TyrannoRanger
03-17-2009, 07:09 PM
This is my first time writing something like this. I know it needs alot of work. I'm here to learn so all criticism is welcome. Please tell me what I need to to work on. Thank you for your time.
Chapter 1 Day of the Dumpster
Part 1 the Power
3 beams of light landed outside of a palace on Earth’s moon.
“We only have one shot. It’s now or never. Is everyone ready?” The Tricera Ranger said.
“She will pay for what she did. I will see to it that this is her last day alive” The Tyranno Ranger answered
with anger in his voice.
“You must calm down Zordon. Do not let your anger consume you.” The Tiger Ranger tried her best to calm him down.
“You are our leader. You must keep a cool head. The people of Eltar are counting on us to do this.” The Tricera Ranger explained, “We did not come here to kill anyone. This dumpster will be used to imprison them. When we do that we can return to Eltar and see that they are punished by the law. This war will soon be over.”
“Your right about one thing, this war will soon be…” The Tyranno Ranger was interrupted by the sound of the palace doors opening.
“It is time.” The Tiger Ranger announced to the group.
The three rangers entered the palace. The Tricera Ranger was carrying the dumpster with her. The Tyranno Ranger, Zordon, was focused on one thing, revenge. He was determined to make her pay, for her betrayal and what she did to the love of his life. Thanks to Rita, his love was permanently scarred and had to live on Aquitar to survive. He was alone and it was all Rita’s fault. The sound of another door opening could be heard throughout the palace.
“Rangers, take out your blade blasters. The enemy nears.” Zordon commanded his team
The three rangers pulled their guns from the side of their suits and pointed them in the direction of the noise.
“Ha ha ha” Laughing of an all too familiar voice entered the room while its owner walked in.
“Goldar!” The Tricera Ranger yelled out.
“Yes it is me. It’s time for the three of you to die.” Goldar answered.
The three rangers began shooting at Goldar. The golden monkey blocked the blasts with his sword and began to laugh once again.
“Your puny guns won’t work on me.” Goldar laughed
“How about this? Power Sword!” Zordon called on his legendary weapon. A sword formed in his hand and he ran at Goldar. Goldar swung his sword. Zordon blocked the blade with his.
“We’ve got to help him.” The Tricera Ranger said.
“You’re not going anywhere.” The Tiger Ranger heard before an arrow hit her in the back of her helmet. The Tiger Ranger fell to the ground. The Tricera Ranger noticed that the arrow had pierced her helmet. Blood was dripping from the hole.
“Dulcea!” He yelled. He bent over and pulled the arrow from her helmet.
Goldar slashed at Zordons chest causing sparks to fly. Zordon immediately slashed back. Goldar fell to the ground. “Now’s my chance.” Zordon thought to himself. He grabbed Goldar and threw him into the dumpster. That’s when he noticed the Tricera Ranger pulling an arrow out of Dulcea’s helmet. He then turned to see where the arrow had come from. “Ptera Ranger.” He spoke with hatred in his voice.
“I, Rita Repulsa have come to defeat the three of you. When I do Zedd and I can live together for eternity.” Rita proclaimed
“Don’t forget about me sis.” The Mammoth Ranger added. He was standing at her side with his legendary weapon out as well. “Cosmic Cannon!” He yelled as he fired it at Zordon, scoring a direct hit to his chest. Zordon flew back and hit the wall behind him. As he rose to his feet he noticed he was next to the stairs leading to the Throne room. He turned around and climbed the stairs.
“Dulcea, you are in no condition to fight. You must return home.” The Tricera Ranger urged her as she rose to her feet.
“I don’t have enough power left to return home. I must stay and fight.” Dulcea said weakly.
“No, you must leave. According to my calculations you have enough power to reach Phados.”
“Phados! That planet is deserted; you have a much better chance of living if you stay here and fight.” Rita said.
“She’s right Ninjor. There’s nothing on Phados. I will surely die there.” Dulcea replied.
The Mammoth Ranger readied his axe and shot it once again. This time he aimed it at Dulcea. Ninjor jumped in front of the blast.
“Mighty Mace!” He called upon his legendary weapon. He spun the mace in a circle in order to block the blast from the Mammoth Rangers axe. “Phados is near the colony KO-35, you can get helo from them.” Ninjor turned and pressed the button on Dulcea’s wrist, activating it. She teleported away in a yellow beam of light.
“That was foolish of you Ninjor, now you must face us alone. Battle Bow!” She yelled out as she fired an arrow at Ninjor. Ninjor rolled out of the way and stabbed the Mammoth Ranger in the chest with his mace.
“Rito!” Rita yelled out.
“It’s ok sis. I have a plan, remember? Just make sure they don’t kill Ed. Power down!” He threw his power coin at Rita. His body slowly began to disappear. Rita caught the power coin and put it in her gun’s holster.
“I’m sorry Rita. I did not mean to kill your brother.” Ninjor told her.
“I don’t care what you meant to do! He’s dead and it’s all your fault!” Rita fired another arrow.
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Meanwhile in the Throne room…
Zordon entered and saw Zedd sitting in his throne.
“Hello Zordon, I’ve been waiting for you.” Zedd rose from his throne. “My love, Rita has told me so much about you. How are you?”
“Don’t play with me Zedd. I plan on getting my revenge for what Rita did. She burned the face of the love of my life so I will return the favor by burning the whole body of the love of her life!” Flame covered Zordon’s Power Sword. He swung it in front of him and watched as the flame consumed Zedd’s body, killing him.
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“I don’t care what you meant to do! He’s dead and it’s all your fault!” Rita fired another arrow.
Ninjor used his mace to block the arrow. He swung his mace. Rita jumped out of the way and fired yet another arrow. The arrow hit Ninjor on his shoulder. He stumbled back as another arrow hit him. He used his mace to help him get back to his feet. He pulled out his blade blaster and fired at Rita, catching her off guard. She got hit in the foot and fell over, dropping her battle bow.
“It’s over Rita. We win.” He threw Rita into the dumpster and began to close the lid.
“Aren’t we forgetting something?” Zordon interrupted him as he entered the room.
“Baboo and Squatt, I almost forgot. Where are those two at?”
“You win! You win!” Baboo and Squatt yelled out as they ran and jumped inside the dumpster.
“That was easy.” Ninjor laughed.
Zordon looked around and asked, “Where’s Dulcea?”
“She was injured. I sent her to phados to recover.”
“I see. It’s a shame. This battle has taken a lot out of me. What’s next Ninjor?”
“We don’t have enough power to return to Eltar like we originally planned. That required all three of us to combine our power. We’re gonna have to leave the dumpster here.”
“And what if they escape?”
“We will return to Earth and wait for that day to come. Our Zords are already there. If she returns we will be ready.”
“That may be in thousands of years. You are a robot you will survive as long as no one turns you off. What about me? I will die in another 50 years.”
“Hmm…” Ninjor begun to think. “There is one solution but it requires you to give up your body. “
“What is it Ninjor?”
“I can seal you in another dimesion. You will be able to communicate with this world through a glass tube that will project your face for others to see. ALPHA 5 will take care of you.”
“If Rita returns will I be able to leave that dimension and join the fight?”
“No, once I seal you in there you must pick someone else to become the next Tyranno Ranger.”
“So be it. If it’s the only way for me to survive thousands of years then it must be done.”
“Let’s go to Earth my friend. We can begin the process when we get there.” Zordon and Ninjor teleported to Earth in beams of Red and Blue light.
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10,000 years later
Jason Scott arrived at the Youth Center for his Monday afternoon karate class. “Hey Ernie, what’s up?”
“Nothing much, Jason. Are you going to the big game Friday?”
“Are you kidding? That’s gonna be a football game for the history books. Angel Grove versus Stone Canyon. Winner wins the playoffs. I wouldn’t miss it for anything.”
A bunch of kids in white robes stood waiting for their class to start.
“It’s just about 3:30. It looks like your students are ready.” Ernie pointed at the kids standing and waiting.
“Yeah. I haven’t even gotten ready.” Jason ran to the locker room so he could change into his karate uniform.
Ernie turned to the young girl in yellow who had just been sitting at the counter for awhile, drinking her shake. “Hey Trini.”
“Hi Ernie.” She replied.
“How come you don’t join Jason’s Martial Arts class? He’s a good teacher. Look at Billy; he’s come a long way.”
Trini turned and watched Billy practice. Billy attempted to do a roundhouse kick and fell to the ground.
“Maybe not long of a way.” Ernie laughed.
“Well Ernie, I would but I’ve spent most of my life learning martial arts from my Grandpa. There’s really nothing else I can learn.”
“Fair Enough.” Ernie replied. He turned on the T.V. and began looking for a good show to watch. He realized that every channel had the same news report. He had no choice but to watch it.
“This just in.” The News Reporter spoke into the camera, “The team of astronauts that recently landed on the moon have reported that they discovered a huge palace on the moon’s surface. They also said that once they entered the palace they found what appeared to be a dumpster. They reported hearing voices coming from inside the dumpster. We lost contact with them as they begun to open it. No one knows what happened to them. Stay tuned and we will update you every time we learn something new.”
To be continued...
Chapter 1 Day of the Dumpster
Part 1 the Power
3 beams of light landed outside of a palace on Earth’s moon.
“We only have one shot. It’s now or never. Is everyone ready?” The Tricera Ranger said.
“She will pay for what she did. I will see to it that this is her last day alive” The Tyranno Ranger answered
with anger in his voice.
“You must calm down Zordon. Do not let your anger consume you.” The Tiger Ranger tried her best to calm him down.
“You are our leader. You must keep a cool head. The people of Eltar are counting on us to do this.” The Tricera Ranger explained, “We did not come here to kill anyone. This dumpster will be used to imprison them. When we do that we can return to Eltar and see that they are punished by the law. This war will soon be over.”
“Your right about one thing, this war will soon be…” The Tyranno Ranger was interrupted by the sound of the palace doors opening.
“It is time.” The Tiger Ranger announced to the group.
The three rangers entered the palace. The Tricera Ranger was carrying the dumpster with her. The Tyranno Ranger, Zordon, was focused on one thing, revenge. He was determined to make her pay, for her betrayal and what she did to the love of his life. Thanks to Rita, his love was permanently scarred and had to live on Aquitar to survive. He was alone and it was all Rita’s fault. The sound of another door opening could be heard throughout the palace.
“Rangers, take out your blade blasters. The enemy nears.” Zordon commanded his team
The three rangers pulled their guns from the side of their suits and pointed them in the direction of the noise.
“Ha ha ha” Laughing of an all too familiar voice entered the room while its owner walked in.
“Goldar!” The Tricera Ranger yelled out.
“Yes it is me. It’s time for the three of you to die.” Goldar answered.
The three rangers began shooting at Goldar. The golden monkey blocked the blasts with his sword and began to laugh once again.
“Your puny guns won’t work on me.” Goldar laughed
“How about this? Power Sword!” Zordon called on his legendary weapon. A sword formed in his hand and he ran at Goldar. Goldar swung his sword. Zordon blocked the blade with his.
“We’ve got to help him.” The Tricera Ranger said.
“You’re not going anywhere.” The Tiger Ranger heard before an arrow hit her in the back of her helmet. The Tiger Ranger fell to the ground. The Tricera Ranger noticed that the arrow had pierced her helmet. Blood was dripping from the hole.
“Dulcea!” He yelled. He bent over and pulled the arrow from her helmet.
Goldar slashed at Zordons chest causing sparks to fly. Zordon immediately slashed back. Goldar fell to the ground. “Now’s my chance.” Zordon thought to himself. He grabbed Goldar and threw him into the dumpster. That’s when he noticed the Tricera Ranger pulling an arrow out of Dulcea’s helmet. He then turned to see where the arrow had come from. “Ptera Ranger.” He spoke with hatred in his voice.
“I, Rita Repulsa have come to defeat the three of you. When I do Zedd and I can live together for eternity.” Rita proclaimed
“Don’t forget about me sis.” The Mammoth Ranger added. He was standing at her side with his legendary weapon out as well. “Cosmic Cannon!” He yelled as he fired it at Zordon, scoring a direct hit to his chest. Zordon flew back and hit the wall behind him. As he rose to his feet he noticed he was next to the stairs leading to the Throne room. He turned around and climbed the stairs.
“Dulcea, you are in no condition to fight. You must return home.” The Tricera Ranger urged her as she rose to her feet.
“I don’t have enough power left to return home. I must stay and fight.” Dulcea said weakly.
“No, you must leave. According to my calculations you have enough power to reach Phados.”
“Phados! That planet is deserted; you have a much better chance of living if you stay here and fight.” Rita said.
“She’s right Ninjor. There’s nothing on Phados. I will surely die there.” Dulcea replied.
The Mammoth Ranger readied his axe and shot it once again. This time he aimed it at Dulcea. Ninjor jumped in front of the blast.
“Mighty Mace!” He called upon his legendary weapon. He spun the mace in a circle in order to block the blast from the Mammoth Rangers axe. “Phados is near the colony KO-35, you can get helo from them.” Ninjor turned and pressed the button on Dulcea’s wrist, activating it. She teleported away in a yellow beam of light.
“That was foolish of you Ninjor, now you must face us alone. Battle Bow!” She yelled out as she fired an arrow at Ninjor. Ninjor rolled out of the way and stabbed the Mammoth Ranger in the chest with his mace.
“Rito!” Rita yelled out.
“It’s ok sis. I have a plan, remember? Just make sure they don’t kill Ed. Power down!” He threw his power coin at Rita. His body slowly began to disappear. Rita caught the power coin and put it in her gun’s holster.
“I’m sorry Rita. I did not mean to kill your brother.” Ninjor told her.
“I don’t care what you meant to do! He’s dead and it’s all your fault!” Rita fired another arrow.
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Meanwhile in the Throne room…
Zordon entered and saw Zedd sitting in his throne.
“Hello Zordon, I’ve been waiting for you.” Zedd rose from his throne. “My love, Rita has told me so much about you. How are you?”
“Don’t play with me Zedd. I plan on getting my revenge for what Rita did. She burned the face of the love of my life so I will return the favor by burning the whole body of the love of her life!” Flame covered Zordon’s Power Sword. He swung it in front of him and watched as the flame consumed Zedd’s body, killing him.
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“I don’t care what you meant to do! He’s dead and it’s all your fault!” Rita fired another arrow.
Ninjor used his mace to block the arrow. He swung his mace. Rita jumped out of the way and fired yet another arrow. The arrow hit Ninjor on his shoulder. He stumbled back as another arrow hit him. He used his mace to help him get back to his feet. He pulled out his blade blaster and fired at Rita, catching her off guard. She got hit in the foot and fell over, dropping her battle bow.
“It’s over Rita. We win.” He threw Rita into the dumpster and began to close the lid.
“Aren’t we forgetting something?” Zordon interrupted him as he entered the room.
“Baboo and Squatt, I almost forgot. Where are those two at?”
“You win! You win!” Baboo and Squatt yelled out as they ran and jumped inside the dumpster.
“That was easy.” Ninjor laughed.
Zordon looked around and asked, “Where’s Dulcea?”
“She was injured. I sent her to phados to recover.”
“I see. It’s a shame. This battle has taken a lot out of me. What’s next Ninjor?”
“We don’t have enough power to return to Eltar like we originally planned. That required all three of us to combine our power. We’re gonna have to leave the dumpster here.”
“And what if they escape?”
“We will return to Earth and wait for that day to come. Our Zords are already there. If she returns we will be ready.”
“That may be in thousands of years. You are a robot you will survive as long as no one turns you off. What about me? I will die in another 50 years.”
“Hmm…” Ninjor begun to think. “There is one solution but it requires you to give up your body. “
“What is it Ninjor?”
“I can seal you in another dimesion. You will be able to communicate with this world through a glass tube that will project your face for others to see. ALPHA 5 will take care of you.”
“If Rita returns will I be able to leave that dimension and join the fight?”
“No, once I seal you in there you must pick someone else to become the next Tyranno Ranger.”
“So be it. If it’s the only way for me to survive thousands of years then it must be done.”
“Let’s go to Earth my friend. We can begin the process when we get there.” Zordon and Ninjor teleported to Earth in beams of Red and Blue light.
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10,000 years later
Jason Scott arrived at the Youth Center for his Monday afternoon karate class. “Hey Ernie, what’s up?”
“Nothing much, Jason. Are you going to the big game Friday?”
“Are you kidding? That’s gonna be a football game for the history books. Angel Grove versus Stone Canyon. Winner wins the playoffs. I wouldn’t miss it for anything.”
A bunch of kids in white robes stood waiting for their class to start.
“It’s just about 3:30. It looks like your students are ready.” Ernie pointed at the kids standing and waiting.
“Yeah. I haven’t even gotten ready.” Jason ran to the locker room so he could change into his karate uniform.
Ernie turned to the young girl in yellow who had just been sitting at the counter for awhile, drinking her shake. “Hey Trini.”
“Hi Ernie.” She replied.
“How come you don’t join Jason’s Martial Arts class? He’s a good teacher. Look at Billy; he’s come a long way.”
Trini turned and watched Billy practice. Billy attempted to do a roundhouse kick and fell to the ground.
“Maybe not long of a way.” Ernie laughed.
“Well Ernie, I would but I’ve spent most of my life learning martial arts from my Grandpa. There’s really nothing else I can learn.”
“Fair Enough.” Ernie replied. He turned on the T.V. and began looking for a good show to watch. He realized that every channel had the same news report. He had no choice but to watch it.
“This just in.” The News Reporter spoke into the camera, “The team of astronauts that recently landed on the moon have reported that they discovered a huge palace on the moon’s surface. They also said that once they entered the palace they found what appeared to be a dumpster. They reported hearing voices coming from inside the dumpster. We lost contact with them as they begun to open it. No one knows what happened to them. Stay tuned and we will update you every time we learn something new.”
To be continued...