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qtpunkstar27
07-12-2008, 02:12 AM
Hey I'm back and ready to start my PR09 Fanfic. I call it Power Rangers RPM (Rangers Per Machspeed). Please feel free to comment and criticize it. But please keep the criticize to a minimum. P.S. If the certain character profile pictures are yours I'm sorry and don't mean to take from any of you just using picture for my own Fanfic.

Power Rangers R.P.M. (Rangers per Mach speed)
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Red Mach-On Ranger- Emily Parker is the first female red ranger, chosen by their instructor because he felt she was outgoing and could lead the team. She was very persistent at what ever she does. She tends to get side bored very easy. That is also why their instructor chose her for the job. He feels that being the leader of the team will help her keep focus on one thing. She bonds with the Eagle Mach vehicle. She uses the Mach Saber as her weapon.
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Blue Mach-On Ranger-Lucas Carter is the shy type but likes to cook to express his emotion. He and Emily have been friends since they were young. He's looked out for Serenia when her parents died. He is very considerate of other always wanting to give people a second chance. He bonds with the Bison Mach vehicle. His weapon is Mach Launcher.
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Yellow Mach-On Ranger- Karone, She was once evil and went by the name Astronema. Before she experience being a pink ranger, she feels to lead the team like her brother Andros did. She bonds with the Bear Mach vehicle. She uses the Mach Bullet.
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Black Mach-On Ranger-Tyson Alexander is the active person of the group, he is filled with courage and act like he is the best. He also thinks he knows everything. He only cares for himself until he was faced taking care of an injured Quinn. He bonds with the Dasher Mach vehicle. His weapon he uses is Mach Laser which is a cannon
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Green Mach-On Ranger-Quinn Carlson is the kindest and nicest person in the group, he was found by Tyson in an alleyway beaten up and unconscious. His memory was wiped out but he had a wallet with his ID in it. He is the second fastest person in the world. He bonds with Shark Mach vehicle. He uses the Mach Axe for his weapon.
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Lucy Gaia- She really doesn't have any evil in her. She just willing to do anything for her good friend Giva. She is the second in command for the Gaia clan.
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Isuka Gaia- He is the leader of the Gaia clan and his body is entirely in Machine. He gained the ability to create machine monster if he just thinks about it. He also create machine minions called Eon Bots.
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Giva Gaia- he is the third in command for the Gaia. He hate Eric for what he done in the Grand Prixe. He seeks revenge on Eric. His brother is Isuka.
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Eon Bots-Minions of the Gaia clan. They have no personality.

Start of the story will be out in a couple hours to days
for the mean time here is the title to the first 4 episode (Chapter)
Episode One Race for Power part 1

Episode Two Race for Power part 2

Episode Three Friend of Foe part 1

Episode Four Friend of Foe part 2

Sorry for any mistake, working as fast as i can to make a good Fanfic:)

Shycode
07-12-2008, 02:23 AM
I enjoyed the character bios you wrote, and also enjoyed reading through the prologue. However, you may want to go back and re-read it to fix some grammar errors that will make it come across better. Also, it may help if you put spaces between each new piece of dialogue to make it easier to read. Nice imagination.

qtpunkstar27
07-12-2008, 02:23 AM
Hey If anyone can help I can't upload any of the pictures i had for this fanfic. I frequently check this fourm site every day. So if anyone would like to help PM me. I feel very new at this. Thanks a whole bunch. Nevermind about this i was told by a reliable source imageshack could help.

qtpunkstar27
07-12-2008, 11:56 PM
Hey to all that view this site i don't want any harm so Disney if you see this fanfic please look into the person that plays Quinn Carlson Just kiding to all hope you enjoy this fanfic.