Galaxy Black Ranger
05-04-2009, 05:13 PM
Crash!!! Such a simple noise. Not a simple feeling when its you who is causing it. As the black ranger picked himself up out of the wood and glass mess his landing had made, his only thoughts were of the emense pain running through his entire body.
He looked up... and what he saw made him wish he had kept his eyes to the ground. In front of him was a giant beast seemingly one mass of bulking, monstrous, throbbing vains. And this beast had one foot on the yellow ranger, and was using it’s hands to fend off attacks from the blue ranger who was desperatley trying to help his fallen commrade.
Behind them were two more battles. the black ranger observed His ally in pink fend off a group of foot soldiers known as gendrogs. She had been previously fighting along side the black ranger but was now alone. She was getting exhausted as she fought against the odds.
Behind her was a clash of the titans. the Red ranger was clashing swords with a faceless hooded creature that looked like death incarnate. Rather than a scythe the black mass of cloak wielded an incredibly large great sword. He was easily besting the red ranger.
A massive explosion shook the entire street blasting the rangers back into a straight line. Their smoking suits dematerialized leaving the rangers demorphed facing there powerfull enemies.
“I grow tired of this game,” the reaper like creature hissed. “now be good, worthless humans, and die quickly.” it continued. Red was the first to shakily get back to his feet. His long dark hair askew and his caucasion skin burned. “we... will... never... give... up” he managed to gasp through grit teeth. “Then you shall die slowly,” the hooded creature mocked. “rgasied!” The behemoth creature of vains responded, “yesss Master.” his voice like garbled gravel. “finish them,” the cloaked mennace gleefully replied before teleporting out.
All the rangers had now gained footing. The monster launched a ball of fire from its mouth. The resulting explosion threw the rangers back to the ground.
The rangers waited for the final strike. It didn’t come.
Struggling to look up they saw a shadowed figure Standing in defensive position in front of the searing flames. As the rangers struggled up they saw the figure was manipulating a beam of electromagnetic energy to form a shield of sort. In a strained voice the figure cried, “Run! I can’t hold it forever.” Noticing the urgency the rangers stumbled out of the way just as the flames over took the figure.
The smoke cleared and the fig...boy was still standing.No older than sixteen the boy sttod tall against the beast in front of him. His clothing was tatered but he was fine. The rangers watched on in awe as the boy charged the beast. As the boy ran... into a clothesline from the behemoth’s tendrils. understanding the odds the rangers morphed forming a defensive line infront of the fallen teen.
The rangers summoned their individual weapons before forming the Strato-cannon. In a burst of explosive energy nothing but raining tendrils remained of the monster.
The rangers Demorphed. then ran to the boy. He was in much more pain than he should have been. Electric energy cackaling all over his body. Then he began to change. very subtle at first. His canines enlongated into short fangs, His eyes changed color. But then the noticable happened. His ears shifted in shape into triangels, and asscended his head about two inches before growing fur. The rangers backed away as the boy staggered to his feet. “What are you?” Ranger red questioned. “Me?” the boy said in an indescribable voice, human but at the sametime something else... something strangely magnificent. The red ranger nodded. “I am what you call Unhuman... ironic isn’t it? that the “suerior” race can’t even use correct grammar in their immature labels?” With that he disappeared in a blur of speed.
“A bloody Freak.” The red ranger through down his jacket. “We were saved by a bloody freak!” “Calm down Chris!” The black ranger ordered. “Who do you think you are Ryan? For cripes sake, aren’t you the least offended?” “No I’m not... and neither is Nickie (nodding at the yellow ranger) or Gred (pointing at the blue ranger.” The two men stood starring at eachother in a stand off despite Chris’s obvious height advantage. Finally Chris backed down. “Where’s Kristen?”
The unhuman who saved the rangers slept in his makeshift bed in an abandoned building. “hello?” a female voice rang through the space. The boy jerked awake. He was now in his undiisguised form. The only difference from what the rangers saw earlier was now he had a tail. “Hello?” the voice called again. The boy scrambled to his feet and began searching for a place to hide. The girl walked into his room, it was Kristen. “I know you’re in here?” she said. The boy steped out of the shadows. “why’s you come looking for me?”
Kristen stepped back temporarily startled by his appearence. She seemed embarrased with herself. “don’t worry.” he said in an attempt to comfort her. “I get that a lot.” he continued sheepishly. “Um...yes well... I came here to invite you to join our team.” Now it was the boy’s turn to be startled. “What? how can you ask me to join when you don’t even know me?” “Exactly we want to know you. After all you saved our lives.” she answered with a smile. “so you don’t mind my appearance.” the boy asked. “not personnaly no.” she said putting out a hand. The boy took it.
“You asked it to join us?” Chris bellowed. “First of all his name is Cyan...” Kristen tried to retalliate but Chris cut her off. “I don’t care what his name is. We don’t know him.” At that point a man stepped into the room. “Commander Stith” Chris said stifly springing to attention. “ Lieutenant I’ve been listening to your commotion.” Chris opened his mouth to say something. “You are to cease any further conversation on this subject.” “But sir...” Chris interjected. “That’s an order. Now I want you to be the first to test this kid. combat training. Is that understood.” “Yes sir.” Chris mumbled then a smile crossed his face as the Commander moved on. “Oh most definitely.”
((This is my first attempt at a PR fanfic. I've done Star Trek before and am in the middle of writting a novel but this is my first attempt at something like this. any feed back would be greatly appreciated.))
He looked up... and what he saw made him wish he had kept his eyes to the ground. In front of him was a giant beast seemingly one mass of bulking, monstrous, throbbing vains. And this beast had one foot on the yellow ranger, and was using it’s hands to fend off attacks from the blue ranger who was desperatley trying to help his fallen commrade.
Behind them were two more battles. the black ranger observed His ally in pink fend off a group of foot soldiers known as gendrogs. She had been previously fighting along side the black ranger but was now alone. She was getting exhausted as she fought against the odds.
Behind her was a clash of the titans. the Red ranger was clashing swords with a faceless hooded creature that looked like death incarnate. Rather than a scythe the black mass of cloak wielded an incredibly large great sword. He was easily besting the red ranger.
A massive explosion shook the entire street blasting the rangers back into a straight line. Their smoking suits dematerialized leaving the rangers demorphed facing there powerfull enemies.
“I grow tired of this game,” the reaper like creature hissed. “now be good, worthless humans, and die quickly.” it continued. Red was the first to shakily get back to his feet. His long dark hair askew and his caucasion skin burned. “we... will... never... give... up” he managed to gasp through grit teeth. “Then you shall die slowly,” the hooded creature mocked. “rgasied!” The behemoth creature of vains responded, “yesss Master.” his voice like garbled gravel. “finish them,” the cloaked mennace gleefully replied before teleporting out.
All the rangers had now gained footing. The monster launched a ball of fire from its mouth. The resulting explosion threw the rangers back to the ground.
The rangers waited for the final strike. It didn’t come.
Struggling to look up they saw a shadowed figure Standing in defensive position in front of the searing flames. As the rangers struggled up they saw the figure was manipulating a beam of electromagnetic energy to form a shield of sort. In a strained voice the figure cried, “Run! I can’t hold it forever.” Noticing the urgency the rangers stumbled out of the way just as the flames over took the figure.
The smoke cleared and the fig...boy was still standing.No older than sixteen the boy sttod tall against the beast in front of him. His clothing was tatered but he was fine. The rangers watched on in awe as the boy charged the beast. As the boy ran... into a clothesline from the behemoth’s tendrils. understanding the odds the rangers morphed forming a defensive line infront of the fallen teen.
The rangers summoned their individual weapons before forming the Strato-cannon. In a burst of explosive energy nothing but raining tendrils remained of the monster.
The rangers Demorphed. then ran to the boy. He was in much more pain than he should have been. Electric energy cackaling all over his body. Then he began to change. very subtle at first. His canines enlongated into short fangs, His eyes changed color. But then the noticable happened. His ears shifted in shape into triangels, and asscended his head about two inches before growing fur. The rangers backed away as the boy staggered to his feet. “What are you?” Ranger red questioned. “Me?” the boy said in an indescribable voice, human but at the sametime something else... something strangely magnificent. The red ranger nodded. “I am what you call Unhuman... ironic isn’t it? that the “suerior” race can’t even use correct grammar in their immature labels?” With that he disappeared in a blur of speed.
“A bloody Freak.” The red ranger through down his jacket. “We were saved by a bloody freak!” “Calm down Chris!” The black ranger ordered. “Who do you think you are Ryan? For cripes sake, aren’t you the least offended?” “No I’m not... and neither is Nickie (nodding at the yellow ranger) or Gred (pointing at the blue ranger.” The two men stood starring at eachother in a stand off despite Chris’s obvious height advantage. Finally Chris backed down. “Where’s Kristen?”
The unhuman who saved the rangers slept in his makeshift bed in an abandoned building. “hello?” a female voice rang through the space. The boy jerked awake. He was now in his undiisguised form. The only difference from what the rangers saw earlier was now he had a tail. “Hello?” the voice called again. The boy scrambled to his feet and began searching for a place to hide. The girl walked into his room, it was Kristen. “I know you’re in here?” she said. The boy steped out of the shadows. “why’s you come looking for me?”
Kristen stepped back temporarily startled by his appearence. She seemed embarrased with herself. “don’t worry.” he said in an attempt to comfort her. “I get that a lot.” he continued sheepishly. “Um...yes well... I came here to invite you to join our team.” Now it was the boy’s turn to be startled. “What? how can you ask me to join when you don’t even know me?” “Exactly we want to know you. After all you saved our lives.” she answered with a smile. “so you don’t mind my appearance.” the boy asked. “not personnaly no.” she said putting out a hand. The boy took it.
“You asked it to join us?” Chris bellowed. “First of all his name is Cyan...” Kristen tried to retalliate but Chris cut her off. “I don’t care what his name is. We don’t know him.” At that point a man stepped into the room. “Commander Stith” Chris said stifly springing to attention. “ Lieutenant I’ve been listening to your commotion.” Chris opened his mouth to say something. “You are to cease any further conversation on this subject.” “But sir...” Chris interjected. “That’s an order. Now I want you to be the first to test this kid. combat training. Is that understood.” “Yes sir.” Chris mumbled then a smile crossed his face as the Commander moved on. “Oh most definitely.”
((This is my first attempt at a PR fanfic. I've done Star Trek before and am in the middle of writting a novel but this is my first attempt at something like this. any feed back would be greatly appreciated.))