ImportHenshin
04-14-2008, 09:30 PM
Power Rangers
Soul Modifications
This will be the official thread for my first fic, Power Rangers - Soul Modifications.
I'll be writing more chapters whenever I manage to finish one I think flows best. So, if you like, leave what you will and keep checking back for progression.
Any criticism and comments are accepted.
Episode 1
Chapter I
As Lee forced his left foot down on the clutch, the bottom of his black Adidas gripped the pivotal pedal and in a quick, in-sequence motion, he accelerated the wheels’ revolutions with his opposite foot while snapping his left foot from the clutch, sending his sleek, black Nissan 240SX S14 around the last tight bend. The finish line was just ahead of him, and there awaited the rest of his crew, Soul Mods, and the relinquishing sense of victory.
Now across the line, Lee slowed his car to a stop and pulled the keys from the ignition. The car continued to run due to its turbo timer. As he exited the car, he threw his black hood back from his head, revealing his shortcut, brown hair. The blue in his eyes had no longer been within shadow. The rest of his crew approached him with smiling faces, pleased to learn that they are still undefeated, despite the odds.
Eric moved his long blonde hair from his blue eyes and pushed it a bit into his blue hood as he grasped Lee’s hand, “Good job, man,” he said as he patted Lee on the back, “good job.”
“Baby!” exclaimed Michelle as she jumped on Lee, her beautiful, long, black hair covering his face. “You won more territory for Soul Mods!”
Lee pushed back Michelle's hair, gently caressing her cheeks as he looked into her blue eyes, “Thanks, baby,” he said, smiling, “I love you.”
“I love you too…” Michelle replied before the two shared a quick moment of affection, followed by a quick kiss.
“Would you two stop?” James asked as a smirk of humor echoed through his hardened jawline, “It’s our fifth win. That cute shit isn’t necessary.”
Lee let out a brief laugh as he let Michelle down to her feet from his arms. “What?! C’mon, man,” he began as he focused his attention towards James, “that run was down and you know it.”
James laughed, shaking his head and Lee’s shoulder, “I know, I know, it was decent, I’m just playin’, bro.”
A Toyota Supra Mark IV suddenly hurled around the last bend, tires screaming and smoking behind it. The darkness of night made the vehicle appear as black as the midnight sky, its true navy tint only shining in the scattered light. Pebbles and stones of gravel tossed down the cliff side of the bend as the machine navigated through the turn, its rear end hanging over the edge and tires grazing the point of pavement. Once the vehicle smoothed out from the sharp corner, it sped to the finish line and slid around a nearby light post, the front kit almost touching the circular, metal tubing. Now visible, the Supra was of a dark, “midnight-blue” color with wheels of white wrapped in black rubber.
After a few seconds of being idle, the car slowly crept towards Lee’s Nissan and the Soul Mods crew. The black-tinted, driver-side window of the Toyota crept down, revealing a well-dressed man with long, brown hair that had been pulled back into a pony tail. His eyebrows flexed in anger above his gray eyes and his mouth conveyed dissappointment. “Keep your land,” he stated, glaring at Lee, “I’ve got mine.” As the window crept back up, the Supra took off; sliding back up the bend it had just slid down.
“Skyler is pretty pissed he didn’t win our territory,” James stated as he watched the Supra disembark up the corner.
“I’d be pissed, too…” Lee replied, his arm gently wrapped around Michelle’s shoulders, “…but he wouldn’t have raced if he didn’t want the territory.”
“He deserves it…” Eric began as he started to walk back to his car, a candy-blue Toyota Supra Mark III, “he’s always bragging about his 2JZ and shit, and he just got showed by a SR20DET, not even topped.”
“It’s the area, we’ve had this downhill since our beginning. It’s our spot, our land,” Lee explained, “our shit. No one’s ever goin’ to take it.”
Michelle broke loose from Lee’s gentle grasp, “Let’s head home, everyone,” she began, with a whisper of enthusiasm building in her tone, “we’re still undefeated. Let’s party! Five victories in a row!”
Michelle and Lee both entered the black Nissan as Eric entered his blue Toyota. Lee inserted the key into the ignition and the SR powered up, the turbo spooling from a slight rev of the engine while it sat neutral. The tinted-black driver-side window eased down, “You comin’ over tonight, man?” he asked James as he leaned his left arm on the window seal, the other extended towards the stick shift.
James walked backwards in the direction of his red Honda S2000 while focusing his attention towards Lee, “I’ll stop by for a bit, I don’t have too much work to do, at least tonight,” he replied.
“Work? When do you ever work anymore?” Lee and Michelle both laughed.
“I’m actually workin' on a new project…”
“Are you?”
“Yeah, it’s a bit of something you may not expect.”
“Well, we can talk ‘bout it at my place, man.”
Lee shifted from first gear and accelerated, quickly shifting into third as the turbo whined and whistled.
Soul Modifications
This will be the official thread for my first fic, Power Rangers - Soul Modifications.
I'll be writing more chapters whenever I manage to finish one I think flows best. So, if you like, leave what you will and keep checking back for progression.
Any criticism and comments are accepted.
Episode 1
Chapter I
As Lee forced his left foot down on the clutch, the bottom of his black Adidas gripped the pivotal pedal and in a quick, in-sequence motion, he accelerated the wheels’ revolutions with his opposite foot while snapping his left foot from the clutch, sending his sleek, black Nissan 240SX S14 around the last tight bend. The finish line was just ahead of him, and there awaited the rest of his crew, Soul Mods, and the relinquishing sense of victory.
Now across the line, Lee slowed his car to a stop and pulled the keys from the ignition. The car continued to run due to its turbo timer. As he exited the car, he threw his black hood back from his head, revealing his shortcut, brown hair. The blue in his eyes had no longer been within shadow. The rest of his crew approached him with smiling faces, pleased to learn that they are still undefeated, despite the odds.
Eric moved his long blonde hair from his blue eyes and pushed it a bit into his blue hood as he grasped Lee’s hand, “Good job, man,” he said as he patted Lee on the back, “good job.”
“Baby!” exclaimed Michelle as she jumped on Lee, her beautiful, long, black hair covering his face. “You won more territory for Soul Mods!”
Lee pushed back Michelle's hair, gently caressing her cheeks as he looked into her blue eyes, “Thanks, baby,” he said, smiling, “I love you.”
“I love you too…” Michelle replied before the two shared a quick moment of affection, followed by a quick kiss.
“Would you two stop?” James asked as a smirk of humor echoed through his hardened jawline, “It’s our fifth win. That cute shit isn’t necessary.”
Lee let out a brief laugh as he let Michelle down to her feet from his arms. “What?! C’mon, man,” he began as he focused his attention towards James, “that run was down and you know it.”
James laughed, shaking his head and Lee’s shoulder, “I know, I know, it was decent, I’m just playin’, bro.”
A Toyota Supra Mark IV suddenly hurled around the last bend, tires screaming and smoking behind it. The darkness of night made the vehicle appear as black as the midnight sky, its true navy tint only shining in the scattered light. Pebbles and stones of gravel tossed down the cliff side of the bend as the machine navigated through the turn, its rear end hanging over the edge and tires grazing the point of pavement. Once the vehicle smoothed out from the sharp corner, it sped to the finish line and slid around a nearby light post, the front kit almost touching the circular, metal tubing. Now visible, the Supra was of a dark, “midnight-blue” color with wheels of white wrapped in black rubber.
After a few seconds of being idle, the car slowly crept towards Lee’s Nissan and the Soul Mods crew. The black-tinted, driver-side window of the Toyota crept down, revealing a well-dressed man with long, brown hair that had been pulled back into a pony tail. His eyebrows flexed in anger above his gray eyes and his mouth conveyed dissappointment. “Keep your land,” he stated, glaring at Lee, “I’ve got mine.” As the window crept back up, the Supra took off; sliding back up the bend it had just slid down.
“Skyler is pretty pissed he didn’t win our territory,” James stated as he watched the Supra disembark up the corner.
“I’d be pissed, too…” Lee replied, his arm gently wrapped around Michelle’s shoulders, “…but he wouldn’t have raced if he didn’t want the territory.”
“He deserves it…” Eric began as he started to walk back to his car, a candy-blue Toyota Supra Mark III, “he’s always bragging about his 2JZ and shit, and he just got showed by a SR20DET, not even topped.”
“It’s the area, we’ve had this downhill since our beginning. It’s our spot, our land,” Lee explained, “our shit. No one’s ever goin’ to take it.”
Michelle broke loose from Lee’s gentle grasp, “Let’s head home, everyone,” she began, with a whisper of enthusiasm building in her tone, “we’re still undefeated. Let’s party! Five victories in a row!”
Michelle and Lee both entered the black Nissan as Eric entered his blue Toyota. Lee inserted the key into the ignition and the SR powered up, the turbo spooling from a slight rev of the engine while it sat neutral. The tinted-black driver-side window eased down, “You comin’ over tonight, man?” he asked James as he leaned his left arm on the window seal, the other extended towards the stick shift.
James walked backwards in the direction of his red Honda S2000 while focusing his attention towards Lee, “I’ll stop by for a bit, I don’t have too much work to do, at least tonight,” he replied.
“Work? When do you ever work anymore?” Lee and Michelle both laughed.
“I’m actually workin' on a new project…”
“Are you?”
“Yeah, it’s a bit of something you may not expect.”
“Well, we can talk ‘bout it at my place, man.”
Lee shifted from first gear and accelerated, quickly shifting into third as the turbo whined and whistled.