packfan6
06-05-2003, 12:20 PM
This is the fan-fic I posted about a few days ago. Could everyone post what they think and what I could do better for next time?
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There was silence in the Astro Megaship mark 2 after a final busy day on Aquitar. After a month of fighting along side of Aurico and the other Alien Rangers, Andros, Ashley, Karone and Zhane finally got a good nights sleep. After the old team of Space Rangers saved the world by destroying Zordon, the six rangers split up. T.J., Carlos and Cassie went back to earth to restore their normal life's, while Andros, Ashley, Zhane and Karone decided to defend KO-35 and the rest of the galaxy. Just recently, the team of four had been fighting for Aquitar against Hydro Hog.
At an under ground base on Aquitar, a clone of Hydro Hog had finished preparation for an attack to take over of the planet. Hydro Hog distracted the planet and the universe with a strong warrior attacking else where. With the planet defense less, Hydro Hog started destroying all the water on Aquitar.
The four Space Rangers went to the planet and sent everyone on the planet to safety within the Bermuta triangle. The rangers quickly restored the water, and returned the aquitarians to their planet. Earlier in the day the Space Rangers, with the Alien Rangers help, destroyed Hydro Hog.
"Andros, why are you so quiet tonight?" asked Ashley, while the two lay together in bed at the Megaship. The two have shared the same room in the ship for the past half a year. The room was very small, with a bed and a few shelves. They also had two pictures in the room. One of the two together, and one of the six ranger team they were in. Ever since their journey started in the fight against Astronema, Ashley and Andros loved each other. The idea of marriage had come up to them many times, but they've always decided that they didn't want to yet, because if they did it would ruin their ranger carriers. "You should be happy, we won."
Andros ignored Ashley while he looked down at a picture. It was the only picture taken of him, along with seven of the nine other red rangers who saved the world a few months ago against the Machine Empire. The picture was taken by his sister Karone when the rangers were arguing about who the greatest ranger ever was.
Andros, ever since he was a small child, wanted to be a Power Ranger. He fought with his best friend Zhane, then with Ashley, T.J., Cassie and Carlos, and then with Zhane, Ashley and Karone, but the ten Red Ranger team was by far the best team he had ever been with.
"Andros, are you there?" she asked. "I asked you a question."
"O, I'm sorry Ashley, I was just thinking." replied Andros.
"About what?" asked Ashley. Ashley always knew that Andros was very quiet. She could tell when Andros was happy, when he had his smile on his face, but she hadn't seen that face in months.
"Just when Tommy and I and the other red rangers destroyed Serpentera and about are argument at the end the about who's the best." said Andros. He continued to stair at the picture of him and his friends. He remembered the conversation the rangers had perfectly.
Cole started it by saying how Tommy was the greatest ranger ever. His friend, and former teammate T.J. said how he replaced Tommy, so he was the best. Then the first red ranger who defended the earth in hundreds of years, Jason said how he did all the work while Tommy was his teammate. Carter, Cole, Wes and Eric all made there short remark before he spoke. His only comeback to all that was how he saved two worlds rather then one. T.J. then stopped the argument when he asked if he ever told them about the time he was baked into a pizza. Andros then thought on how he never remembered that, so he decided to ask Ashley about it. "Ashley, could you tell me about the time T.J. was baked into a pizza?"
"Okay, it was back when T.J. and I were Turbo rangers, along with Carlos, Cassie and Justin." That was all she could get out before Andros dozed off. She then forgot about it, and fell asleep herself.
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"Galaxy Glider, hang 10." shouted Andros. He emerged in what looked to be a dome. He leaped on his glider and took a gaze around. He was inside a stadium. There was a translucent hemi-sphere that was inside the stadium. He looked through the sphere, and noticed stands with numerous people on them. He looked up to see that the half of a sphere had a height of about two Megazords. He looked down to see a nasty, ordinary green. There were black lines on the ground which seemed like they would open up and have something emerge out.
He gazed outside of the dome, to see a bigger, more oval like stadium. He saw his sister Karone, with his best friend Zhane in an audience with about 50 other people in it. Looking about, he saw other faces he recognized. First Wes, then Carlos, then Ashley. He stared at Ashley for a few moments, but then slipped off of his galaxy glider, and fell on his face. He felt pain in his right arm, as a laser had shot him. He then saw the Red Turbo Ranger, with his Turbo Blaster in his right hand ready to fire more.
Andros hollered out for his Spiral Saber, and charged the fellow red ranger. The Turbo Ranger put his blaster back into it's holster, and then used his Lightning Sword to evade the Space Rangers sword as Andros directed a hit at his chest. Andros wanted to buy himself some more time, so he could finish viewing his surroundings. He had no clue why he was fighting the fellow ranger whoever it may be, but he knew he had to do it. Both rangers attacked and deflected blows from each others swords, wearing each other out.
Andros sprinted backwards to stop the meaningless attacks of each others swords. As he was running backwards, he got his Battilizer out. By the time the Turbo Ranger got to Andros, the one had already been pressed on the Battilizer. Andros took a step backwards, then kicked his back left foot against the dome wall, took a flip and hit the red ranger in the chest. The strength of the blow from Andros glowing right fist made the Turbo Ranger tumbled down and placed his left hand on his chest. Andros ran back to his galaxy glider which had remained where it fell. He flew upwards and took another view.
The first thing he saw was a group of four men that he never meet, and one young women with pink hair. He then saw three alpha robots, two of them he remembered working with. He then saw Dimitria, the Inquiris native, who guided the Turbo Rangers. He looked even farther to his right to see Zordon, his old friend who he had to destroy to save the world.
"Andros, you're the only one who can save me." Zordon shouted. With his eyes set on Zordon, he felt a blow come to his chest. The Galaxy Glider seemed to disappear, along with everything else he saw during the fight. He then found his sister, not as Karone, but as Astronema. He appeared in her Dark Fortress. With his Spiral Saber in his hand, he struck Zordon, destroying him.
"Noooo!" yelled Andros, now in his bed, with Ashley again by his side. He breathed heavily for a few seconds before he realized it was all just a dream. Ashley got to a sitting position and asked her boyfriend what happened. "I had that same dream again." Ever since he had to sacrifice his friend Zordon, every so often the incident was replayed to him in his dreams.
"I'll go get you some water and then you can fall back asleep." said a tired Ashley while she got up and left the room. The words "you're the only one who can save me." rang over and over in Andros head. The next thing that came to his head was where was he in his dream, and why was he fighting the red Turbo Ranger? He realized that he was fighting in the best stadium in KO-35. He then looked at the picture he was looking at last night with the rest of the red rangers. He then remembered thinking about the argument about who was the greatest ranger. Was he better then the Turbo Ranger in his dream, he thought? He wasn't sure. The last thing he thought was weather he would ever know before he fell asleep again.
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There was silence in the Astro Megaship mark 2 after a final busy day on Aquitar. After a month of fighting along side of Aurico and the other Alien Rangers, Andros, Ashley, Karone and Zhane finally got a good nights sleep. After the old team of Space Rangers saved the world by destroying Zordon, the six rangers split up. T.J., Carlos and Cassie went back to earth to restore their normal life's, while Andros, Ashley, Zhane and Karone decided to defend KO-35 and the rest of the galaxy. Just recently, the team of four had been fighting for Aquitar against Hydro Hog.
At an under ground base on Aquitar, a clone of Hydro Hog had finished preparation for an attack to take over of the planet. Hydro Hog distracted the planet and the universe with a strong warrior attacking else where. With the planet defense less, Hydro Hog started destroying all the water on Aquitar.
The four Space Rangers went to the planet and sent everyone on the planet to safety within the Bermuta triangle. The rangers quickly restored the water, and returned the aquitarians to their planet. Earlier in the day the Space Rangers, with the Alien Rangers help, destroyed Hydro Hog.
"Andros, why are you so quiet tonight?" asked Ashley, while the two lay together in bed at the Megaship. The two have shared the same room in the ship for the past half a year. The room was very small, with a bed and a few shelves. They also had two pictures in the room. One of the two together, and one of the six ranger team they were in. Ever since their journey started in the fight against Astronema, Ashley and Andros loved each other. The idea of marriage had come up to them many times, but they've always decided that they didn't want to yet, because if they did it would ruin their ranger carriers. "You should be happy, we won."
Andros ignored Ashley while he looked down at a picture. It was the only picture taken of him, along with seven of the nine other red rangers who saved the world a few months ago against the Machine Empire. The picture was taken by his sister Karone when the rangers were arguing about who the greatest ranger ever was.
Andros, ever since he was a small child, wanted to be a Power Ranger. He fought with his best friend Zhane, then with Ashley, T.J., Cassie and Carlos, and then with Zhane, Ashley and Karone, but the ten Red Ranger team was by far the best team he had ever been with.
"Andros, are you there?" she asked. "I asked you a question."
"O, I'm sorry Ashley, I was just thinking." replied Andros.
"About what?" asked Ashley. Ashley always knew that Andros was very quiet. She could tell when Andros was happy, when he had his smile on his face, but she hadn't seen that face in months.
"Just when Tommy and I and the other red rangers destroyed Serpentera and about are argument at the end the about who's the best." said Andros. He continued to stair at the picture of him and his friends. He remembered the conversation the rangers had perfectly.
Cole started it by saying how Tommy was the greatest ranger ever. His friend, and former teammate T.J. said how he replaced Tommy, so he was the best. Then the first red ranger who defended the earth in hundreds of years, Jason said how he did all the work while Tommy was his teammate. Carter, Cole, Wes and Eric all made there short remark before he spoke. His only comeback to all that was how he saved two worlds rather then one. T.J. then stopped the argument when he asked if he ever told them about the time he was baked into a pizza. Andros then thought on how he never remembered that, so he decided to ask Ashley about it. "Ashley, could you tell me about the time T.J. was baked into a pizza?"
"Okay, it was back when T.J. and I were Turbo rangers, along with Carlos, Cassie and Justin." That was all she could get out before Andros dozed off. She then forgot about it, and fell asleep herself.
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"Galaxy Glider, hang 10." shouted Andros. He emerged in what looked to be a dome. He leaped on his glider and took a gaze around. He was inside a stadium. There was a translucent hemi-sphere that was inside the stadium. He looked through the sphere, and noticed stands with numerous people on them. He looked up to see that the half of a sphere had a height of about two Megazords. He looked down to see a nasty, ordinary green. There were black lines on the ground which seemed like they would open up and have something emerge out.
He gazed outside of the dome, to see a bigger, more oval like stadium. He saw his sister Karone, with his best friend Zhane in an audience with about 50 other people in it. Looking about, he saw other faces he recognized. First Wes, then Carlos, then Ashley. He stared at Ashley for a few moments, but then slipped off of his galaxy glider, and fell on his face. He felt pain in his right arm, as a laser had shot him. He then saw the Red Turbo Ranger, with his Turbo Blaster in his right hand ready to fire more.
Andros hollered out for his Spiral Saber, and charged the fellow red ranger. The Turbo Ranger put his blaster back into it's holster, and then used his Lightning Sword to evade the Space Rangers sword as Andros directed a hit at his chest. Andros wanted to buy himself some more time, so he could finish viewing his surroundings. He had no clue why he was fighting the fellow ranger whoever it may be, but he knew he had to do it. Both rangers attacked and deflected blows from each others swords, wearing each other out.
Andros sprinted backwards to stop the meaningless attacks of each others swords. As he was running backwards, he got his Battilizer out. By the time the Turbo Ranger got to Andros, the one had already been pressed on the Battilizer. Andros took a step backwards, then kicked his back left foot against the dome wall, took a flip and hit the red ranger in the chest. The strength of the blow from Andros glowing right fist made the Turbo Ranger tumbled down and placed his left hand on his chest. Andros ran back to his galaxy glider which had remained where it fell. He flew upwards and took another view.
The first thing he saw was a group of four men that he never meet, and one young women with pink hair. He then saw three alpha robots, two of them he remembered working with. He then saw Dimitria, the Inquiris native, who guided the Turbo Rangers. He looked even farther to his right to see Zordon, his old friend who he had to destroy to save the world.
"Andros, you're the only one who can save me." Zordon shouted. With his eyes set on Zordon, he felt a blow come to his chest. The Galaxy Glider seemed to disappear, along with everything else he saw during the fight. He then found his sister, not as Karone, but as Astronema. He appeared in her Dark Fortress. With his Spiral Saber in his hand, he struck Zordon, destroying him.
"Noooo!" yelled Andros, now in his bed, with Ashley again by his side. He breathed heavily for a few seconds before he realized it was all just a dream. Ashley got to a sitting position and asked her boyfriend what happened. "I had that same dream again." Ever since he had to sacrifice his friend Zordon, every so often the incident was replayed to him in his dreams.
"I'll go get you some water and then you can fall back asleep." said a tired Ashley while she got up and left the room. The words "you're the only one who can save me." rang over and over in Andros head. The next thing that came to his head was where was he in his dream, and why was he fighting the red Turbo Ranger? He realized that he was fighting in the best stadium in KO-35. He then looked at the picture he was looking at last night with the rest of the red rangers. He then remembered thinking about the argument about who was the greatest ranger. Was he better then the Turbo Ranger in his dream, he thought? He wasn't sure. The last thing he thought was weather he would ever know before he fell asleep again.