something worrying you dear ?’‘ Finster asks

Marissa sneers ‘’ Nothing other than The world is about to end and I will be your queen.’‘ The teen spats in The scientist’s face. Finster reluctantly wipes it off his face.

‘’You will regret that.......’‘ Finster slaps the girl across her face ‘’.....I might just have to kill you first.’‘

Marissa laughs ‘’ Hah, my friends will come and stop you and save the world once again.’‘

‘’I know they will come. But when they try to stop me. My Puttiens will tear them to pieces, and you will have no one to save you.’‘ Finster laughs as he opens his book and walks away from the girl who still struggles to get loose.

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The Dark Dimension: 1994 AD

The power rangers have been busily working for the past five hours. Trying everywhere from their belts to their power coins nothing has worked. The rangers begin to doze off as The Fog of Morpheus rises from the ground.

Kim ponders ‘’What do, we have tried everything and nothings worked. This fog is rising and were getting sleepier by the second.’‘
‘’And with that ‘’Lock’‘ Ray on us constantly. Were basically sitting ducks.’‘Aisha adds on as the other rangers simply nod. For a while all is calm, but Billy jumps up as if something had bitten him.’‘

Billy smirks ‘’ I created an compact Holographic projector last Tuesday.’‘ The blue ranger rumbles through his pocket to find an small disc like object with two buttons on it.

‘’So this Holographic projector is going to reflect the light around us and then use it against the entrapment equipment.’‘ Rocky asks, as billy nods. He pushes the buttons simultaneously, after rising the projector high into the air it starts to work. Light surrounding them streams into the object. Billy then takes the disc and fires it upon the alien device. After seconds of frying the circuits, the machine ignites in fire then brakes into a thousand pieces.

Tommy applauds ‘’ Good job Billy. Guys lets go kick some monster but.’‘ The rangers reply with an
‘Right’ then teleport away in the own specified colored energy columns.

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Chamber of Command: 1994 AD

On the balcony of the large Moon fortress, it’s former sole owner Rita Repulsa is looking at Earth through her Repulascope. The old witch groans and stomps away from the site of the Blue planet furiously.

‘’ZEDD!’‘ Rita Repulsa screams, as her husband is violently awoken after sleeping in his throne. He grabs his staff ands whips it around as if something attacked. He finally realizes it was just his nagging wife.

Lord Zedd sneers ‘’What is it Motor Mouth.’‘

‘’ Finster is about to perform The Hirka Shwa . The formerly lost ancient spell to become one with the Morphing grid.’‘ The witch’s clutches her husbands arm tight

Zedd shakes his head ‘’The idiot He will kill everyone on Earth Including himself. Why are you worried.’‘ Rita playfully hits him across the back of his head.

‘’Because, the backlash will not just kill everyone on earth but all surrounding areas of the planet. Including the moon.’‘ An sick look of horror spreads across Lord Zedd’s face.

Lord Zedd panics ‘’For once your right. Tell Goldar, Baboo, and Squatt to start loading up Serpentera. Do you know of an safe location ?’‘

Rita Repulsa cackles ‘’I know the perfect place.''

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PHAETON
07-17-2003, 11:50 AM
Here is my seventh Installment, you'll love it and you can't even guess what happens next. The Final piece is comming up tommorw. Plese reply and have a great time.

Enjoy

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Warehouse District, Angel Grove: 1994

It is eleven O’ clock at night. The cool night air sweeps both Finster’s and Marissa’s know robed bodies. Finster wears and long black ceremonial robe and Marissa her self is wearing an strapless red dress the falls down to her ankles. Chains shackles her to an nearby chimney As they stand on the three story tall building with an large metal plank stick out of it, Finster closes his book and walks over to her.

‘’Is there something worrying you dear ?’‘ Finster asks

Marissa sneers ‘’ Nothing other than The world is about to end and I will be your queen.’‘ The teen spats in The scientist’s face. Finster reluctantly wipes it off his face.

‘’You will regret that.......’‘ Finster slaps the girl across her face ‘’.....I might just have to kill you first.’‘

Marissa laughs ‘’ Hah, my friends will come and stop you and save the world once again.’‘

‘’I know they will come. But when they try to stop me. My Puttiens will tear them to pieces, and you will have no one to save you.’‘ Finster laughs as he opens his book and walks away from the girl who still struggles to get loose.

***********

The Dark Dimension: 1994 AD

The power rangers have been busily working for the past five hours. Trying everywhere from their belts to their power coins nothing has worked. The rangers begin to doze off as The Fog of Morpheus rises from the ground.

Kim ponders ‘’What do, we have tried everything and nothings worked. This fog is rising and were getting sleepier by the second.’‘
‘’And with that ‘’Lock’‘ Ray on us constantly. Were basically sitting ducks.’‘Aisha adds on as the other rangers simply nod. For a while all is calm, but Billy jumps up as if something had bitten him.’‘

Billy smirks ‘’ I created an compact Holographic projector last Tuesday.’‘ The blue ranger rumbles through his pocket to find an small disc like object with two buttons on it.

‘’So this Holographic projector is going to reflect the light around us and then use it against the entrapment equipment.’‘ Rocky asks, as billy nods. He pushes the buttons simultaneously, after rising the projector high into the air it starts to work. Light surrounding them streams into the object. Billy then takes the disc and fires it upon the alien device. After seconds of frying the circuits, the machine ignites in fire then brakes into a thousand pieces.

Tommy applauds ‘’ Good job Billy. Guys lets go kick some monster but.’‘ The rangers reply with an
‘Right’ then teleport away in the own specified colored energy columns.

********
Chamber of Command: 1994 AD

On the balcony of the large Moon fortress, it’s former sole owner Rita Repulsa is looking at Earth through her Repulascope. The old witch groans and stomps away from the site of the Blue planet furiously.

‘’ZEDD!’‘ Rita Repulsa screams, as her husband is violently awoken after sleeping in his throne. He grabs his staff ands whips it around as if something attacked. He finally realizes it was just his nagging wife.

Lord Zedd sneers ‘’What is it Motor Mouth.’‘

‘’ Finster is about to perform The Hirka Shwa . The formerly lost ancient spell to become one with the Morphing grid.’‘ The witch’s clutches her husbands arm tight

Zedd shakes his head ‘’The idiot He will kill everyone on Earth Including himself. Why are you worried.’‘ Rita playfully hits him across the back of his head.

‘’Because, the backlash will not just kill everyone on earth but all surrounding areas of the planet. Including the moon.’‘ An sick look of horror spreads across Lord Zedd’s face.

Lord Zedd panics ‘’For once your right. Tell Goldar, Baboo, and Squatt to start loading up Serpentera. Do you know of an safe location ?’‘

Rita Repulsa cackles ‘’I know the perfect place.''

*********

PHAETON
07-18-2003, 11:33 AM
Hey readers, this is the finall installment of this episode. I'd like to thank everyone who posted for getting me through this. You will love this to death.

Enjoy

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Warehouse District: 1994 AD


The columns of energy land right outside of the gates of the District. We can see the expecting Puttiens guarding Finster jump from building. The hybrid’s land on one feet an prepare for an fight. The rangers whip into their battle stances.

Adam says ‘’I see Marissa on the top of the building, I’ll get her and stop Finster. Tommy you take the father, Rocky and Billy I believe you can take the Mother and Aisha, Kim take out the daughter.’‘ The team nods in agreement with Adam’s decision. The rangers take their power morphers out of their backs.

‘’IT’S MORPHIN TIME !’‘

(Mighty Morphin Power Rangers Mid Season 2 Morphing sequences)

The newly morphed power rangers slam through the gates of the Warehouse District.

‘’Power Sword’‘
‘’Power Lance’‘
‘’Power Daggers’‘
‘’Power Bow’‘
‘’Saba’‘ The white ranger finishes off the Rangers call fro their weapons. The evil puttiens slam into the Rangers. Everyone takes the correct target, Pink and yellow vs Eve, Red and Blue vs Lilith and The white ranger vs. Adam. The Black Ranger sneakily runs towards the building keep to the shadows. Meanwhile Finster glances at his watch and smiles.

‘’It is time....’‘The old scientist opens his spell book. He reads from it ‘’...... Omook Kanna Siman Pakat. Noe Woto Erthe Mada Ledl Suyb flid. Fallen monster energies of the past. Make Me one with the power of the MORPHING GRID.’‘ The ground begins to tremble, lighting and thunder strikes. In an awesome display of evil power Souls of dead monsters swarm around Finster, they soon plunge into his body one by one. Last but not least, the spirt of Goatan Fang slams into the scientist body. Finster screams as his body glows an brilant light. In a flash Finster steps out of the light. Has been transformed into an Armor simallar to Goldar’s in appearance, but Jet black and shining silver. Int the center of the armor is an large orb green grid laid on it. Finster wears an crown that resembles Lokar’s Hair.

Finster Booms ‘’Rangers your judgement day is at hand. You soon will perish.’‘ The new Finster throws down an beam of pure energy. It sends the five of them flying through the air and with the Puttiens hot on their trails.

‘’Power Axe’‘ The Black Ranger seeks up on the unexpecting Finster. He slashes him right on his left shoulder. After taking the blade out of the shoulder, Finster regenerates

Finster laughs ‘’Well if it isn’t the lover boy. As you can see your darling is quite alright for now. But if you wanna fight, I’m wright their with you.’‘ Finster summons the Evil Sword of Darkness. The Black Ranger Yells as the weapons clash in array. Finster shows excellent swordsmanship but The black Ranger meets him at every turn.

‘’Your pretty good, for a minion.’‘ The Black ranger mocks as Finster yells in anger and slashes him across the chest sending the ranger down.

Finster laughs ‘’You can’t stop me ranger, Even if you stop me your world will be destroyed unless a paradox stops it. I don’t see any those around do you.’‘ Finster readies to stab the Black Ranger. Thinking fast The ranger kicks the foe in his private area, causing Finster to wail in pain. The ranger quickly grabs his power axe then converts it into blaster mode.

‘’Don’t you ever get tired of talking.’‘ An blast of pure black ranger energy is fired at Finster. It makes the target, Finster furiously summons a beam of green electricity it meets the second blast if the power axe. The power struggle last only for a few seconds, An fiery explosion from both blast knocks both representative of their feet. The Black Ranger looks up to see Marissa eyes pointing to Finster spell book, which is still giving off energy to him. The Black Ranger raises his axe as he stands on his feet.

With one mighty swing, the axe caves down upon the spell book. Finster yells, as his power source disappears in a flash of Red energy. Finster still wearing his armor jumps towards the ranger, he clutches the ranger with his wright hand and raises him off of his feet.

Finster laughs ‘’You may have destroyed my Spell Book, But I still am the one with all the muscles and the power of the morphing grid.’‘ The grip of Finster’s hand grows tighter by the second.

The Black Ranger struggles ‘’That’s wright Finster, but your not using your Brain power.’‘ The shocked finster doesn’t expect the lighting action of The Black Rangers blade blaster being fired upon him. It lands point blank on the villain’s orb, which shatters upon impact.

Finster screams ‘’ This can’t be Happening to Meeeeeeeeeeeeee!’‘ Finster whole body disperses into dust. The only thing left over from Finster is the Green Grid which is growing at an enormous rate. The black ranger hurries tho break Marissa’s chains, the grid changes the landscape of the warehouse district turning it to an gothic wasteland version of itself. Suddenly all six of the ranger’s powers disappears into nothing.

Marissa says ‘’ Adam powers, the district. The backlash has started to take place.

‘’I’ m afraid so, Zordon will think of someth....’‘ Adam answers but gets rudely Interrupted.

Marissa smiles ‘’ No, Finster said only an paradox can stop the backlash. Since I was born and raised in The 18th Century and know live in the 20th, I am the most likely candidate for an paradox.’‘

‘’I love you to much Marissa, please don’t do it. You are Talking about suicide.’‘ Adam says trying to convince Marissa. She passionately puts her hands on his face clearing the tears from his eyes.

Marissa says ‘’ Maybe, But I need you to be strong. Because I know in my heart that when I look at you I see my love making a difference one day. I don’t want you mourning forever for me, move on and shine for this world my little star. I love you with all my heart, but it is time for me to save the world.’‘ Marissa runs to the ledge. She beautifully leaps into the air diving straight in the heart of the grid. We zoom in on her body letting the energy soar through her body, the view the fades onto white.

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Angel Grove: 1795 AD

We are in a graveyard in the year 1795. We pass up all the crude Tombstones, then we come to one particular tombstone which looks like it was made in the late 20th century. It has an huge bouquet of roses circling it and a black power ranger morpher with an charred Mastodon coin nestled on the top of it, the stone reads

‘’Here lies Marissa Earheart: 1789-1994: She was the light of your time and the savior of ours.’‘

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Spiderbase: 1994 AD

On the technologically advanced headquarters of Count Dregon. We see and man sitting in a captain’s seat. He wears an pure gold face mask witch strangely illuminates the bright flashing of buttons among the murk blackness which settled here. And green suited fellow possessing an Ranger like helmet with an simallar second head protruding from it.

‘’Count Dregon, or readings have discovered an unidentified zord. Within this zord and human possessing The green Dragonzord power coin.’‘

Count Dregon commands ‘’Doubleface, capture the zord and for The power ranger....... Reprogram him for our commands.’‘ Doubleface bows to his master.

‘’Right away Sir.’‘ The Servant walks away in hurry to do his master’s bidding. We can assume an smile of joy spreads underneath the evil golden mask of Count Dregon.

OriginalRanger
07-19-2003, 01:32 PM
Sorry I'm late on commenting; I just got back from a vacation. Very good story.

Re: the Green Ranger. Having him as containing both good and evil elements is an interesting way to give him his own identity and differentiate him from the "real" Tommy. The idea that the White Ranger powers are fueled by a being who sees the universe as imperfect and thus has a negative side is another clever idea.

Re: Finster. Nice way to use a villian who they haven't done too much with.

Re: Marissa. Sad to see her go-I always saw her as being a great regular character or even ranger, but she went out as a true heroine. Well done there.

Overall, this was a great read and one of my favorites. Nice work.

PHAETON
03-21-2004, 02:31 PM
Anyone else have any comments

The Original Green Ranger
03-22-2004, 05:33 PM
great man. I loved it.