Power Rangers Mystic

[Shadowforce_70]

Power Rangers Mystic

On a highly advanced planet, Gratho, homo sapiens have evolved into two separate species, Klendaths and Grathans, Grathans are brutal conquering barbarians. Klendaths, highly advanced pacifists. The two species mustered a truce but soon the Grathans break the truce,conquer Gratho, and enslave the Klendaths.

One 20-yr. old sage named Tresos steals from the Klendaths research station five Mystic Bonders. Red, Green, Blue, Yellow, and Pink, He attempts to use the red bonder to battle the grathan general Trecko. During the battle, Tresos, now the Red Mystic Ranger, is shot with a beam of pure evil permately sapping all Klendath mystic powers from him plus permately maiming him.

Secretly, after a while of rehab he leaves for earth with the mytic bonders and Delita-9, his personal android

[Shadowforce_70]

see i am going to do episodes about this using plot themes from Power Rangers plus not to mention appearances by old faces

i have come up with the rangers names, next time zords


Kevin...................................................Red Mystic Ranger
Lauren................................................Yellow Mystic Ranger
Garrett................................................Green Mystic Ranger
Tim......................................................Blue Mystic Ranger
Danielle...............................................Pink Mystic Ranger

???????................................................Dark Ranger
???????................................................Light Ranger

[Shadowforce_70]

Zords

Red.................................................FireFox (R. Arm)
Yellow.............................................SunDemon(phoenix) (L. Arm)
Blue.................................................BattleWhale (Head Body Legs)
Green..............................................WarTurtle (R. Foot)
Pink.................................................Armoredillo (L. Foot)

They form the Mystizord:

Attacks/Whale Shield/Turtle,Dillo Kick/Sunfire cannon Red/yellow


Finisher: Mystic Saber

[maddog151]

sounds cool

[Shadowforce_70]

i am writing episodes for this but right now i am gonna discuss allies,villians,morphing calls and stances, personalities




Allies

Tresos, Mentor/22 earth years old/ Caucasian/male/blonde hair/original red mystic ranger

Delita-9,assistant/no age/red/female personality

Josh, Friend of rangers/17 eyo/ Caucasian/male/red

Trisha. Friend of rangers/17 eyo/ Caucasian/female/blonde hair/ twin to Josh


Villians

Trecko, twin to tresos/ possesor of dark ninja magic/ ruler of Gratho/ leader of villians

Lantris/ Grathan General, field commander of villians

Frentile-09/ tech expert, Grathan Cyborg

Terach/ makes monster grow/ captured klendathan sorcerer

Grathan Barbahavoc's/ baics grunts/ pilot skiff bikes/ armed with clubs

Morphing calls and stances

Grathan power earth power combine!!?

Mystic powers of gratho fill me with absolute power!!?

your suggestions please

stance

morpher on left wrist

pull it to mouth

yell morphing call

bring them in motion like this:

rip off wrist hold to sky

lightning bolt hits it

bring back to mouth

as ranger costume minus helmet devolps yell :


(color) mystic ranger power

them yell into morpher

(zord) helmet form


sign behind says morphing complete




so what are your suggestions










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[maddog151]

I'd say use

Mystic powers of gratho fill me with absolute power!

and the morphing sequence sounds good.

[ShadowRangerV]

sounds good.

[Shadowforce_70]

ok here are the ranger bio's

Name: Kevin Martinez
Age: 17
Race: Latino
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Green
Ranger: Red Mystic Ranger
Element: Fire
Sp. Attack: Firestorm
Weapons: Mysic Saber Red/ Red Mystic Sword
Zord: FireFox

........................................................................... ..............................

Name: Lauren Gilbert
Age: 17
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Hazel
Race:Caucasian
Ranger: Yellow Mystic Ranger
Element: Sun
Sp. Attack: Sunpower
Weapons: Mystic Saber Yellow/ Yellow Mystic Spear
Zord: Sundemon

........................................................................... ..............................

Name: Garrett Banks
Age: 17
Hair Color: Shaved black
Eye Color: Brown
Race: African American
Element: Earth
Sp. Attack: Earthquake
Weapons:: Mystic Saber Green/ Green Mystic Lance
Zord: WarTurtle

........................................................................... ..............................

Name: Tim Chandler
Age: 17
Hair Color: Red
Eyes: Blue
Race:Caucasian
Element: Water
Sp. Attack: Floodgates
Weapons: Mystic Saber Blue/ Blue Mystic cannon
Zord: BattleWhale

........................................................................... ..............................

Name: Danielle Luzon
Age: 17
Hair Color: Black
Eyes: Green
Race: Fillipino
Element:Heart
Sp Attack: Lovestorm
Weapon: Mystic Saber Pink/ Pink Mystic Daggers
Zord: Armoredillo

[comicstar100]

Good start,keep it up

[Sliver Tyger]

flair flair

shadowforce_70 this is awesome some of the suff that i have read on other websites (no offence) have sounded rushed and unthought to me but this sounds like you have put a lot of time and eefort into it and it shows. i wanna know more asap not to sound too pushy cause i usually do sorry:p but i like majorly

[Shadowforce_70]

I was thinking about the rangers all playing team sports.
They have done extreme sports than why not team.
So here is some Character Info:

Kevin Martinez

Loner/Friend of Tim/Basketball Star/Runs Track/B- student
Suprized when the Red morpher chose him over tim

Lauren Gilbert

Outgoing/Girlfriend of Tim/Softball Star/A Student

Garrett Banks

shy/gentle giant/football star/C+ Student/works at pet store

Tim Chandler

Big man on campus/All-state Swimmer/b- student/spoiled rich kid
upset when red morpher chose kevin/boyfriend of Lauren

Danielle Luzon

outgoing/cheerleader/a student/Leader of student goverment

So do u think i should Bring Josh and trisha in on ep. 1 or wait 4 or 5 to do so

plus can u guess who the light and dark rangers are???

lol

[BlackWindRanger]

It's nice to see so much effort going into a FanFic

[Qi]

Originally posted by BlackWindRanger
It's nice to see so much effort going into a FanFic

I agree. The more effort... the more complete... the better the quality of the fic.

Keep it up.

[Shadowforce_70]

so i have come up with the moprhing theme sequence

mstify!!
(color)mystiranger

[Purple Owl Zord]

Very interesting. Did you read my story??? It's a Prologue.

[Shadowforce_70]

Episode Guide

1. Gratha (August 15, 2003)
2. leaderless rangers (August 21, 2003)
3. you want me to be a what August 28, 2003)
4. united as one (September 7, 2003)
5. Mystic Bond (September 14, 2003)
6. the battle heats up...................
7.

[OriginalRanger]

(Shoves aside political stuff-until another time...)

Great work here; it's obvious that you've spent a lot of time thinking this through (even morphing stances detailed).

For morphing call, I'd do "Grathan earth power combine!" (first morphing call minus the first "power" to make it sound simpler); the other one is too drawn out.

Interesting stuff going on here.

[Shadowforce_70]

thanks i get hotheaded some times

i am not ultraconservative

if i was i would think power rangers in satanic like what's his name dude who wrote that book

but btw if u dont mind me asking how old are u

[OriginalRanger]

Originally posted by Shadowforce_70
thanks i get hotheaded some times

i am not ultraconservative

if i was i would think power rangers in satanic like what's his name dude who wrote that book

but btw if u dont mind me asking how old are u

Twenty years old.

[Shadowforce_70]

so u really like my fanfic

u think when i do episodes i should do a teamup if so which teams?

[NiGhTRanGeR2003]

What do you mean by that Fanfic or Real Power Rangers?

[Shadowforce_70]

i was thinking wild force ninja storm dino thunder and mine

[Sparky Ranger]

Be out of the ordinary....use Lightspeed

[Shadowforce_70]

they dont have seven rangers

who will be 7th l.r. rangers


John Foster (Carter's Fan i mean Carter's Bitch ranger)

[Sparky Ranger]

Yeah but neither do any of the teams you mentioned....I was talking for a team up by the way.

[Shadowforce_70]

i know i just hate lightspeed and i just say the moment and mafe the joke

[Sparky Ranger]

Feel free to use my team...I know you just read the first episode.

[legacyranger]

when is this fiction going to start or where is the first episode or prolog of this fiction. I want to read it but I can't find it

[Shadowforce_70]

anybody want to do this thread if u do u can just give me credit

[the_purple_stranger]

Sounds good in planning, but I can't make a fair judgement until I see the actual story. And is this going to be in Character Script format or in Story Format? And I am starting to see that Character Bios are the current fad. Someone posts 3-4 pages of character bios, and everyone goes crazy over them, even though no actual story exists, as yet. As for the title, I am ever so glad I decided NOT to keep 'Mystic' in my fanfic. It seems to be too common a word. Yours is the third mention of it in a Power Rangers title that I've seen, so far. There may be others. When you actually post the first part of the story, I'll look into it and give it a fair reading, like I do with everyone elses. I don't always comment, but I don't tend to put-down other authors, either. At least, not intentionally.

The Purple Stranger

[Zord_Crazy]

Nice set-up and such, my friend. You sure have put a lot of prep into this. As for the morphing call, might I suggest "Grathan power, Earth power combine!! Mystic Ranger...(Rangrer color)!!" What you think?

[Shadowforce_70]

Sounds good in planning, but I can't make a fair judgement until I see the actual story. And is this going to be in Character Script format or in Story Format? And I am starting to see that Character Bios are the current fad. Someone posts 3-4 pages of character bios, and everyone goes crazy over them, even though no actual story exists, as yet. As for the title, I am ever so glad I decided NOT to keep 'Mystic' in my fanfic. It seems to be too common a word. Yours is the third mention of it in a Power Rangers title that I've seen, so far. There may be others. When you actually post the first part of the story, I'll look into it and give it a fair reading, like I do with everyone elses. I don't always comment, but I don't tend to put-down other authors, either. At least, not intentionally.

The Purple Stranger


i wrote this a year ago so unless someone did it earlier then they are copying me

but if u wanna do it use my first couple of posts

[Shadowforce_70]

i have come up with the dark and light rangers idea

Josh is captured by barbohavocs and given the Dark morpher with the powers of the moon and darkness

treko tells him the rangers killed his sister

he fights the rangers rules them then escalates the battle with his zords the bat the wolf and the shark
combines them into the dark zord

after thinking long hard the rangers and tresos come up with the light morpher to give them an edge they give it to trisha and she with the other rangers fight him for several battles til they discover he is the dark ranger

trisha sneeks off to help her brother and when he turns to the light side trecko personally attacks them and destroys trisha

tresos sends the rangers and josh gives them the light and dark morphers then about 5 eps later they realize they need a permenant 6th ranger and both the light and dark ones are at half power so delita combines them into the gray morpher they track down josh convince him to join them and he becomes the gray ranger

utilizing the stars for his mystic power along with his now good mystic zords and trisha's the falcon who combine with either megazord to grant it flying powers

his morphing call is "power of darkness, power of light, powers unite" brings his two morpher halves together to morph

[Shadowforce_70]

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[Shadowforce_71]

weird i wrote this like 3 years ago

seriously

i got some things pretty close

Ranger Color Scheme (Red Blue Green Yellow Pink) and Dark/White