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BlueFireStorm
07-06-2003, 03:48 PM
The back drop of space and it's billion sparkling jewels serves perfectly to enhance the brilliance of the Earth. Swirling clouds are seen moving throughout the planet's atmosphere, the continental lanscapes are easily seen, the vast ocean waters shape the boundaries of each land mass. We zoom in through the atmosphere towards the continent of Europe. A small village is seen with different people, dressed in late B.C. era, walking through the streets. Above the village in the mountains was a fairly large castle. As we enter in through a nearby window we find a strange tall being wearing a black robe. His skin was pale and purple, the hands were wrinkled and had sharp black claws. The being looked out over the village and cackled loudly.

???- For too long I have waited for the time and opportunity to strike at humanity for what they did to me. They will be made to pay with their very souls, and with this spell I shall have their souls in my control.

The strange figure holds up a vile of purple liquid. He walks over to a large black cast iron cauldron that was already boiling with other ingredients. As he starts pouring the purple liquid into the mixture the cauldron began gurgling and bubbling with smoke and shake tremendous.

???- Yes yes the spell is beginning to take shape and nothing share be able to stand in my way. Now to cast the soul releasing spell and capture every soul on the planet.

He walks to the window that faced the village and held up both his claws into the air. HIs entire body begins to glow with a purple aura all around him. Outside the sky began to darken with black billowing storm clouds. Lightning bolts began darting through out the atmosphere. People below in the village began running with fear and started heading for their homes or some shelter. Suddenly a great gust of wind began blowing through the village turning things over, blowing rooftops away, and even some of the villagers away too.

???- SOULS OF MAN I SHALL CONSUME TO SPELL OUT MAN'S ETERNAL DOOM RELEASED FROM YOUR BODY THE SOUL IS FREE TO BE OBEDIENT AND SUBMISSIVE TO...

Before the dark figure had a chance to finish the spell, the door to his chamber burst opened and in walked a medium height Caucasian female. She had red fiery hair and a blue robe with dark blue gloves and boots. In her hand she held a small wand with a clear pearl at the top of it.

???- Ahh Arrian, I see you've come to try and stop me.

Arrian- Try isn't the word, I am going to stop you Lord Nephesh.

The strange being in the black robe, pulled the hood off his head to reveal a pale purple being with straight black eyes and sharp fangs in his mouth. On his head were two black horns that curled over his head and around on the side of his head.

Lord Nephesh- Really Arrian, you don't actually think that you have any chance at defeating me do you?

Arrian- You're not getting your hands on the souls of humanity.

Lord Nephesh- Let's see you try and stop me?

Nephesh drew back his hand and fired a purple energy ball at Arrian. She somersaulted out of the way as it blew out chunks of a nearby wall. Arrian quickly rolled to her feet and spin kicked Nephesh straight to the side of his head, side kicked him in his chest, and uppercutted him with her wand. Her attacks caused him to stagger against the wall. When he wiped away the trickle of blood on the side of his mouth, he looked up and began laughing at her.

Lord Nephesh- Is that all you got you little imputent fool!! Let me give you something to really awe about.

Nephesh extended his right arm to side and began surging purple energy down his arm towards his hand. He hurled a bolt of energy at Arrian blasting her across the room and through a wooden table. She slowly began to get to her feet, but Nephesh grabbed her by her robe and threw her across the floor against the wall in front of the window. As she got to her feet she tried to blast Nephesh with her wand, but he knocked it out of her hand and back slapped her across the face. He then grabbed her by her throat and held her through the window preparing to drop her. Although she struggled, she couldn't break his grip from around her neck.

Lord Nephesh- I have to admit you put up a real good fight back there, but it was all for nothing. Now you must die Arrian and know that you were never able to save the souls of humanity. Do you have any last words to say?

Arrian- Yeeeah......kiss off.

Arrian raised her right hand towards the sky and caused it to glow a dark blue aura. It attracted a lightning bolt that streaked through the clouds and blasted Nephesh off of her. The lightning blast hurled Nephesh across the room and into his bubbling cauldron. When he landed he brgan to writh and splash around screaming in agony. The ingedients he mixed plus the special potion began to extract his soul from his body. A purple energy form of his sould began floating in the middle of the air along with the other souls that he had captured through out the years. Arrian quickly reached for her wand and enclosed Nephesh's soul in a special energy field.

Arrian- I told you I was going to defeat you.

She placed the energy field containing Nephesh in a special golden jar and closed it. Using her wand she teleported to a cave entrance in the mountains and went as far as she could go inside. When she had reached a very deep depth of the cave she placed the golden jar in a small slot in the wall. While sealing up the wall, the jar began glowing a strange symbol of words on the side and Nephesh's voice could be heard inside.

Lord Nephesh- I shall return......you have not seen the last of meeeeeee.

BlueFireStorm
07-06-2003, 03:55 PM
(Opening Credits)

Drum beats begin to sound as the sceen travels through space heading straight for the sun. Instead of running into it, the view carrys us across the surface where sun flares can be seen erupting into space in front of us. The first sun flare that flies up shows a light skinned Latino girl with long brown hair and the caption in pink below her reads "Christina Vidal as Jaime Velez"; another flare erupts in front of us and this time shows a Caucaisan boy with short brown hair with streaks and his caption, which is in blue, reads "Fred Meyers as Chris Duncan"; moving further across the sun another flare erupts showing a Caucaian girl with long straight brown hair and the caption below her in pink reads "Hiliary Duff as Kelly Wilson"; the next flare is of a young African American boy, with light brown complexion and short black wavy hair, has a caption in green that reads "Gary Leroi Gray as Jonathon Thomas"; finally one last flare shows another African American boy, older than the last one with dark complexion and corn rolls in his hair, with a caption in red that says "Nick Cannon as Adrian Thomas" The view flys away from the sun as a massive burst of flames erupt towards the screen revealing the title "Power Rangers: Fire Storm"


Act One: Scene One: Crystal Lake

NARRATOR:
Two thousand years have passed since Arrian trapped Lord Nephesh in the golden jar and sealed it up in the mountains of Eastern Europe. Things have changed dramatically throughout the whole Earth, be it both good or bad. Much of the civilization has moved across the large body of water, which is today called the Atlantic Ocean, to a brand new world in and of it's own. Our story takes us to a city on the Atlantic Coast of the North American continent to a fairly large city known as Crystal Lake. This metropolis is one of the continents crown jewels, especially around the fall and spring times. As we travel along the city's busy rushing streets, we cars in bumper to bumper traffic. Down the middle of the traffic is the one that you're looking for.

[While the cars are slowly moving through traffic, a red and black Yakuza motorbike is crusing along the medium. It was a young african american male. Along with his black helmet covering his head he wore a red and black striped shirt with a white tank top underneath, some khaki pants, and some black Tims. He had his black bookbag strapped to his back]

NARRATOR:
Yep that's me all right, the name's Adrian Duncan, I'm a Senior at Crystal Lake High. The reason I can't wait for these people to move along is because I'm already late as it is for my American Literature class. All right so I over slept last night from hanging out with some friends of mine, I know I can't be late for school again.

[Adrian zooms through traffic trying to hurry and get to class as fast as he can. On top of a building a strange figure in a black robe stands and watchas Adrian ride through the streets on his motorbike. The person puts their hand on their chin, as if thinking that Adrian would be a considered for something]

???:
Hmmm, I wonder.

[Adrian is finally able to turn off the busy main street on to a less conjested one that heads straight for his school. While he was riding along a strange voice spoke to him]

A VOICE:
The souls....of humanity.

ADRIAN:
What? Huh? Who said that? Come on Adrian pull yourself together. Ever since you came back from that trip to Europe you've been trippin.

[Adrian rode on further tryin to dismiss the voice as the wind blowin by him. He was approaching an intersection when he heard the voice again]


A VOICE:
The souls....of humanity.

[Again Adrian looked around to see where the voice was coming from, he still didn't see anything or anyone around him. He also didn't see that he failed to stop for the red light at the intersection and plowed right through hitting an on coming car. When his motorbike impacted the side of the black stretched Limo, it threw Adrian through the air on to the grassy medium of the highway. Fortunately he wasn't harmed and was able to get back to his feet. No one was hurt and no damage was done, the person in the limo promised not to press charges if Adrian would agree to pay more attention to what he's doing. Adrian stood on the side of the road beside his bike trying to figure out where the voice came from that caused him to not pay attention to the traffic light. The figured that was watching him earlier was still watching him closely.

???:
I feel something is about to happen, and this young one must be ready to face whatever it is that's coming. If he doesn't destroy the evil I feel coming, it woll consume him and everyone he knows and loves.


Scene Two: Crystal Lake High School

[A large red bricked, two story building, sitting on about 2 acres of land is Crystal Lake High. In the parking lot, where both students and faculty park, we see Adrian finally pulling up to the front of building and parking in the motorbike section. After chaining his bike down, he quickly races into the building to head for class. He trys his best not to get caught by the hall monitor Dr. Joyce Lipskin, whom everyone says will give you detention in a heart beat. Adrian quickly makes it to his locker and places his bookbag inside and takes out the books he needs for his first two classes. He closes his locker and is about to head into his American Lit. class when a familiar voice calls out to him]

???:
Well Mr. Thomas I see again you can't seem to get to class, let alone school, on time. Do you want me to assign you detention until you actually do graduate?

ADRIAN:
Hi Dr. Lipskin, no we don't want to be assigned detention.

DR. LIPSKIN:
Why can't you be more like your younger brother Jonathon? You're suppose to set the example, now you either shape up or detention will be your home away from home. Now get to class and I do not want to hear another bad report about you again.

ADRIAN:
Yes Dr. Lipskin.

[Dr. Lipskin turned and walked down the hall to her officer. She didn't notice him making a frustrated face behind her back. He finally went into class and made his way to the back of the class where his seat was. He sat next to two of his friends that he hung out with. To his left was a Casucasian male with short brown hair with streaks. He wore a blue Nautica shirt, some black pants and blue and white Nikes; this was Christopher Duncan, but most of the people just called him Chris. Over to Adrian's right was Caucasian female with short brown hair. She was wearing a black and gold cheerleaders uniform, since she was the Co-Captain of the Cheerleading Squad; her name was Kelly Wilson]

KELLY:
I'm glad you decided to fit classtime into your busy schedule.

ADRIAN:
Oh you got jokes? Don't make me get on your outdated hairstyle.

KELLY:
Don't even go there Adrian, you know I'm suppose to go and get my hari done today.

ADRIAN:
Isn't that nice? So what have I missed so far?

CHRIS:
Just that we have a report to do by next week on a horror story that we know of. I think I might do the Stephen King novel "Pet Cemetery". What about you guys, got any ideas on what story you thinking about choosing?

KELLY:
I think I might do the story of "Carrie". I want to do a report on the mistreatment of others because of differences. What about you Adrian?

ADRIAN:
I don't know, I might do "Raven" and dig deep into that story and find its true meaning. We're still meeting the others at the The Hot Spot this afternoon right?

KELLY: You better believe it, I heard they're thinking about having live bands there. I might just go and see what the band has to offer.

BlueFireStorm
07-06-2003, 03:59 PM
Scene Three: Athens, Greece

[The majestic mountain peaks that dart across the landscape of the nation of Greece can sometimes take your breath away. Too bad that you can't see them, being that its the middle of the night. The only lights that are visible are street lights that are along the side of the road. We enter the nearest city, which happens to be not only the largest city in the country of Greece, but also the country's capital; this is Athens. Many mystical and mythological stories and tales have been composed about this very city. Today is a bustling port city with lushful gardens and excellent museums. One of the greatest museums in all of Athens is the focal point of our story. We travel over the skyline of the city and find a large buildng that looks like it had been standing since World War II. Inside we find two stationed guards watching a small television. They unaware that in the skylight of the building, two gentlemen are about to change the way life on Earth was going to be lived. One of the robbers uses a glass cutter to cut an opening to allow him to drop a rope to the floor. Soon they both began sliding down the gracefully, as not to draw attention. The other robber took out small black paint filled ballons and tossed one at a security camera blacking out the view. The first robber took out a small dagger and threw it straight at the security box and caused the alarm system to cut off. They both landed on the floor and took out their napsacks and started taking anything valuable that they wanted]

ROBBER ONE:
This has to be one of our best heists ever.

ROBBER TWO:
You can say that again. Just imagine what kind of money we can get for all these priceless artifacts.

ROBBER ONE:
I'm guessing over half a million dollars.

[As they continued to stash away the stolen artifacts into their sacks, the first robber noticed a golden jar. It was nice and polshed and glimmering in the ceiling light. He walked up to it and opened the casing and held it in his hands]

ROBBER ONE:
Hey come here, I think we just may have hit the jack pot.

[The other robber came to where he was and saw the jar too. Both of their eyes were wide open. They couldn't believe how precious and valuable it looked. All they could do was look at each other]

BOTH ROBBERS:
We've hit the million dollar mark.

ROBBER TWO:
Hey look at this strange writing on the side. I wonder what it says?

ROBBER ONE:
Let me see here.

[The first robber began looking at the inscriptions and started reading off the different meanings of the writings]

ROBBER ONE:
Powers of darkness heed my call The day has come that good shall fall In this tomb no more deceased No longer imprisoned I am released.

[Silence]

ROBBER TWO:
Hey nothing happened.

ROBBER ONE:
Why, were you expecting something to happen?

ROBBER TWO:
Well maybe.

ROBBER ONE:
Hate to disappoint you but...

[Suddenly the jar began to shake and rattle around in the robber's hand. It soon began to glow brightly almost brightening the entire room. Becasue he was scared at what was happening, the robber placed the jar down. As soon as the jar was down, the lid burst off straight into the ceiling and a purple energized aura zoomed out into the room. It started to circle around the robbers and then zoomed out of the window flying into the night sky. The two robbers couldn't believe their eyes at what they saw. Just as they were about to escape out the skylight, they turned to see both security guards standing with their guns pointed right at them]

SECURITY GUARD ONE:
Well well look what we have here. Its a good thing that it was time for my nightly patrol around the building.

ROBBER ONE:
What was that thing back there?

ROBBER TWO:
I don't know, but whatever it is we don't know anything about it.

[The two robbers were being taken into custody, but they couldn't help be look up into the sky and be reminded about the strange aura that escape the museum. They began to wonder to themselves, what have they unleashed into the world]


Commercial Break:



Act Two: Scene One: The Hot Spot Rec. Center

[With school being out for the day, the students are seen heading for a large white building sitting on the beach facing the ocean. On the front of the building in big black letters was the name of the establishment, THE HOT SPOT. Inside there was all kind of recreational activities going on for the kids to do. Some were playing some hoops on the basketball court, practicing some batting swings in the cage, practicing martial art moves in class, and even playing some games in the large arcade room. In anothe part of the building was a small cafe and study room where some kids go when they just want to hang out with their friends and talk and enjoy their food. Here is where we find Adrian, Kelly, and Chris]

ADRIAN:
Its a good thing they opened the Hot Spot in time for school to start. I don't think there's any other place I'd rather go than here.

KELLY:
You can say that again, I especially like Jose's strawberry smoothies.

ADRIAN:
Is that really it or is that you're glad to see Jose again?

KELLY:
Don't make me hurt you. Hey it seems that you have a secret lover.

ADRIAN:
What are you talking about?

KELLY:
I'm talking about that person wearing that black hood that keeps looking at you. In fact they've had their eyes on your since you came in here.

[When Adrian looks towards the Cafe counter, he sees the black hooded figure sitting staring straight at him. He turned around and shook his head as if to say that the person was weird]

ADRIAN:
Whoever that person is they really need to find some help.

KELLY:
Well aren't you going to go over and say something to them. The way that their staring over here is very rude.

ADRIAN:
Just ignore it, I'm sure they will just walk away.

[When they both turn to see if the stranger was still sitting at the counter staring, they found that they were indeed gone]

ADRIAN:
See, just ignore them and they will go away.

CHRIS:
I wonder where Jaime is?

ADRIAN:
Yeah, I wanna find out if Jonathon enjoyed his new school. I know it must be real hard having to move from another city and attend a school where you don't know anybody.

CHRIS:
You can say that again, I remember when I first came to Crystal Lake High. I felt like a fish out of water.

KELLY:
Oh look here they come now.

[Through the cafe entrance walked a tall Latino girl and beside her a short African American male. The Latino was caramel skinned with long brown hair. She was wearing a blue jean jacket with a pink shirt that said "Bad Girl" on the front, some blue jean pants and white Nikes; this was Jaime Velez. The African American was brown skinned with short curly hair. He wore a black and green striped shirt with black jeans and black Tims; he was Adrian's younger brother Jonathon. They both attend a different high school across town called Crystal Beach High]

JONATHON:
Hey bro what's happening?

ADRIAN:
Nothin man how was your first day at your new school?

JONATHON:
It was better than I had expected. The teachers were nice, the students there really know how to have fun. I can't wait to start the next day.

JAIME:
Yeah which will be in the next three days.

ADRIAN:
What are you talking about?

JAIME:
Tell him what really happened today?

[Jonathon stood silent]

JAIME:
Fine, I'll tell him. Today we had an assembly in the auditorium and home boy here pulled the alarm causing the sprinkler system inside to go off.

CHRIS:
What happened?

JAIME:
Let's just say before it was all said a done, we had a room filled with drinched freshmen and sophmores.

JONATHON:
You make it sound like I set the school on fire.

ADRIAN:
Jon, this was the very reason mom sent your out here. You were causing trouble at the other school. Dad is really going to hit the ceiling over this one.

JONATHON:
He won't if you don't tell him.

ADRIAN:
Oh you're not dragging me into trouble with you. Come on so we can tell him while he's in a good mood. That way if he gets mad, he won't kill you, he'll just slam you in the wall. I'll catch you guys tomorrow.

[Adrian and Jonathon both left the Hot Spot and got on his motobike and rode off down the street heading for home]

BlueFireStorm
07-06-2003, 04:03 PM
Scene Two: Hidden Dimension

[We find ourselves standing in a white glowing chamber. Computer equipment were blinking lights everywhere, monitor screens were on showin different scens all around the Earth, and five energy tubes that was holding five colored crystals inside. The hooded figure sits down at one of the computer consoles and removes the hood to reveal an unaged Arrian. She begins typing in some instructions and locates Adrian and Jonathon on the monitor screens and see that they were almost home]

ARRIAN:
I can't believe that I've lived over 2000 years just to look over the descendants of supposed great warriors. I know for a certain that Lord Nephesh is coming back but I have got to prepare five people to accept the power of the Fire Crystals.

[Without warning a sharp pain came to Arrian's head and caused her to fall to the floor. She slowly stood to her feet holding her head]

ARRIAN:
That feeling could mean only one thing and that is Nephesh has somehow been released from his jar and is now heading in this direction. I don't have much time to waste.

[Arrian quickly gets back on feet and rushes to the five energy tubes and retrieves the red and blue Fire Crystals and places them in a small pouch on her waste. She then takes her small wand and reopens the transport portal and steps through. Seconds later the portal entrance closes behind her. On the monitoring screen the view of Adrian and Jonathon arriving home on Adrian's motorbike, changes to that of the purple energized aura of Lord Nephesh's soul zooming across the open Atlantic Ocean. Over the monitor his loud laughter could heard]


Scene Three: The Thomas House

[Adrian and Jonathon pull up in the driveway of their father's house. Adrian parks his motorbike right next to his father's dark green Mercedes. They both walked into their father two story suburban house and went straight into the living room where a tall dark skinned African American man was sitting reading his newpaper. He wore a blue dress shirt with a black tie and black dress pants. As the two boys walked into the room, the man looked up at them both away from his paper.

MR. THOMAS:
So Jon, how was your first day at your new high school?

JONATHON:
Oh dad there was so much great things that happened today that I'll wait to tell you later.

ADRIAN:
You might as well tell him now, no sense in keeping it away from any longer.

JONATHON:
Shut up, I'll tell him when I'm good and ready to.

MR. THOMAS:
Tell me what, I suggest you tell it to me now.

ADRIAN:
You tell him or I will, and I ain't afraid of your little threats.

JONATHON:
I got in trouble today at school for pulling a practical joke in an assembly.

MR. THOMAS:
What did you actually do?

JONATHON:
Some of the other guys in my class dared me to pull the fire alarm. I didn't want to think that the new guy was soft, so I pulled it and everyone the auditorium was soaking wet from the sprinkling system.

MR. THOMAS:
What has gotten into you. Your mother and I thought that by sending you out here to stay with me you'd change your habit. Until I can come up with a reasonable punishment go up to your room.

JONATHON:
But dad, if you let me explain what happened.

MR. THOMAS:
I don't want to hear it, just go to your room now.

JONATHON:
Yes sir, thanks alot, some big brother you are.

[Jonathon runs up the stairs to his bedroom and closed the door behind him. Adrian went into the room and sat down and placed his bookbag on the sofa]

MR. THOMAS:
What am I going to do with your little brother?

ADRIAN:
Don't be too hard on dad, he's trying to get use to a whole new surrounding.

MR. THOMAS:
I just wish he would give it a chance and just be himself. Why don't you go up and talk to him, he'll talk to you quicker than he would to me.

ADRIAN:
All right dad, I'll see what I can do. First, I am starving, what they had in lunch today was left over meatloaf and I was not going for that.

[Adrian got up and went into the kitchen to fix himself something to eat]


Scene Four: Jonathon's Bedroom

[We soon enter a room colored dark blue with different music artists posters hanging. Jonathon had a chester drawer next to his door, beside that was his work station with his DELL computer and printer were set up. Next to his bed was a small night stand that had his small t.v. and alarm clock. Jonathon was laying on his bed with his arms behind his head. He continued looking up at the ceiling still upset about his brother ratting him out]

JONATHON:
I can't believe Adrian squealed on me. I wish mom never sent me out here.

[Jonathon turned over on his side and prepared to drift off to sleep, but a flash of light caught his eye. When he turned to see where the flash came from, he saw Arrian standing in his room in front of him. He got ready to scream for his brother and father, but Arrian held her hand to his mouth to kis mouth to silence him]

ARRIAN:
Shhh, I'm not here to harm you. If you promise not to scream or make any sudden noise to alert your family I will sxplain my being here.

[Jonathon shook his head in agreement. Arrian slowly lowered her hand from his mouth}

JONATHON:
Who are you and what are you doing in my bedroom?

ARRIAN:
My name is Arrian, I am a sorceress. The reason for my being here is because 2000 years ago I battled against a powerful wizard named Lord Nephesh. He tried to trap every soul on the Earth until I stopped him and trapped him in a golden jar. I then sealed the jar ina cave hoping for it to never to be found again. Somehow he did get released and he is on his way here to this country.

JONATHON:
Why come here?

ARRIAN:
I guess he's searching for me so he won't be hindered again when he tries his soul entrapment spell.

JONATHON:
What's so big about this soul entrapment spell anyway?

ARRIAN:
it has the power and ability to trap any soul of a human being and causes it to do whatever he commands it to do.

JONATHON:
What does any of this have to do with me?

ARRIAN:
Today I was watching you, your brother, and his friends and I was seeking out warriors how have what it takes to obtain the force it would take to defeat this powerful sorcerer. I overheard what you did at your school today and it shows that you are not intimidated to take risks, thats why this powerful Fire Crystal has been glowing ever since I saw you.

[Arrian pulls out the blue crystal and holds in the middle of the air as it begins filling the room with its blue aura. Jonathon was awed at the splender of the crystal. Suddenly without notice Jonathon's door opens and Adrian stands with amazement at what he sees. He soon recognizes Arrian as the hood stranger that was staring at him at the Hot Spot earlier]

ADRIAN;
Ok now this is getting too weird.


Commercial Break:

BlueFireStorm
07-06-2003, 04:08 PM
Act Three: Scene One: Downtown Crystal Lake

[In a large corporate office building, we walk into a boardroom meeting. The interior of the room was all black, from the black leather chairs to the black mable table. Sitting around it were corporate executives wearing black business suits. At the head of the meeting table, standing with his cigar in hand, was the CEO of the company. The company he owned, and it had business ownership of practically the entire city itself. He was a tall Caucasian with long brown hair, he had a beard and mustache. HIs suits were tailor made and always solid black. To the people who knew him around the city he was satan, the devil, snake in the trash, but to the corporate world he was J.W. Steelman. He was standing up from his chair to continue his meeting of the executives]

J.W.:
Gentlemen, you're wondering why you all are here. Its because there is a piece of property that needs developing and instead there is a stinking youth center!!

Executive 1:
Sir, the center keeps the kids out of trouble and gives them something to do while they're out of school.

J.W.:
If they want something to do let them get a job like the rest of America. While they're so busy having fun, its costing me a lot of money.

Executive 1:
Don't you think you're being a little harsh sir? I mean they are just children and weren't you a child at one time?

[When he made the statement, Mr. Steelman had his back turned and was looking towards the window. He slowly turned around and looked straight at the executive and beamed his eyes straight at him]

J.W.:
What did you just ask me?

Executive 1:
It was just a suggestion?

J.W.:
Well let me suggest this to you. Unless you get me that property to redevelope it into a corporate office park, you and your family are going to be evicted from your plush home in the suburbs. That goes for all of you!! Now get out there and get me that beach front property!! Now get out.

[Soon everyone of the executives began grabbing their briefcases and heading out the door. Once everyone had left, a slinder Asian American walked in and stood before Mr. Steelman. She wore a short white dress that came down to her knees and white high heels. Her hair was long and black, she wore a strand over her left eye, her name was Karra]

KARRA:
Mr. Steelman is everything all right in here?

J.W.:
Everything is fine Karra. I think I need me some wine. Pour me a glass of the red stuff.

KARRA:
Yes sir, oh I almost forgot, there is a strange hooded man standing outside waiting to see you.

J.W.:
Who is it?

KARRA:
I don't know, I asked him his name and he wouldn't tell me.

J.W.:
It's probably some nosy reporter trying to get an exclusive story. Send him away and tell him I can't see him today.

KARRA:
Yes sir.

[Karra was about to head for the door, when a force knocked if off its hinges and threw it against the wall in the room. In walked the strange hooded stranger that Karra told Mr. Steelman about. He turned towards them both]

???:
I am neither a reporter nor do I wish to be toyed with.

J.W.:
Just who do you think you are barging in here; do you have any idea of who I am?

???:
I know precisely who you are, but that is of no important to me. For I have searched for one that has pure evil in his heart that I may possess him. For you see I am but a soul wandering around.

[The stranger removes the hood and reveals himself to be Lord Nephesh in soulish form]

J.W.:
What do you want from me?

???:
Thousands of years ago I tried to steal the souls of humanity, but was defeated by a sorceress. This time however, with your influence I can reach the world in mere seconds and all I would require is your body.

J.W.:
That my barging friend is out of the question. Karra call security and have this nutcase thrown out of my building.

NEPHESH:
From here on out this and everything you own no longer belongs to you, but me, including your body.

[Lord Nephesh lept out of the robe he was wearing and in energy form jumped straight into J.W.'s mouth and down his throat. He was thrown to the floor shaking in convulsions. Karra tried to figure if there was something that she could do. Within minutes J.W. got up from the floor and went to pick up the hood and placed it around his neck]

KARRA:
Mr. Steelman are you all right. What did that creature do to you?

NEPHESH:
Oh nothing that I couldn't handle and by the way from now on your can call me Lord Nephesh.

[J.W.'s eyes began glowing dark purple as he began laughing aloud in the office. Karra screamed as he tried to run out of the office, but Nephesh raised his finger towards her and trapped her in a weird bubble. She tried all she could to fight her way out, but it was no use. Nephesh slowly walked towards her, as she watched him with fear]

KARRA:
What are you going to do with me?

NEPHESH:
Since you were a faithful and loyal servant to this human, so shall you be to me, as you help me capture the souls of humanity.

KARRA:
You can forget that you freak!!

[Nephesh leaned towards the bubble with his eyes glowing brighter. When he spoke it had a dark demonic tone to it]

NEPHESH:
Who said you had a choice in the matter?


Scene Two: Jonathon's Bedroom

[Adrian was still standing in the doorway of Jonathon's room, while he watched Arrian hold the blue Fire Crystal towards Jonathon]

ADRIAN:
What are you doing here and what are you doing with my younger brother?

ARRIAN:
Let me explain, I promise I am not here to cause anyone any harm.

ADRIAN:
All right start talking cause you got five minutes.

ARRIAN:
My name is Arrian I am a sorceress and I have been keeping watch for a powerful sorcerer who vowed thousands of years ago to return and capture the souls of man. This is a Fire Crystal it has the power to defeat the sorcerer but it needs someone to use its power to do that.

ADRIAN:
You expect me to believe that you have powers and that is some kind of evil sorcerer loosed on Crystal Lake wanting to steal our very souls? Yeah right, now I expect you to leave and take that little glow in the dark prop with you.

JONATHON:
Wait a minute. I believe what she says.

ADRIAN:
Why? Because she magically appeared in your room out of nowhere?

JONATHON:
Actually she did appear in my room just a few minutes ago.

ADRIAN:
Yeah right.

ARRIAN:
I guess I'm going to have to prove it to you.

ADRIAN:
How is that?

[Arrian takes her wand and opens the portal to her exclude hidden chamber. The boys slowly enter through slowly. The portal closes and the force of the portal shuts the bedroom door]

BlueFireStorm
07-06-2003, 04:11 PM
Scene Three: Hidden Command Chamber

[When the three exit the portal into the command chamber, Adrian and Jonathon are amazed at the advance technology that laid before their very eyes. They both began walking around exploring the different parts of the chamber. When they were finished they both turned around towards her, Adrian had a look of confusion]

ADRIAN:
All right, let's say that everything you told us is true, what does that have to do with us?

ARRIAN:
This Fiire Crystal, which is just one of five, has chosen people to use their power to defeat this evil once and for all. Thousands of years ago, two thousand to be precise, I could only seal him away, but now he's been released and the crystal are the only things that are powerful enough to destroy him. These two crystals have chosen you to be their users.

[She hands them their Fire Crystals, Jonathon the Blue Fire Crystal and Adrian the Red Fire Crystal. As they both hold the crystal in their hands, both crystals begin to glow and form a golden chain around their necks with the crystals connected. Suddenly rings of colored fire began encircling around them both, a gust of wind, from out of no where began blowing fiercely. The bodies of both boys began glowing brightly in the color of their crystal, soon the circle of fire turned into a large stream and flowed into their crystals. The boys began to catch their breath]

ARRIAN:
Are you guys all right?

JONATHON:
Yeah I feel all right? What was that any way?

ARRIAN:
The crystals were enfusing you with their power. Tell me, what did the enfusing process feel like?

ADRIAN:
It felt like a storm was surging through me and giving me a tremendous amount of energy.

ARRIAN:
Your powers come from the strength of fire and just like it you must becareful how you use your powers. Now let me brief you on the enemy.


Scene Four: J.W. Steelman's Office

[Lord Nephesh was standing in front of the window overlooking the downtown area. He watched as people were either driving where they were going to or walking. In his mind he could see souls awaiting to be captured and forece to do his bidding]

NEPHESH:
Soon humans, the very souls that you take for granted are going to be used to bring me glory. I shall soon be ruler of this entire world.

[Just then the door opened and in walked a nonchalant Karra with a new outfit on. This time she wore a short red dress and a black fitted shirt. Her hair was now in a high pony tail. She walked over to Nephesh and stood in front of his desk. Nephesh turned and walked towards her, they soon were kissing passionately together]

NEPHESH:
Now let's get down to business. What do you have to report to me?

KARRA:
Well master, the Board of Executives are now on their way up. I've explained to them that you want to have them meet in the meeting room.

NEPHESH:
Excellent. Everything is going to plan just as I expected them to.

[Minutes later the 10 Board of Executive members walked into a dark meeting room with just one ceiling light shining on the middle of the table. As they looked around two purple eyes met them]

NEPHESH:
Gentlemen, please take your seats. We have a lot of cover and a short tome to do it in.

EXECUTIVE 1:
Sir, you said there won't be another meeting until we've brought you that property where the youth center is.

NEPHESH:
Well for the first order of business, everything I've said before today, did before today, or even commanded you before today, forget it because we'll dealing with a whole game here. What is the number one goal around here?

EXECUTIVE 1:
To make money sir.

NEPHESH:
Not anymore. That will be secondary because from now on the primary agenda around here is souls.

EXECUTIVE 1:
What are you saying sir?

NEPHESH:
I'm saying that I want you to capture every soul on this planet.

EXECUTIVE 2:
That is barbaric and we sir shall have no more of your outlandish schemes.

[Just as the executives prepared to get up and leave, they found themselves encased in energy bubbles. They tried to break free but it was o use]

EXECUTIVE 2:
What is the meaning of this Mr. Steelman?

NEPHESH:
Oh I forgot to inform you that there has been a change in management.

[Nephesh peeled back Steelman's head and revealed his true form. All the executives were horrified at the sight of Nephesh's form]

NEPHESH:
Now to make willing workers out of you so you can bring me the souls I require.

[Nephesh soon began enfusing them with negative energy and absorbing their souls into his hands. When he was through altering them he released them back into their bodies. Now the executives were under Nephesh's control]

NEPHESH:
The table is set and I believe its time to feast.

Commercial:



Act Four: Scene One: Hidden Command Chamber

[Arrian had just finished briefing Adrian and Jonathon on who Lord Nephesh was and what his true intentions are]

ARRIAN:
Lord Nephesh is not going to stop, until he has captured every soul of man.

JONATHON:
We've got to stop him before he can do that.

ADRIAN:
How do we use these new powers anyway?

ARRIAN:
When you are ready to call on your new powers, stand with your legs apart and fists joined together and call out "Fire Storm, Transform ", your crystals will activate themselves and morph you into a powerful fighting force.

[Just then loud beeping sound began sounding off inside the chamber. The boys started looking around trying to figure out where the sound was coming from]

JONATHON:
What is that?

ARRIAN:
That is the chamber alert system, it alerts me when Nephesh has started an attack.

[Arrian brings up a picture on the screen. The view is of the Downtown area. People could be seen running from some demonic creatures. They had dark green armored skin, covered in black metallic armor. Some of the creatures had large leather wings, like those of a giant bat, with which they were able to fly. The creatures that flew, who had sharp clawed hands, carried strange whips that they lashed around victims and shrink them. The other creatures that were on the ground used special jaws to capture the humans after they had been shrunk]

JONATHON:
What are those ugly creatures?

ARRIAN:
I don't know, must be a new part of Nephesh's army. We have got to stop them.

ADRIAN:
Well let's see what these powers can do?

[Adrian and Jonathon stood about a few feet apart. They brought both their fists together in front of their crystals and looked straight ahead]

BOTH:
FIRE STORM, TRANSFORM!!

[Our view is first of Jonathon, who is standing in the midsts of a huge funnel of blue flames. As the flames continue flow around him, his crystal bursts out into a flash of energy and consumes his entire body, all that can be seen is a shadowy outline of his frame. Suddenly the flames dissipate from different parts of his body. From his legs up to his waist, we see white boots, blue jumpsuit, and a golden belt with a blue symbol of fire on the buckle. As the flames dissipate from his hands to his shoulders, we see white gloves and another part of his blue jumpsuits. When the view is seen of his upper torse, the flames reveal the full suit with a golden V-shaped armor going over his chest. His helmet appears blue and his visor is black with a gold trim. Behind him large explosions can be seen]


[Our next view is of Adrian, who is standing in the midsts of a huge funnel of red flames. As the flames continue flow around him, his crystal bursts out into a flash of energy and consumes his entire body, all that can be seen is a shadowy outline of his body frame. Suddenly the flames dissipate from different parts of his body. From his legs up to his waist, we see white boots, red jumpsuit, and a golden belt with a red symbol of fire on the buckle. As the flames dissipate from his hands to his shoulders, we see white gloves and another part of his red jumpsuits. When the view is seen of his upper torse, the flames reveal the full suit with a golden V-shaped armor going over his chest. His helmet was red and his visor was black with a gold trim. Behind him large explosions can be seen erupting]

BlueFireStorm
07-06-2003, 04:14 PM
Scene Two: Downtown Crystal Lake

[People continued running for their lives as Lord Nephesh's dark creatures continued terrorizing the city. Some of the people were blasted to the ground, cars were being blasted into heaps of twisted steel and metal, some were even blasted from the ground and through the air crashing into anything that was in their path. The winged creatures used their whips to lash on to many of the people and cause them to shrink into minature replicas, allowing the ground troops to come along and snatch them up and place them in their special jars to take back to Lord Nephesh]

MAN 1:
We've got to get out here before they can capture us too.

CREATURE:
There is no escape mortals from the power of Lord Nephesh. Surrender now for your end in inevitable.

[Soon buildings all around them began being blasted from top to bottom. Explosion ripped at buildings all around the city. Large chunks of rubble can be seen all over the streets, fiery heaps of stone and metal can be seen darting across the city landscape. The dark creatures could be seen illuminating over the city;s horizon]

WOMAN:
Please is there anybody that can save us!?

CREATURE:
Surrender mortal resistance against the power of Lord Nephesh is futile.

[The woman fell to the ground as the creature loomed over her with its dark green eyes prepare to pounce upon her]

TO BE CONTINUED!!!

ADRIAN:
Next time on Fire Storm.

[Dark creatures continue attacking until one by one each are blasted by two streams of colored flames. Both Fire Storm Red and Fire Storm Blue appear side by side ready to confront the creatures]

FIRE STORM RED:
Whoever or whatever you are, if I were you right now, I'd put back what didn't belong to me.

[Lord Nephesh sees both Fire Storm Red and Fire Storm Blue prevailing against his forces. He slams his fists on to his desk]

NEPHESH:
I want those two found and destroyed. Bring me their souls and search for that weakling of a sorceress. I want her blood in by hands by sun down!!

ADRIAN:
Next time on Fire Storm

Ryuranger
07-06-2003, 04:42 PM
not bad. not bad at all. ill look forward to the next episode.

legacyranger
07-06-2003, 07:54 PM
great fiction, can't wait to read the next episode.