power rangers 3 Revenge of dark specter

[blackdinoranger5]

this is the prequel to how zordon and how everyone came to be i bet uring why 3 becuse i plan on doin my story backwards 3-2-1 like that also im holding audtions for ppl whoever wants to play zedd, rita, divatox, lexian and many others this is gonna be Cesteial fury big BIG lets begin tho:) :023: ive also started working on sets and costumes.


(we start zoomed back seeing 2 warriors fighting zedd and zordon the camera zooms in closer t see them in this awsome fight goes on for a while they finish just saying for fun zordon and zedd are both human in all these shots till the end)

Zordon: Good training my young apprentus maybe someday you'll be more powerful then me and lead your own rangers someday.(he laffs)

Zedd: (he laffs with him) yes master well im hopeing that is if the morphin council will let me be ranger.

Zordon: Sure they will i've trained you good theres no doubt they'll make you a ranger. Plus you've trained with me so you'll be a ranger no problem. Isn't time you train rita now zedd your gonna be late.

[blackdinoranger5]

Zedd: yes master thank you master. I will meet with you later for more training the more power the better to impress the morphin masters( he bows to zordon then leaves zordon smiles and is happy for him)

(meanwhile on the m51 galaxcy we see rita and master vile. master vile is hidden with a dark shadow so you cant see him to well but we see the side of ritas face master vile speaks)

Vile: rita your training with me is nearly finished. Soon you'll be able to beat zordon and all those morphin phoneys now go train with tell him nothing about our training or i'll destroy you understand!

rita: yes daddy meanest.

(zedd is waiting outside of ritas place divatox shows up to and they battle fades to black)
NEXT DAY

[blackdinoranger5]

(we see zordon and zedd standing standing in the middle of the morphin masters they are sitting in a circle around them. The main ones we see are lerigo and klaudious Zordon speaks)

Zordon: My young apprentus zedd is ready to be known as a ranger and hopefully the next great Zare of our lifetime.

Zedd: thank you master yes i am ready.

(lerigo leans to klaudious and tells him something in his funny language. Klaudious speaks)
Klaudious: i agree with lerigo i don't think your ready i sense much anger and distress in you. We just dont think your ready or stable enough to handle the power.

(Zedd starts to yell and is upset)

Zedd: distress!!?? distress!!!?? no im not distressed i admit i was upset when the troobians destroyed my mom but im fine now. How can you deny me the power?!! I trainedith zordon he said i would be the most powerful ranger of all time!!! i'm the chosen one!! i can't believe this!!

Zordon: zedd calm down wait outside for me
(zedd leaves the room as he leaves he gives the council an evil look zordon countinues to talk to the council)

Zordon: Are you sure about this descion morphin council. I mean i thought he was the chosen one. He's the perfect choice for a ranger. Plus i trained him since the destruction of zoltar... please reconsider.

klaudious: zordon i agree with you. However we fear if he has the power he may go on to do evil he has much anger and stress in him and with power he may go on and do unspeakable things.

zordon: yes morphin council. Thank you for your time.

[blackdinoranger5]

(outside waiting is rita, divatox, squatt, baboo, rygog, elgar, finster and alpha 5 rita speaks)
rita: Zedd! what happened? what did they say?

Zedd: they said i wasn't ready to handle the power. They said i have to much anger. Those fools!!! I can handle it i know i can!!!

rita: i believe you! i believe you relax.

zedd: outta my way!
( zordon walks out of the room and starts talking to zedd theres light on zordons side but not zedds zordon starts talking to him)

zordon: zedd i understand your upset but i dunno what else to do the council made there decion. It means i must i must pass on the 5 power coins dinozords, thunderzords, zeo zords, and... something else i've been working on to a new team of rangers.

zedd: but why you can't do that you chose rita, me, and divatox to be rangers and defend all thats good and decent you can't simply take it away!

zordon: i told you its not up to me but the morphin masters.

zedd: then what you trained me for nothing!!? you said i was the chosen one. That i would get the power. Well they won't take the power i already have or the power i get training from you. I won't let them!!(raises fist in anger)

zordon: i know i know they won't don't worry. I'll talk to them later and see if they'll reconsider.

zedd: thank you master. ( he laffs evily he leaves the room and heads to dark specters planet which is made of hot lava. We see dark specter in human form. Zedd starts talking to dark spacter there are quantrons at both his sides)

[Crimson Liner]

1. Spelling mistakes. Quite a few.

2. grammar mistake. A lot.

3. Punctuation mistakes.

4. Run-on sentences.

Your fic makes my head hurt.

[Storm Warrior2]

It makes my whole body hurt

[Red_Ranger2003]

^ Is it just me, or do you only post in threads with bad fanfics? (No offense blackdinoranger5, but the improper grammar and spelling make my eyes hurt.)

[blackdinoranger5]

im sorry i can't spell good or anything else good but lets continue

[blackdinoranger5]

Dark specter: ohhh Zedd nice to see you how did the meeting with the morphin masters go?

Zedd: They turned me down... They deneyed me the power I hate them all! I don't even have a zord!!

dark specter: Oh don't worry zedd. Those morphin masquetos couldn't handle your power, but i can train you make you more powerful then you already are. You do trust me don't you?

zedd: yes demetrious

dark specter: I can make you do things you never thought possible...That you couldn't learn from those morphin masters, plus i do have a zord for you.
(they step outside and camera zooms back we see a large gold foot near zedd and dark specter)
dark specter: serpentera(echos they walk back in the room)

Zedd: id be honored demetrious specter

dark specter: ohhhh please( says with a smile) call me DARK SPECTER.
they walk back in the room morticon shows up in flash of blue light morticons head is the same just his body isn't machine)

Zedd: Morticon what are you doing here!!??

Morticon: oh he didn't tell you he's trained me for years!

dark specter; I didn't know you two knew each other this is unexpected hmmm i wonder whose stronger ha you zedd or the great morticon??

[Storm Warrior2]

im sorry i can't spell good or anything else good but lets continue

That made me stare blankly, then laugh out loud.

SBTLOL?

[GundamExia]

Oh dear lord.....

~Poor grammar/spelling.
~Missing punctuation.
~Script format is used extremely poorly here. Seriously, I have yet to see a single person use it properly.
~Plot is just boring and awful. Same on the dialogue.
~Each part of this that you post is far too short.
~What kind of sense does it make to start with Part 3 and move backwards to Part 1? I mean, if it was like Star Wars where you had 4-6, then went back and showed 1-3 as prequels, it might make more sense, but not the way you have it. It feels like this would be just like being a new person to Star Wars and watching "Return of the Jedi" first, and then moving backwards to "A New Hope".

im sorry i can't spell good or anything else good but lets continue

No, let's not continue. If you admittedly have issues with spelling, grammar, and other basic requirements for good writing, why wouldn't you work on improving both before writing anything?

Besides, even if you're really that lazy, doesn't your word processor have a spell checker?

Now, I'm going to go back to Tenchu before this thread makes me think "What the hell?" again.

[Crimson Liner]

I fixed it...

Dark Specter: Oh, Zedd, nice to see you. How did the meeting with the Morphin Masters go?

Zedd: They turned me down... They denied me the power. I hate them all! I don't even have a zord!

Dark Specter: Oh, don't worry Zedd. Those Morphin Mosquito's couldn't handle your power, but I can train you make you more powerful then you already are. You do trust me, don't you?

Zedd: Yes Demetrius.

Dark Specter: I can make you do things you never thought possible... That you couldn't learn from those Morphin Masters, plus I do have a zord for you.

(As they step outside, we pan out to see a large gold foot next to Dark Specter and Zedd.)

Dark Specter: Serpentera...

(The word echoes as they walk back into the room.)

Zedd: I'd be honored, Demetrius Specter.

Dark Specter: Oh please, call me Dark Specter.

(In a flash of blue light, Morticon arrives. His body is the same but his head is no longer machine.)

Zedd: Morticon! What are you doing here!?

Morticon: Oh, he didn't tell you? He's trained me for years!

Dark Specter: I didn't know you two knew each other. This is unexpected. Hmm, I wonder who's stronger, you, Zedd, or the great Morticon?

[blackdinoranger5]

( Zedd and Morticon get in an awsome battle zedd cuts off both his hands and legs.Dark specter cheers oddly not surrounded by quontrons at his side)

Dark Specte: finish him!!! you have more power then he does!! DO IT!!! FINISH HIM!!!( zedd swings his staff like this / morticon blows up)

ZEDD: that felt good...(ponders for moment) i must go.
(he starts running but dark specter calls him)

Dark specter: Zedd wait... before you go did zordon tell you about the zeo crystal??

Zedd; zeo crystal?? no... what is it?

Dark Specter: Its the most powerful crystal in the universe. It taps directly into the morphin grid thats what gives its power. If you get a hold of it it'll give you power beyond your imagination. You'll be an unbeatable force. Why you'd be more powerful then zordon himself, and the morphin masters would be at your mercy.
( Zedd smiles but runs off to tell zordon and the others of his victory divatox, rita , zordon, rygog and the others are in the room there is light on zordons side but not on everyone elses.)

Zedd: Zordon, Rita, Divatox, good news i destroyed morticon. Now he won't bother us anymore. Demetrious said he'd help train me and give me more power, and with your training zordon i'll be unbeatable. Which reminds me rita, divatox, goldar we must train come along.

Zordon: Zedd im not sure thats a good idea right now you and me must continue. They've decided to give you another chance.
( zedd turns half way so we only see the side of his face)

Zedd: I don't want there pitty. If you want me will be training with demetrious.
( we see dark specter sitting in his chair to the window on his lava planet the morphin masters barg in)
Kladious: Dark Specter your charged with the destruction of the rangers on alphenzentary 5, and the betrayel of the morphin masters! You'll be sent to a prison on KO-35 were you evil can cause no harm!

( fire shoots out of his hands he destroys 8 of the masters its between klaudious, lerigo and dark specter on this lava lanet. Zedd , rita and divatox run in he tells rita and divatox to wait divatox stupidly runs in and gets hit with a blast by lerigo that was ment for dark specter. it hits divatox on the side of the face she screams in pain)

Divatox: I'll get you Lerigo!! and your golden key!!

(lergio runs off now its just klaudious , dark specter and zedd)

Zedd: wait!!! he must be judged.!

Klaudious: No he's already charged with destruction of the rangers on alphensentary 5. He's going to a prison cell on KO-35! He won't gain control over anything again!

( klaudious kicks him in the klaudious uses his sword to block the fire from dark specter it hits his face and shows his real form)

Dark Specter: I'll destroy you and Zordon will be next!

Klaudious: I won't let that happen! i have more power over you you'll be gone forever!

Dark Specter: NO NO YOU WILL BE DESTROYED!!! POWER!! I GOT POWER!
( it gets intense klaudious is destroyed and falls into little gold sparkles dark specter falls out the window and falls into the lava,and is destroyed... so we think)
Zedd: No!! He's gone. Our master is gone!!

( As all thats going on we see morticon being rebuilt in a galactic hospital. We see him geting new arms and new legs he rises up and yells)

Morticon: No one will defeat me again No One!!! ( camera zooms we see zedd and goldar talking on lava planet)

Goldar: Whats your plan now my lord? ( goldar looks like how did on zeo)

Zedd: I dunno I thought i would deffenitly be a ranger. Zordon trained me well. The fact he's with the republic bother me a bit , but its no big deal, but with the morphin masters destroyed... I guess its us who are in control ( he says with an evil smile)

Goldar: You know rita has her own army of puttys maybe you should make some of your own. It'll help gain control of people who don't wanna follow your ways my lord.

Zedd: What a brilliant idea.
( zedd goes to a clay planet and starts creating his own puttys with Z's on their chest and kness we see him walking in from of them leading them. However goldar and finster aren't there. Zedd and all the army of puttys climb into serpentera. Scene ends fades to black. We see divatox putting on the mask that we've grown to love she looks into camera and smiles evily.elgar sees her and speaks. She is in the subcraft)

Elgar: ha i like the new look Auntie D. Is it halloween already? ( he laffs some more divatox turns and gives him a look and says she must she zordon)

( they all meet at the palace on the moon rita, goldar, zedd, divatox, squatt, baboo, finster, elgar and rygog. Zedd see's rita and gives her the 6 power coins. Zordon gave zedd the coins to hold on to earlier for luck before the meeting with the morphin council for luck he gave them to rita for the same reason zedd says to rita.)

Zedd: Hold on to the dragon coin give it to the next great warrior. (A.K.A. Tommy)

Rita: I promise I will.

[GundamExia]

....Seriously, did you pay any attention to anything anyone said?

All you've done is give us a slightly larger dose of headache-inducing crap.

[roc da mic]

yall think rippin on the bull gonna help. Seriously chill. i it fail's it fails.

[GundamExia]

yall think rippin on the bull gonna help. Seriously chill. i it fail's it fails.

We're trying to tell him what he's doing wrong so MAYBE he can try to improve himself. It helps more than sugarcoating stuff and saying "Not bad" and "Keep at it" when it's god awful. I'd rather be blunt and have a chance of someone improving their work so we have another competent writer here than letting them fail.

Though I guess you wouldn't understand, since the same happens with everything you post and there's never an improvement.

[Crimson Liner]

I attempted to work on his latest chapter ... but I had too much of a headache from trying to figure out so I quit.

[Red_Ranger2003]

~What kind of sense does it make to start with Part 3 and move backwards to Part 1? I mean, if it was like Star Wars where you had 4-6, then went back and showed 1-3 as prequels, it might make more sense, but not the way you have it. It feels like this would be just like being a new person to Star Wars and watching "Return of the Jedi" first, and then moving backwards to "A New Hope".


I did that once. It wasn't as bad and confusing as reading this fic.

[blackdinoranger5]

again i apologize. As you can see im not a writer this is my first time at it. Sure i did it in school but this is for fun but again im sorry.

[blackdinoranger5]

(meanwhile we see the lava planet begin to rumble and move. An arm with 3 claws come out, then another arm. We see 2 legs molding down. the planet starts to into a reptilic like creater. Finallt a neck pops out with the face of dark specter. He's a Giant monster now , he turns and roars to the screen. scene ends fades to black. We go back to moon palace with zordon and everybody zordon speaks to rita.)

ZORDON: whats going on here? give me the power coins they'll be safe and protected with me.
( she gives him the coins but says)

RITA: fine but i get to keep the dragon coin, zord, and dagger.

Zordon: agreed.
( zedd see's that everythings going well he starts to head to te lower part of the palace to get the zeo crystal that dark specter told him about earlier zordon see's him by the corner of his eye. Rita calls her puttys zordon beats them all and catches up to zedd.)

ZORDON: Zedd!! what are doin?!

Zedd: Dark specter told me the zeo crystal would give the ultimate power. No one's gonna stop from getting it! not even you!(pauses for a moment) You turned the council against me, you took the power that was suppose to be mine!

Zordon: you did that yourself! Zedd this power thing its messing you up your looseing control of of yourself!

Zedd: if you not with me your against me. I am in control, I have an army to likes you have never seen before! They will help make people worship at my feet and i will be in complete with that, and the zeo crystal at my side!

Zordon: hmmm really? I fight for the republic they don't want a dictator they ant a democracy...I'm gonna stop you from getting the zeo crystal.

Zedd: you will try.
( zordon and zedd get in a awsome battle climbing down the stair fight till they enter the caves of deception, dark specter in his human form show up long with goldar, rita and her minions, divatox, everyone's cheering take zordon down and the camera zooms around till we see zordon and zedd face to face and all the illisions are gone. Zedd and zordon continue to fight they are fighting in front of the crystal now they pause zordon is standing in front of the crystal)

Zordon: don't even think about it

Zedd: you under estimate my power!
(zedd flips to crystal zordon cuts of both his legs zordon turns around to think zedd would give up ,but he doesn't he grabs the crystal but doesn't pick it up a flash of gold light flairs up much like the in C2D. Zedd starts explodeing all over and screaming in pain his closes are burned away tell he's just scortched cloths and muscle, also zedds legs were burned to muscle to after they got cut off. Zordon see's all this and yells)

Zordon: Zedd NO!!!

( with what strength zedd has left he trys to crawl to zordon he yells in pain as zordon zpeaks to him.)

Zordon: why zedd?!! You were the chosen one!! You were suppose to lead the rangers not the opposite! i treated you like a brother!(he says with saddness)

ZEDD: I hate you! I hate you!(he screams with pain)
(Zordon turns and heads back up to the palace with rita and all them rita see's zordon and yells)

RITa: What happened? Is zedd ok?!!
(zordon doesn't speak rita keeps yelling)

Rita: i want an answer what happened to him?!!!!

Zordon: i have to go meet up with alpha we will talk later.

RITA: Fine!! (She storms out and heads too the lower part of the palace to find zedd.)
(divatox tells zordon she must go find lerigo she's afraid e's hurt from the battle earlier. Zordon knows what shes up to bt lets her leave anyway he's confused and stunned from the battle with zedd. Zordon leaves and heads to a secret headquaters were he meets up with lerigo, king lexian, dimitria, blue senturon, phantom ranger and delphine of the aqutians)

Zordon: I'm glad you all made it. however we don't have much time.

Dimitira: why have you called us here? Is everything alright Zordon?

Zordon: the reason i have called you here is because i think for now it be better if we all split off from each other. I fear things are about to get much worse in our part of the universe.

Dimitria: I agree , but we can all still keep in cantact with each other if we need to.
(they all agree. Lexian speaks)

Lexian: zordon just wondering hows the alpha 5 i gave you working out? he hasn't disfuntioned has he?

Zordon: (he laughs with happyness) Alphas working fine, he raves about you all the time im actrally gonna see him after im done on the moon.

Lexian: thats good, but now i must go as well my daughter is expecting a son.

Zordon: may the power protect us all.
( they all leave as thats goin on we see zedd in the same galactic hospital was at excpt zedd got the special touch up the best of its time. Zedd screams as huis legs are being lazer swon back on. he get sprayed with an spray that gives him an invisable coat of skin that we can't see. The braces to legs are already put on as well as his gear on his arms , zedds gripping his staff the whole time. The last part of zedd is finally put on his grill and his head gear with the Z.The table rises, we see zedd's new body all muscle and chrome. the camera zooms in on his face. Zedd hears a voice in his head)

DARK SPECTER: Lord Zedd Rise.

ZEdd: Yes Dark Specter.( he says with his new evil voice rita and goldar are waiting at the side entrence rita speaks.)

[GundamExia]

....Oh dear lord, you've ripped off Star Wars.

This is officially the most pathetic thing I've ever read. You should be ashamed of yourself :shame:

[Storm Warrior2]

Well, at least it's better then Eragon.

[Red_Ranger2003]

Like Eragon?

EDIT: Never mind, SW2 said it before me...

[Storm Warrior2]

...double pwn.

[roc da mic]

We're trying to tell him what he's doing wrong so MAYBE he can try to improve himself. It helps more than sugarcoating stuff and saying "Not bad" and "Keep at it" when it's god awful. I'd rather be blunt and have a chance of someone improving their work so we have another competent writer here than letting them fail.

Though I guess you wouldn't understand, since the same happens with everything you post and there's never an improvement.

dog that was just cold. understandable but cold.

[Red_Ranger2003]

dog that was just cold. understandable but cold.

...did you just call him a dog?

[GundamExia]

dog that was just cold. understandable but cold.

Cold, maybe.

True, definitely.

[Crimson Liner]

Cold, maybe.

True, definitely.

I just went and read roc da mic's work...

I think I prefer this one.

[blackdinoranger5]

thank you everyone for the cold words and comments this is the last part of then im finished, but lets continue.

[GundamExia]

thank you everyone for the cold words and comments this is the last part of then im finished, but lets continue.

How about you spare us the unorginal, ripped off headache and just not continue from here?

But one last question: Why copy off of Star Wars badly, instead of writing something original?

[blackdinoranger5]

RITA: No its me Rita your loyal and faithful servant.
(zedd turns his face, not completely looking at her but looking at the wall sorta. Zedd is still on the table bolted on. Zedd speaks to her.)

ZEDD: Rita do we still have the power coins or the dinozords?

Rita: No!(she screams in anger and jeoliousy) Zordon has them!!
( Zedd screams arrrrrrrrrrrrgh in anger he brakes out of the strong metal braces that hold him. he's still screaming things explode and the room turns bright red. The room suddenly turns normal dark again and zedd begins to yell at rita and goldar not looking at them)

Zedd: Rita i trained you as much and as best i could. I have a mission for you. I want you to destroy Zordon his next team of rangers, and his zords!!! Take goldar with you and the rest of your minions!!!(Goldar yells)

Goldar: but my lord?!!

Zedd: I'll be takeing these!!
(Zedd still not looking at them takes godars wings with a blast of electric energy. Zedd continues to yell)

Zedd: Rita one more thing don't you fail me!!! Because I"LL KNOW AND I"LL RETURN!!!!!

Rita: yes master

Zedd: Now GO!!!!
(Zedd destroys the planet that help him. Rita and goldar leave back to the moon palace sqautt, baboo, and finster are already there. we zoom back and see the palace is big and white. We suddenly see dark specters hand its a shadow go from the top of the palace and down, the palace is damaged a bit frfom zordon and zedds battle but by dark specter shadow touchinf it went from white to a dark gray color. Zordon teleports in along with rita and her minions. Zordon is alone. Rita talks to him.)

Rita: Zordon theres something i have to tell you. Im the one responsible for the destuction of m51 galaxcy, im the one who put you and morphin masters in the battle ring. Im the one your haveing this melenia battle with.

Zordon: ( he's shocked) Why, who put you up to this? Did zedd know?

Rita: Master vile my father and no zedd didn't know. I did it for the same reason anyone would the power., but i'll make a truce with you to stop all this destruction... give me the power coins.

Zordon: ( ponders for a moment and is sweating but knows what he has to do)NO..I won't give you the power coins.

Rita: fine you asked for this!!!( she screams and blast a ray at zordon she misses him but hits his staff a tiel spirlling vortex show up zordon screams no!!!! he is teleported to his command center on earth were he is stuck in a time warp alpha see him and talks to him. Zordon speaks first.)

Zordon: Alpha re the power coins in the morphers?! Are the zords hidden?!

Alpha: yes zordon whats happening?!!!
(he screams in panaic and confusion)

Zordon: there isn't time!!( rita is on the palace cheering for her victory thinking she'd won and her work was finished. Zordon concentrates his energy and blasts a ray on the moon that traps rita and her minions in a space dumpster. it leaves the palace and flys through space. Rita yells)

Rita: You haven't seen the last of rita repulsa ( she laughs)
( we are taken back to the command center zordon in his tube and everythings fine .Scene ends fade to black. WE see a black screen that says with text on the bottom of screen 10,000 years later early 1993. Scene begins we see the two astronauts on the moon finding the space dumpster that crash on the moon. They open it . The MMPR intro begings and we see how the rangers are made. fades to black, and crdits begin rolling.)

THE END

[Storm Warrior2]

Thank God it's over.

[GundamExia]

Thank God it's over.

Now if only he had prevented it from being written in the first place.