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MMDoomParty
05-03-2008, 02:10 PM
It isn't long, and I only wrote one, but I think it turned out fairly good. I would have gone into a little more detail with some parts, but I couldn't have it too too long. There are a few parts where I have some pointless sentences that talk about the smell or taste of something. I just had to put in a few sentences for senses in there, for the assignment.



=================Three Way Dance=================


3099, Earth 2, 53:03 A.M.

“People of the Machine Empire, and Alien Mutant Nation, we must now decide who will go back in time to the year 2020, for the attack. I, King Mondo, leader of the Machine Empire with Queen Trakeena, leader of the Alien Mutant Nation will be the commanders of this mission and will pick 4 warriors to aid us in taking over the first Earth!”

The two machine warrior’s chosen were, (King Mondo’s son) Prince Gasket, and Silo. The two Alien Mutants were Scorpina, and Mandilok. With these 6 warriors, lead by their respective King and Queen, heading back in time to take over Earth One it looked as if the human race had a very short future.

2020, Earth 1, 6:42 P.M.

“…And finally, Hunter. You also have been promoted to Class A of the Earth 1 S.P. Troopers. You 5 will be the first line of defense against any attacks against the Earth, congratulations and good luck.” Said S.P. Trooper Chief Jack. Jack took a deep breath, looked at the 5 troopers and walked towards his newly made robot.
“LMNOP, could you whip me up a cheeseburger please?” Asked Jack.
“Sir” Hunter said. “LMNOP is the factories name for it, are you ever going to give it a real name? By the way, that cheeseburger smells fantastic, almost as good as you sir!”
As Jack devoured the delectable cheeseburger he said.
“Why thank you Hunter, it tasted even better too! And yes I will eventually. I just haven’t thought of the right name, you can’t rush these things.”

The S.P. Troopers are a new defense squad team created in 2014. With special armor, weapons and vehicles, they risk everything to protect the Earth. The 5 chosen are, Wes, Tori, Dustin, Tommy, and Hunter. Each knowing the risks they’re taking by signing up to be an S.P. Trooper, but nobody was expecting what was to come.

Back on Earth 2….

“Father, I don’t understand why you want to go back in time to take over Earth 1, why can’t we just stay here?” said Prince Gasket.
“My objective isn’t only to take over Earth 1 my son. I’ve had it up to HERE with that, ‘Alien Mutant Nation.’ I’m going to take their leaders back in time, take over Earth 1, and when they least expect it, DESTROY THEM!!” The sound of King Mondo’s voice was so loud; it killed a few birds outside and awoke a few sleepy robots. It also attracted the attention of Mandilok. Mandilok crept towards the door of King Mondo’s room and got close enough to listen in.
“Father that’s fantastic! I’m not too keen on that nation myself, I can’t wait to get my hands on those freaks!”

Mandilok runs off to tell Queen Trakeena about what he’s heard. He passes Silo on his way to her palace, they bump shoulders but Mandilok says nothing and keeps walking. Silo stares off at Mandilok confused, and continues to King Mondo’s room.

“Queen Trakeena, guess what I heard!” Mandilok was nearly out of breath after running to the Queen’s palace. “King Mondo’s plan is to destroy all of us when we go back in time! We must do something to stop him! I passed Silo on the way here, he smelt really really bad, almost as bad you my Queen!”
“Why thank you Mandilok, I haven’t bathed in over 42 years, I would HOPE I’d smell worst then that tin head! Now, about King Mondo, I knew he wasn’t trustworthy; I was going to betray him anyways. The Alien Mutant Nation will be in control of both Earths by the end of this mission!” Queen Trakeena then proceeded to tell Mandilok all about her plan to take over Earth 1, 2 and the Machine Empire.

King Mondo, Queen Trakeena and their warriors then proceeded to go back to 2020 and start their mission. The tension was so thick you could cut it with a knife, as easy as butter, which tastes really really good. As soon as Mondo and Trakeena arrive on Earth they start destroying everything in their path thinking nothing of the dead bodies all around them. They were so dead, they already started to rot, and it smelt like really really bad rotting dead skin. After about 2 hours of killing buildings and people, Mondo got tired of it and told Trakeena he wanted to go back. He had to wait a bit, because Trakeena and Mandilok were eating somebody, and it probably tasted really really bad, because he was the first person they killed, so he’s been sitting there for a while.
Mondo and Trakeena then waited to see who would board the time machine first, so they could stab the other in the back, but before anyone moved, the S.P. Troopers showed up.

Hunter asked the troopers, “Ready guys?”
Everyone in unison spoke, “READY!”
Hunter gave the command, “Trooper Transform!”
The 5 Troopers then transformed into colorful uniforms plated with awesome armor. They then destroyed the King and Queens 4 warrior’s with their weapons. King Mondo proceeded to throw the Troopers around like rag dolls while Trakeena destroyed all their weapons. Wes, Tori, Tommy and Dustin died, but Hunter was still fighting on.

Hunter then tried to cry out “You’ll never defeat us King Mondo…” But could only utter “you” as he was then thrown into a wall and got knocked unconscious; it looked as if Earth 1 was doomed. Then out of nowhere, LMNOP roundhouse kicked Trakeena in the face sending her into the time machine. He and King Mondo then proceeded to fight almost to the malfunction, but King Mondo decided to retreat when he got the chance, and told everyone that he’d be back, stronger then ever.

The next day when Hunter regained consciousness he asked what had happened to King Mondo and Trakeena.

“The King and Queen went back to the future." Jack explained. "I guess I made a mistake in picking you five to protect the earth, because you didn’t exactly do a very good job. Four of you died and you got there two hours late. You’ve been revoked of your S.P. Trooper duties, I’m giving them to my robot.”

“Sir, could you at least give him a name, I don’t think my wife is going to be very happy after she hears I’ve been replaced by part of the alphabet!” Hunter’s final words before passing away.

Jack spoke, “I think I’ll name him……Mondo.”

spiritforcewarriorx
05-04-2008, 10:24 AM
this is awesome

MMDoomParty
05-05-2008, 02:05 PM
Thanks. So far I haven't gotten one bad review for it. Just, I haven't gotten many reviews at all.

Laufwunder
05-05-2008, 04:32 PM
Good story! Short but good.

But I hope you can answer me a question!
What exactly is teached in a science-fiction class?

Greetings

MMDoomParty
05-05-2008, 08:50 PM
It's a class about cyborgs, space, time travel, robots, aliens etc. Took it senior year last year.

Laufwunder
05-06-2008, 05:31 AM
Senior year is the last year in college or?
I don't know much about american school system!

But thanks

MMDoomParty
05-06-2008, 10:33 AM
Senior year of High School.