yami senshi youkaiou
07-19-2007, 02:40 PM
All right Ya filthy munchkins, some of you may remember that a few months ago The G man had a challenge to write a fanfic about him. Well that brought me back to this one idea I had for a henshin hero fic.
The idea was that it was inverse on the whole toku hero formula of the same hero battling a different monster every week that was mainly inspired by all the debate caused by dekaranger, and some of the newer kamen rider shows about weather or not having as many henshin characters in a toku hero show was going to be the new standard.
The idea I had was there was this monster from outer space called the Torakoid. For an idea of what it's like think the movie Slither, and the alien that took over everyone in that movie except when it takes over individual people they can morph into semi humanoid monsters, and when they've merged it becomes a monster like you see in an episode of Ultraman, That and it can change forms to suit it's environment I.E. in water it can be an aquatic monster, in a forest it can be a plant monster, etc
Well the idea was that an advanced alien race skilled in magic and technology created a way to turn humans into magic cyborg creatures who could fight the Torakoid, and my original concept was that it could be a chain fic with each of us writing the "episode" where the writer is the magic cyborg, and George was a guy working for Minnesota's state paranormal organization who finds a downed alien ship on Earth that still has all the devices that where used to to turn humans into magic cyborgs.
So not only is he the first magic cyborg but he is also responsible for all of us getting our henshin devices and becoming magic cyborgs, and each "episode" would be about all of us being the magic cyborg, and fighting a different incarnation of the Torakoid.
Now the reason I scrapped the original idea was because I thought it was too George-esque and chain fics don't turn put so well. But now you get to experience this fruit of my twisted imagination.
Ladies and Gentlemen I proudly present Magic Cyborg Darkbird starring our very own George.
Magic Cyborg Darkbird
By B.B. Killarney
Prologue
It was a fairly moonlight not very cloudy night at a lake near Minneapolis Minnesota. Two middle aged men where sitting in a fishing boat listening to the local country music station, with rusty old rods. “It’s a nice night ain’t it Bill. “Yep” Bill said. “These fish aren’t biting much, are they Bill?” Bill’s friend lamented. “Yep” Bill said in the same half interested monotone he said the last “yep”.
Then his friend turned to him, and realized Bill wasn’t even paying attention to him so he jokingly said “Hey Bill, your son got abducted by some terrorist organization that wants to conquer the world by turning people into half human half animal cyborgs, and they turned him into some cricket themed cyborg, but he escaped before they could brainwash him, and now he’s trying to stop them from taking over the world”. Once again Bill gave another monotone “yep”. Then Bill’s friend took a newspaper that had been lying on the boat, and slapped him with it.
“OW, What the hell did you do that for Ned? ” asked a now angered Bill ”Well Jesus Christ Bill, I’ve been trying to talk to you for the last five minutes and all you’ve been saying is ‘yep, yep, yep’ like a dinosaur in a frickin kids movie” Ned rebutted. “Well Jesus Christ Ned some us are actually trying to catch fish over here”.
Just then a meteoric object began fall through the atmosphere, and fell into the other side of the lake from where Bill, and Ned who were still arguing were fishing. “Huh, what was that?” asked a now perplexed Ned. “God damn it Ned that was probably a fish, probably the biggest fish well ever see in our god damned lives, and we missed it because of you” Bill ranted. “Oh my fault well…. As Ned and Bill were arguing on, the object that fell from space at the bottom of the lake cracked open, and a strange faint glow began to emanate from it.
The idea was that it was inverse on the whole toku hero formula of the same hero battling a different monster every week that was mainly inspired by all the debate caused by dekaranger, and some of the newer kamen rider shows about weather or not having as many henshin characters in a toku hero show was going to be the new standard.
The idea I had was there was this monster from outer space called the Torakoid. For an idea of what it's like think the movie Slither, and the alien that took over everyone in that movie except when it takes over individual people they can morph into semi humanoid monsters, and when they've merged it becomes a monster like you see in an episode of Ultraman, That and it can change forms to suit it's environment I.E. in water it can be an aquatic monster, in a forest it can be a plant monster, etc
Well the idea was that an advanced alien race skilled in magic and technology created a way to turn humans into magic cyborg creatures who could fight the Torakoid, and my original concept was that it could be a chain fic with each of us writing the "episode" where the writer is the magic cyborg, and George was a guy working for Minnesota's state paranormal organization who finds a downed alien ship on Earth that still has all the devices that where used to to turn humans into magic cyborgs.
So not only is he the first magic cyborg but he is also responsible for all of us getting our henshin devices and becoming magic cyborgs, and each "episode" would be about all of us being the magic cyborg, and fighting a different incarnation of the Torakoid.
Now the reason I scrapped the original idea was because I thought it was too George-esque and chain fics don't turn put so well. But now you get to experience this fruit of my twisted imagination.
Ladies and Gentlemen I proudly present Magic Cyborg Darkbird starring our very own George.
Magic Cyborg Darkbird
By B.B. Killarney
Prologue
It was a fairly moonlight not very cloudy night at a lake near Minneapolis Minnesota. Two middle aged men where sitting in a fishing boat listening to the local country music station, with rusty old rods. “It’s a nice night ain’t it Bill. “Yep” Bill said. “These fish aren’t biting much, are they Bill?” Bill’s friend lamented. “Yep” Bill said in the same half interested monotone he said the last “yep”.
Then his friend turned to him, and realized Bill wasn’t even paying attention to him so he jokingly said “Hey Bill, your son got abducted by some terrorist organization that wants to conquer the world by turning people into half human half animal cyborgs, and they turned him into some cricket themed cyborg, but he escaped before they could brainwash him, and now he’s trying to stop them from taking over the world”. Once again Bill gave another monotone “yep”. Then Bill’s friend took a newspaper that had been lying on the boat, and slapped him with it.
“OW, What the hell did you do that for Ned? ” asked a now angered Bill ”Well Jesus Christ Bill, I’ve been trying to talk to you for the last five minutes and all you’ve been saying is ‘yep, yep, yep’ like a dinosaur in a frickin kids movie” Ned rebutted. “Well Jesus Christ Ned some us are actually trying to catch fish over here”.
Just then a meteoric object began fall through the atmosphere, and fell into the other side of the lake from where Bill, and Ned who were still arguing were fishing. “Huh, what was that?” asked a now perplexed Ned. “God damn it Ned that was probably a fish, probably the biggest fish well ever see in our god damned lives, and we missed it because of you” Bill ranted. “Oh my fault well…. As Ned and Bill were arguing on, the object that fell from space at the bottom of the lake cracked open, and a strange faint glow began to emanate from it.