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GeddonZord
05-27-2003, 12:00 PM
The invasion had come about rather quickly. The invaders wasted no time, nor resources, as they continued their assault.

First the frontier colony worlds in sector 2 were captured by this mysteryious enemy, then the capitals of lesser nations near the frontier fell, like Dubras or Yos of the Canerites and Emperials. Ranged sensors had detected a spacecraft of unimaginable size just outside the galaxy, near the frontier, but little could be done about that at the current time.

The Rangers themselves had been assigned to defend the last world standing between the frontier and Auran civilization-Edenoi.

Edenoi was a rich red agucultural world famaos for its Masked Riders-A knightlike order dedicated to protecting the local populace from petty warlords and tyrants.

Galron was busy reading over the battleplan Alvar had assigned for them before they left, it was a grueling briefing, even by Eltarian standards.

It had begun a week after the newly formed team had fended off a robotic monster on Sero, Eltar's third moon.

The invaders had begun capturing planets belonging to the LEAGUE OF PACIFIST POWERS, or LOPP, a group of over one hundred nations that shared the Locharian faith.

Nothing changed on Aura, not in the slightest...

The newsfeeds from Auran News Corparations held speechs by the King(a simple figurehead) and Parliament, being completely controled, like the king, by the Locharian monks, praised the Auran resistance to respond to the invasion "with the evil act of agression". It wouldn't be long until the other nations used the opertunity to break away from the Anti-War laws LOPP had decreed, and began forming millitaries as it was centuries prior.

General Alvar had the view that this was a golden opertunity to show how flawed Auran logic had become. He wanted the Rangers Five' first appearence to shine as an example to all the worlds in the galaxy.

The sky on Edenoi was red, the kind of red that one would associate with rust. The people of the world were wise, intelligent and cunning. A Monarchy, like Eltar or Aura, the Edenois placed great trust in their King. Edenoi, like Eltar and Triforia, had ignored Auran Anti-Millitary policies and decrees, but unlike Eltar or Triforia, had not dismantled their millitary. Any embargo launched by Aura had no effect on such a resourch rich world, or its resourceful people.

That was why Edenoi had to be defended, not simply because it was the entrypoint to Auran civilization, but also because Edenoi had many ideas and technologies that could aid the galaxy for the better.

Zarith walked causally up to Galron, who was lost in thought it seemed

"Nice planet isn't it?" Zarith asked

"Yeah" Galron said, distantly

"Your worried about fighting again aren't you?" Zarith asked

"No, I was just wondering thats all." Galron asked, his eyes trancing the shape of a cloud in the sky

"About what?"

"The Morphing Grid. Alvar said it was actually a diamension, not just an energy field. He also said that powerful magical beings could tap into the Grid for additional power, even Evil beings like Count Nefarious from the Ancient Wars.

"Count Nefarious?" Zarith asked, confused

"Don't you know history? He invaded Aura millenia ago." Galron said

"Oh" Zarith said, glancing to the side in embarrassment.

Utara was surprised at Zarith's lack of historical knowledge. She had been present during he and Galron's short conversation, but choose to listen rather than speak.

"Zarith is such a Black Hole. Stuff goes into his head, but nothing comes out." Utara said

"I know what you mean. One time I tried to teach him how to fly and starship. He understood it at first, but the next day, he had forgotten. He'd probably forget Alvar's briefing if it wasn't for the fact it was so important." Galron said

"Its peaceful here" Utara said, looking over the countryside, noting the almost complete absince of civilization.

"To peaceful" Galron said

Meanwhile..............Outside the Galaxy

Feuther Nebula stared at the white expanse of the Milky-Way galaxy.

Two generals stood on either side of the mysteryious Black Cross leader.

"I believe the time has come to eliminate the only true threat to our cause" The Feuther said, in one of his/hers/its rare few moments of speech.

"In what manner do you desire to strike Aura your emminence?" One general said

"NOT AURA YOU FOOL! These, Rangers, from the world of Eltar. They destroyed an entire squad of Zoldiers, with only ONE member of their four-man team present! They also defeated your Robot General Sunring, it is obvious they are the only threat to our existance and continuing expansion." Fuether Nebula said

"I understand your emminence, that is why I wish to attack the world of Edenoi personally with a squad of Zolders, our forces will crush these multi-colored warriors just like we crushed the Binarrs in the last Galaxy we conquered." Sunring said, still impossible to tell apart from the other general in the chamber.

"I grant you your request Sunring" Nebula said

"I will not fail you" Sunring said, bowing elegantly

"You had better not...for your sake" Nebula said

GeddonZord
05-27-2003, 12:55 PM
Edenoi

In a funnel of sand accompanied by the sound of rushing wind, General Sunring arrived.....

Only now the good general was in his true form....A robotic Pharoah glad in orange and gold. With him came about twenty Zoldiers and five Coldler Fighters. Edenoi would soon belong to the Black Cross, and Sunring would be well rewarded for his faithful service to the cause.

Utara was the first to see the approaching Zoldiers. Wasting no explanation, Utara whipped out her power coin, and with a loud cry said: "King of Clubs" transforming her into the Green Ranger, and readying her for battle.

Galron followed suit, yelling, "Jack of Diamonds" signaling his metamorphisis into the mighty Blue Ranger.

The two Rangers rushed at the incoming hoard of machinemen like predators to the hunt, striking with such ferocity that it put real predators to shame.

Four Zoldiers fell, obviously no match for the two attacking Rangers in both skill and power.

"This planet is under our protection, and that means you tinheads aren't getting it" Galron said bravely, while slamming a Zoldier from behind with his elbow.

"Tell it to them" Utara said, while excuting a deadly leg sweep that knocked five Zoldiers off their feet and out of the battle.

"Faschinating, they strike with both grace and procision, and such power..." Sunring said in awe, observing the battle from a distance.

"Ace of Spades!"

Sunring turned to see the form of the Red Ranger to late to avoid a punch to the shoulder, a move that sent the Black Cross general flying off his feet.

"Theres more where that came from" Zarith said proudly

Sunring got back on his feet and summoned a staff into existance in his right hand.

"Your powers are most impressive 'Ranger' but you'll find that the Black Cross's are far greater." Sunring said, in a defensive strance in front of Zarith.

"So thats what you guys are called." Zarith said

Sunring launched a blast of yellow energy from the tip of his staff towards Zarith, who easily launched himself into the air and executed a tornado kick to both aboid the blast and strike his attacker in the gut.

Zarith spun in the opposite direction from Sunring, who clutched his chest with his free hand, and landed gracefully.

"Impossible, you pierced my armor, noone has ever done that before." Sunring said

Galron and Utara stood beside Zarith, having finished off the entirety of the Zoldier force.

"There is a first time for everything, including defeat" Utara said

Zarith nodded to Galron and then to Utara

"I'll crush you!" Sunring said, fuming.

Sunring charged the three Rangers, staff in hand, only to find his targets to quick, and his attacks easily dodged.

Atomic Bow

ElectroSword

Gravity Fist

The rangers summoned their signiture weapons into being, invoking awe in the few Edenites nearby and fear in Sunring himself.

"This is impossible!" Sunring yelled

Zarith cocked an arrow, and fired, striking Sunring in the chest and enveloping him in a small mushroom cloud

Once the smoke quickly dissapated, Galron seized the moment by leaping into the air and slashing Sunring, striking the general with both steel and lightning.

Utara pulled back her fist, then punched forward, launching her gaunlet-like weapon towards Sunring, who was hit square in the chest by the attack.

The combined assault was to much for Sunring, as he fell over and exploded, the Rangers simply walking away...

"Power Down" Zarith said, banishing his Red Ranger outfit to the depths of the morphing grid.

"What a battle" Utara said, also unmorphed

"Wheres Cecilia? Wasn't she supposed to be back from the Edenite Village by now?" Galron said

"Shes alright, I'm not detecting any more 'Black Cross" members on world" Zarith said, using his telpathic powers to varify his claims.


"No, that attack was the only one so far, Black Cross?" Garlon asked, curious

"The name the General, Sunring I believe his name was, said his organization went by." Zarith said

"Your hiding something" Utara said, her own telepathic powers detecting a hint of fear in Zarith.

"Yes, but I would prefer to talk about it in priviate." Zarith said

PHAETON
05-27-2003, 01:31 PM
Nice action scene.Where is celina

PHAETON
08-12-2003, 01:23 PM
Geddonzord, I just saw you online today. Where you been

GeddonZord
08-12-2003, 09:53 PM
I've been on vacation, at Cape Cod to be exact. No time to write in or anything. But, its done wonders for my brain, no more writer's block.

How are you Phaeton, I see your writing skills have improved since I was last here. Thats always good. By the way, I've started a new series.

About Chrono...I saved the episodes of that on a school computer, and no longer have access to that. Besides, everyone probly forgot it. So I figured I start fresh.

PHAETON
05-27-2004, 05:56 PM
Geddonzord, can you repost part one of this fanfic and the chronology of this

PHAETON
07-26-2004, 11:18 AM
Geddonzord, do you still have any copies of this fanfic.

GeddonZord
07-26-2004, 03:39 PM
No unfortunately.

Zord_Crazy
07-26-2004, 09:11 PM
:eusa_clap VERY cool, Geddonzord. Just wondering if the Ranger Five suits are based off of Masked/Kamen Rider?

GeddonZord
07-27-2004, 12:35 AM
They were based on Go Go V, the first Sentai series ever. The fic was an attempt at filling in the vast gaps in Power Rangers history.

Basically, this fic explains the orgins of the Morphing Grid, as well as Eltar's position as the strongest stellar nation in the Milky Way Galaxy.

I may finish the series idea in the future.

PHAETON
09-24-2004, 09:14 AM
http://incolor.inetnebr.com/stuart/jakq/jakq.jpg Keep it coming.

PHAETON
05-28-2005, 10:27 AM
Now thats Mystic Destiny over, What about retackling this fic GZ?