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SPD Gold
05-25-2007, 03:06 PM
Energized - Power Rangers Space Patrol Delta

Author's note: I had some time, so I made this episode of Space Patrol Delta which never got made. This comes after Robotpoloza and before Katastrophe I seen the Japanese version of this episode thinking it should've been reacted for America, so I made it. Enjoy.

STARRING
Brandon Jay McLauren as Jack Landors
Matt Austin as Bridge Carson
Chris Violette as Sky Tate
Monica May as Z Delgado
Alycia Purrott as Sydney Drew
John Tui as Doggie Cruger
Brett Steward as Omega Ranger
Michelle Langstone as Kat Manx
Barnie Duncan as Piggy

Latham Gaines as Mesogog
Katrina Devine as Enervine

[Power Rangers Space Patrol Delta Opening theme]

***
Delta Base Corridor

Sydney was racing down the Delta Base Corridors armed with her SPD Blaster until she saw a D-Squad Cadet sitting against the wall and on the floor with his eyes closed. This cadet was actually Danny who we saw before back in the ‘Recognition’ episode. She bent down to touch him but when she did, he fell over.

“Just what is going on here?” Sydney asked herself.

Her Delta Morpher went off and she answered it.

“Commander Cruger?” she answered unsurely. “Syd! Wherever you go, don’t enter the Command Centerrr urrguu!” Doggie struggled. “Commander! Commander! Commander, what’s going on!?” she asked but Doggie already fainted away so he couldn’t say anything else.

Sydney desperately wanted to know what was going on. There was cut to one section of the corridor to see Sydney with her blaster held to her arm. She slowly walked into the Command Center but it was her devastating view to see, Doggie, Jack, Bridge, Sky, Z, and Omega Ranger, laid down unconscious. Sydney walked slower and slower until she would fall to her knees and drop her SPD Blaster.

***
Command Center

“I can’t believe this is happening.” was all she could say to herself.

Jack was regaining some of his consciousness as he managed to move around a bit. Sydney was happy to see him moving.

“Jack! Are you okay?” she asked as she put him around her arms. “No! But we’re counting on you…to regain our life energy for us.” Jack replied in a wimpy voice. “Who did this to you guys?! Please tell me!” “Some monster. She, She…”

Jack fainted in her arms before he could finish the rest of his sentence.

“Jack!…Jack!… … …Jack…” Sydney shouted as she was about to cry.

When Sydney finally gave up she stood up and turned around and was taken by surprise by Enervine who put her crab-like weapon right to Sydney’s belly.

“Gotcha!” Enervine taunted as she took Sydney by surprise.
“What have you done with my comrades!?” Sydney asked with anger.
“I stole their life energy. Now I have to take yours just so you don’t get in the way of my plans.” “Not happening!”

Sydney did a flip just before Enervine was about to take her life energy. When she landed to the floor…

“SPD Emergency!” she called as she took out her Delta Morpher.

She insta-morphed. The Pink Ranger ran towards Enervine and tried to hit her with her Patrol Baton but Enervine ducked as she flipped back and went down the jump tube to Pink’s Delta Runner 5. Pink Ranger went down the jump tube to follow her but before she got the chance to catch up with Enervine…

***
Sydney and Z’s room

Sydney in her pajamas jumped right out of bed and she was surprised to find that she overslept due to the nightmare she just had.

“It was just a dream. Thank goodness.” she said to herself.
“Sydney Drew please report to the Command Center immediately.” Kat called via the intercom.

This didn’t really give Sydney a chance to clear her mind. We don’t see her change into her B-Squad uniform…for obvious reasons.

***
Delta Base Corridor

Sydney was holding her head as if she had a headache. She was also walking slow. When she reached the Command Center door, she didn’t know whether to walk into it or not. She didn’t know whether she was in a dream or in real life. She walked another step as the door opened itself.

***
Command Center

Sydney was happy to see the Jack, Sky, Bridge, Z, and Omega Ranger as normal.

“Syd, your time of napping is taking a bit too long.” Doggie lamented.
“Sorry Commander. I had a weird dream when I was asleep and I guest I…overslept.” Sydney explained but it’s easy to tell Doggie is not really digging the excuse.
“A dream that you got taller?” asked Jack.
“No! Of course not!” Sydney replied in a defensive tone. “I had a dream that…a criminal broke into the Delta Base and devoured everyone’s life energy except mine…Well she would’ve taken mine but I morphed in time.” she added in a calmer tone.
“Hey, since when do stuff like that happen!?” asked Sky.
“I don’t know!” she replied.
“Hey Syd, did this monster’s face look something like this?” Z asked Sydney.

As she turned around, her face was normal, then it turned to Enervine’s face.

“Yeah…” she replied with a terrified look on her face

The other cadets in the room except for Doggie started to gather around Sydney as to harass her.

“Wait, everyone…stop…Commander do something please!” she cried out.

***
Park

Sydney would strangely find herself here. She walked around some as well as getting the nervous feeling she was being followed. She turned back. There was no one following her. She walked some more. The fear is really getting to her. She looked back again. There were two figures wearing hoodies and she turned back to see two more figures wearing hoodies. The four gathered around her as they would prepare to kill Sydney. She did fight them off all four at a time. She took out her blaster and shot 1 leaving that one exposed as a Krybot as the body electrified. She also revealed the other three to be Krybots. Before she could fight the other three, she fell down the spot on the ground which turned into a giant pothole.

***
Sydney’s Mansion

Sydney found herself at her mansion where she lived before she joined SPD. She’s also in her pajamas.

“My home? I’m home! Yes I’m home. It’s so good to be home! But I should be on some sort of mission…” she said to herself.

Sydney stood up and when she did a giant teddy bear came alive a busted out of her closet. Another one came from under her bed. Luckily she still had her morphed which she would take from her pajama pants‘ pocket. She looked around her room.

“Emergency!” Sydney called before she would morph into the Pink Ranger.

One of the teddy bears wrapped on of her bed’s blankets around Pink Ranger before she has time to attack either of them.

***
Subway train

She didn’t even know she was here and back in her B-Squad uniform.

“Come On! I don’t have time for this nonsense Enervine!” she yelled at Evervine but she was nowhere around the area.
“Shhhhhh!” yelled some civilians on one side of the train as they had their index fingers on their mouths pointing upward.
“Shhhhhh!” yelled some civilians on one side of the train as they had their index fingers on their mouths pointing upward.

She got up off the floor to sit in a seat in front of one male civilian.

“Oh sorry!” whispered an embarrassed Sydney.
“Why am I on a subway train all of a sudden? Just what is going on here? What could Enervine be trying to do?” Sydney asked herself in the back of her mind. Note that that’s a voiceover.

It turns out that that ‘civilian’ was just a Krybot as all the passengers except for Sydney get out of disguise and go to get at Sydney. Sydney does manage to knock them out fairly easily until the train comes to a stop, the doors all open and a Krybot kicks her in the belly, landing her in an area full of trash bags.

***
Junk yard

Sydney is laying face up on top of a pile of trash bags.

“Huh? Where am I now?” she asked herself as she‘s just opening her eyes.

She is looking and reading a poster hung up on the outside of building.

“In love with someone but can’t find the guts to confess your love to them…Call us and let your love be divine…Divine…” she read aloud.

She is looking and reading another poster hung up on the outside of building.

“Losing energy, grab a candy bar…candy bar…Energy…Divine… That‘s it! I‘m supposed to be looking for Enervine.” she remembered.

Just before Sydney gets up, a hand comes up and that hand is around Sydney’s mouth and she can’t seam to get it off her. She falls into the pile of trash and now…

***
Docks

She now finds herself at the New Tech City docks. She awakens and gets up off the ground and looks around a bit. That is until she is shot at by the Deltamax Striker of an evil Pink Ranger.

She is stunned and saying in the back of her mind, “Who is she?” Note how in the American version, Sydney actually morphed before doing any fighting, but in the Japanese version, Umeko didn’t even bother to morph.

“SPD Emergency!” summoned Sydney.

Her morphing sequence is played. We now see two Pink Rangers fighting each other. We don’t know which Pink is Sydney and which one’s the evil one. One Pink Ranger shoots with the Blaster which the other shoots with her Blaster. After a few kicks and to the helmets and bellies, and punches to the faces are being issued the evil Pink Ranger disappears and Enervine attacks her from behind.

“Looking for me Pink Ranger?” asked Enervine.
“Actually Enervine! I am!” Pink replied.
“Well allow me to be of service by making your search a short one.” “Thanks. Now do me one other favor. Let me arrest you.” “It’d be a waist if I’d do that. Now would it?” “I know you’re the one who’s causing this dream stuff so…can I at least please wake up?” “No, no you’re not dreaming. You’re in the real world. I promise. It’s time I take your life energy now.” “If you want it…”

Pink with her Deltamax Striker shoots Enervine in the face twice. She is sent back. There is smoke everywhere and Pink Ranger jumps out from all that smoke finishing her sentence.

“You’re gonna have to take it from me!” finished Pink.

When she lands to the ground, she slashes her about 5 times in both directions as well as a roundhouse kick to the face.

“As you wish Ranger!” Enervine replied.

She uses her heat vision (which Miime wasn’t seen doing in Dekaranger) to push Pink away from her and onto the ground. Enervine picks her up by the neck. She points her claw right at her chest preparing to take her life energy.

“Just one last thing to say before I really take you energy from you. Good-bye-Ran-ger!” Enervine told Pink.

She then shot Pink Ranger in the chest, letting out some purple magic instead of the usual yellow sparks. We now see an infinite area of white space. Pink Ranger is losing consciousness. Pink Ranger falls to her knees and down to the ground all the way. That’s it. We don’t see Enervine anymore. As of now, the final thing Pink can do is complain about not being able to stop Enervine.

“Sorry guys. Kat, please detect me in this condition. I am…finished. I’m sorry I couldn’t save everybody. Good luck the rest of you…” She said to herself and her comrades as the camera zooms from upward away from Pink.

We now get a close-up of Pink’s gloved hand reaching out and falling back down.

“Z, I’m counting on you. Good luck guys. Especially you Z.” Pink finished before fainting completely.

Transition: Kiss to black…

***
Delta Base Medical Bay

Z has her hand on Sydney’s forehead. Notice Sydney is now out of Ranger suit.

“She’s burning up. That monster must’ve sucked the life energy right outta her.” Z commented as she was just letting go and turning to the team shaking her head.
“This has become a very serious issue. We need to find a way to replenish these people’s life energy.” Doggie told them.
“I wonder how many others got their life energy taken.” Jack added.
“MANY!” replied Kat off-screen before the Rangers look to see where her voice came from.

We now get a shot revealing Kat standing in the doorway.

“To replenish their life energy, I think we have to find out where their life energy is going.” Kat added.

We now get a facial shot of all these Rangers in this order Jack, Bridge, Sky, Z, and Omega Ranger.

“I remember. This was no one’s fault but…Sydney shouldn’t gone to investigate this case.” Doggie lamented.

***
Command Center

This is a flashback. On top of the control console, Enervine’s holographic body span slowly in a circle.

“Her name is Enervine. She is wanted for stealing the life energy of several civilians.” Kat explained.
“What could she want with energy like that?” Sky asked.
“What she would do is find a victim she wants and she would wait for the person to sleep and then she would enter his or her dreams to taunt or harass them in their dream, then take their life energy for her magic potion.” Kat explained.
“There’s no such thing as magic.” Jack remarked.
“Well that’s what she calls it. She will store it in her magic potion to give her an infinite amount of life energy so can’t no attack hurt her.” Kat replied.
“Well that seems kinda pointless. No one’s body can’t be that strong!” Omega Ranger implied.
“Commander, I’ll go investigate.” Sydney told Doggie.
“How?” Omega Ranger asked despite the fact that she didn’t ask him.
“Uhh…I’ll go take a nap. I get some clues.” Sydney told Omega and Doggie.
“I’m not so sure about that idea. You may do it, but I’m having Z stay by you in case anything goes wrong during the investigation.” Doggie commanded.
“Roger!” Z implied as she saluted to Doggie.

***
Medical Bay

Flashback’s over. Jack’s confused.

“I don’t get this case at all.” Jack implied.

Bridge does a handstand. This is Bridge’s thinking pose. Doing this, what can be revealed?

“I get it.” Bridge told everyone.

Bridge stands properly.

“All the victims’ energy is in her potion and key to get the victims’ energy back is to find Enervine herself.” Bridge added.
“Good! With that hint we should be able to revive all the fallen people and Sydney.” Omega Ranger replied.
“We also need to catch Enervine before more people drop.” Doggie told them.
“Roger!” replied all six Rangers.

We now get some various shots including Jack and Omega Ranger asking some unfamiliar SPD cadets, Sky and Bridge interrogating Piggy, and Z typing and looking for something on Kat’s computer in her lab and SPD’s background music was playing until then. Z saw something unusual coming from the solar system. She squinted her eyes and looked closer until she saw a robot. This is the EXACT SAME robot we saw back in ‘Reflections 2’ that Jack fought before being captured by Merloc. Z took out her morpher.

“Kat! I found her. She is in a robot out in space.” She told Kat through the Morpher.
“I’ll alert the other Rangers. Go now. Syd doesn’t seem to be feeling any better. Have Sam be her substitute pilot for SWAT Flyer 5.” Kat commanded via the control consol.

She signed off and closed the Morpher and ran away.


***
SWAT Fliers Cockpits

We now get a shot of the five Rangers in SWAT Mode (Except for obviously Omega since he doesn‘t have SWAT Mode) closing their (I don’t know what those things would be called) over their bodies. A boy in a Pink Rangers Zord…doesn’t sound very masculine does it? Anyway,…

***
Outside Delta Base

The Delta Base opens it’s Zord Bay releasing the SWAT Fliers. They fly out and we see them fly into the sky.

***
SWAT Megazord

“SWAT Megazord!” the five Rangers summoned.

***
Newtech City

The head of the SWAT Megazord turns the right way, already finishing the SWAT Megazord. We also hear SPD’s SWAT instrumental theme as the SWAT Megazord goes into space.

***
SWAT Megazord

“Just wait Syd. We’ll resuce you and everyone else. We swear it!” Z told Sydney by holding up her pinky and holding her hand.

***
Galaxy

We get a close-up of Merloc’s white robot.

***
Merloc’s Robot.

“I have gathered many life energy. Gruumm would be so please when I give it to him and Broodwing for assistance in ultimate galactic domination.” Enervine told herself as she did some movement of some of her equipments.

“Enervine!” hollered Z’s voice from the Megazord.

***
Galaxy

We get a close-up of SWAT Megazord and the robot.

“SPD!” she said to herself.
“Freeze!” hollered Z’s voice.

***
SWAT Cockpit

We get a close-up of Z’s helmet and…

***
Galaxy

We get a close-up of SWAT Megazord poiting it’s big guns at the robot.

***
Merloc’s robot

We get a close-up of Enervine.

“I’ll knock you right outta the sky in a second.” said Enervine.

***
Galaxy

We get a close-up of Merloc’s monster opening it’s arms out and shooting missile’s from it’s breasts right at the SWAT Megazord. But an up-side-down SWAT Megazord would be shooting them and destroying them.

***
Merloc’s robot

We get a close-up of Enervine.

“Emergency eject procedure, NOW!” yelled Enervine.

***
Galaxy

The monster robot blow up into bits and a yellowish, purple-like ball fled from it and on Earth.

***
SWAT Cockpit

We get a close-up of Z’s helmet and…

“She’s getting away.” Yellow implied.

***
Galaxy

As the Megazord is following Enervine.

“She won’t get far.” replied Jack’s voice.

***
Factory’s Parking Lot - Back on Earth

We see Enervine running, trying to get away, holding on to her potion with both hands until we see blasts being shot at her and at the ground. She stopped to turn around to see the five Rangers still chasing her.

“That’s the magic potion with everyone’s life energy, right?” asked Yellow SWAT Ranger.
“It’s Judgement Time Enervine!” she added as she took out her Morpher from her SWAT vest and pressed the grey button which released some strange white light and shined in Enervine’s eyes. There’s a close-up of Enervine’s face as she shot blue lasers and then another close-up of the Ranger’s necks, as blue light appeared on their white hoods, and Omega’s blue hood. The Ranger’s bodies started electrifying and they dismorphed, except for Omega Ranger since he can’t dismorph no matter how hard he‘s hit or how powerful the attack.

“It’s my Dreaming Laser.” Enervine implied upon laughing at them.
“When I get in someone’s dream, I’m several times more powerful. Lucky for the victim it only last a short period of time.” she explained to them.
“Sydney, please hold on…We won’t lose or give up.” Z told Sydney.
“Let’s meet in your dream, Yellow.” she implied.

Kiss-to-black transition.

***
Movie Theater

Z found herself in the movies completely by herself. Or is she? Z just sat back and relaxed, totally forgetting the mission. Red Ranger walked from the front entrance of the theater (where the screen is) from the left and stopped in the middle of the theater.

“Jack?” Z asked unsurely.

Red Ranger took out his Delta Blasters from his holsters and began shooting his dual lasers at Z.

“NOT!” Z hollered out.

She ducked down to dodge Red Ranger’s lasers and so she wouldn’t get blasted. She slowly ran off to the back entrance. When she got out of the seat aisle, she took out her SP Blaster and began shooting at Red Ranger but he ducked and it missed. As Z continued running and Red Ranger kept shooting, they continuously blasted at each other but no one was hit. Z finally left the movies from the theater back door.

***
Parking Lot

Z was in relief that she doesn’t have to worry about getting shot. Z was walking backwards. That is until her back hit a creature wearing black and had a gray Frankenstein-like head. This was Mesogog. Note that this is a very brief cameo of Mesogog from Power Rangers Dino Thunder.

“Who in the world are you!?” Z asked.
“I am Mesogog!” Mesogog replied.
“Well I am a Yellow Ranger whom I think you don’t want to mess with.” “I am someone who you would not like to mess with as well! Plus you have no idea how smarter I am than you!”

“Mesogog!” yelled Z.
“You never know where you enemy is anymore, do you.” asked Enervine off-screen.

She looked behind her to find Enervine there.

“Hey guess what Enervine…” she implied.

Upon being unmorphed, she was able to take from behind her back, her Delta Enforcer and her Delta-max Striker, and pointed them both at her chest.

“This one…is for you Sydney.” she implied.

She fired and white light came up which took us back to the real world.

***
Factory’s Parking Lot

“Hey Enervine. I have something that belongs to you.”
“And what might that be?” asked Enervine.

Z taunted her by showing her magic potion.

“How the heck did you get that!” asked a shocked Enervine.
“We released all the stolen civilians’ energy.” Jack told her.

Sydney, in her B-Squad uniform, came from behind and touched Jack and Omega Ranger on the shoulders to tell the team. “All you had to do was take her potion which had the people’s life energy and bust it open. It was that simple.”
“Wow Syd, I never would’ve guessed.” Bridge replied.

All the Ranger were happy to see Sydney as she look enthusiastic and full of energy again. She’s back to her normal healthy state.

“And Enervine, I snagged you potion just before we had our little ‘dream’ and I caught you off guard, and not to mention. I didn‘t really judge you. I just used my special power which made you not pay attention.” Z explained.
“This is our revenge on you for taking our life energy!” Sydney yelled.
“Guys, how ‘bout you let us girls handle this one.” she told the others.
“Fine, but if you need help, we’re steppin’ in.” Omega Ranger replied.
“Hey Syd?” Z called.
“Yeah?” Sydney answered.
“Morph Standby?” “You know it!”

Both Z and Sydney took out their Delta Morphers on “Change Mode”.

“SPD Emergency!” they both called.

Their regular morphing sequence is being played which takes us right into SWAT Mode.

“SWAT MODE!” they both called.

The SWAT Mode transformation is being played.

“Delta Enforcer.” they both called as their Delta Enforcers appeared via broken particles.
“SPD Yellow.” called Yellow.
“SPD Pink.” called Yellow.

Both female Rangers stuck their hands out. All Enervine could do was just look at them. Pink and Yellow ran to her. The other 4 Rangers look at each other puzzled. Enervine fired blue laser blasts at them but the two girl Rangers deflected them with their Delta Enforcers, not only protecting themselves but also protecting the boy Rangers.

“Spin Formation.” commanded Yellow.
“Roger.” replied Pink.
“What!?” yelled Enervine.
“SPIN SHOT!” thy both summoned.

“Judge her Syd!” commanded the SWAT Yellow Ranger. “Right, Enervine! You are accused with numerous crimes including tampering in people’s dreams, taunting them IN their dreams, and more importantly robbing them of their life energy for scientific purposes!” explained SWAT Pink Ranger and Yellow Ranger walked up a bit while Pink was telling the criminal what she was charged with. “Judgement time!” Pink summoned as she took out her Morpher from the holster on her SWAT Vest and pointed at Enervine.

When she pressed the gray button, and the morpher was already on ‘Judge’ mode, there was a clock transition, taking them into a black field, and Enervine moving around. Yellow lowered her Enforcer a bit. They were waiting for a guilt-or-innocence call. We now get a close-up of Yellow’s helmet and Pink’s and the red X flashed on her morpher, declaring that Enervine was guilty.

“Guilt” said Pink SWAT Ranger.
“Tee!” finished Yellow SWAT Ranger.

“Delta Enforcer! Confinement mode!” called Pink as she slid a containment card on the side of the blaster and closed the top.

“Activate!” “Fire!” summoned Yellow.

Both girls put their guns together and pulled the trigger and released two big fireballs which combined into an even bigger fireball and when it would hit Enervine, her body would be broken up into pieces, and transporting her into a containment card which would fly into Pink’s hand as she caught it. Note that Enervine’s next and last appearance would be in ‘Wormhole’ but she is only cloned by Mora’s drawling.

“I hope you can dream 20 years away because that’s how long you’ll be in containment.” Pink taunted.

Both female Rangers powered down by calling “Power Down.”. Sydney and Z put their pinkies together and smiled at each other.

“At least we can go to sleep knowing we don’t have to worry about a monster penetrating our dreams.” Sydney told Z.
“And that the good guys won again…as usual.” Z added.

They continued to smile at each other.

***
Galaxy

We see Gruumm’s ship as well as other flying ships.

***
Gruumm’s ship

“You failed me again! Why! Why must you constantly find someone, you think they can help me, and they wind up destroyed!” yelled Gruumm as he is yelling at Morgana.

Morgana is overwhelmed and insecure (not the word I wanted but the other word I’m looking for can’t come to me right now) by Gruumm yelling at her.

“But it was Broodwing’s idea!” Morgana implied.
“But you mentioned Enervine to us, didn’t you?” “Yes.”

Gruumm is enraged and is screaming.

***
Delta Base - Recreating Room

Bridge is teaching Sydney how to do his thinking pose.

“Okay, don’t think too much. Just relax.” Bridge commanded.

We see Sydney doing a handstand against a wall and next to a few tables. Sydney’s body is about to fall aside.

“SYD! Watch out!” Bridge yelled but he was too late as he tried to catch Sydney but failed as her bottom legs hit and broke a near-by table.
“Ow.” she implies off-screen.

Jack holds his chin and implies “She’s gonna feel that tomorrow.”

The End. Next episode, Katastrophe.

SPD Gold
06-14-2007, 01:48 PM
And this is based on the 'Requiem World' episode from Tokusou Sentai Dekaranger. I wonder why they didn't remake this episode.

angel_warrior
06-14-2007, 10:23 PM
This is awesome!!!

I like it

izout
06-14-2007, 10:50 PM
And this is based on the 'Requiem World' episode from Tokusou Sentai Dekaranger. I wonder why they didn't remake this episode.

Because the monster for it was used in Wormhole.

SPD Gold
06-15-2007, 09:34 PM
Because the monster for it was used in Wormhole.
To: Izout

No. No. They used her in Wormhole because they didn't react 'Requiem World'. I don't see why they didn't do it.

To Angel Warrior:

It's okay if you do like this episode because of this but do you just like it for the Mesogog cameo or the whole episode itself?

Red_Ranger2003
06-15-2007, 09:50 PM
And this is based on the 'Requiem World' episode from Tokusou Sentai Dekaranger. I wonder why they didn't remake this episode.

So you bumped your own fanfic for that small fact. Wow.

To: Izout

No. No. They used her in Wormhole because they didn't react 'Requiem World'. I don't see why they didn't do it.
Uh..because they can't..."remake" (react?) every episode.

To Angel Warrior:

It's okay if you do like this episode because of this but do you just like it for the Mesogog cameo or the whole episode itself?

...

SPD Gold
06-16-2007, 09:36 AM
So you bumped your own fanfic for that small fact. Wow.

No I didn't.

Uh..because they can't..."remake" (react?) every episode.

I know that. But this was a good one.

Maxell
06-16-2007, 09:53 AM
You did bumped the thread. It's obvious and is something that you can't hide because you posted this thing almost like a week ago and then you posted something a week later. Maybe you wanted replies...

And react is a mistake. It's not "react" is remake or adapt and maybe even translate the episode, react?? I have never seen an episode react so far.

Spider-Man
06-16-2007, 10:03 AM
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SPD Gold
06-16-2007, 04:22 PM
You did bumped the thread. It's obvious and is something that you can't hide because you posted this thing almost like a week ago and then you posted something a week later. Maybe you wanted replies...

I thought 'bump' meant like jumping of the topic like talking about Magiranger and replying with politics. In other words spam.

And react is a mistake. It's not "react" is remake or adapt and maybe even translate the episode, react?? I have never seen an episode react so far.

I should say 'react'. 'Remake' would be Disney going to Japan and getting the Dekaranger actors and redoing the whole Dekaranger episode. 'React' would be getting new actors to act as the real actors and copying the whole episode from there. If you seen the American Power Rangers (which I'm sure you have), yes you did see a Sentai episode 'reacted'.

* No flaming or overly incitive behavior. Violation results in 2-day ban.
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Gotcha! You coulda saved me from a ban there.

Spider-Man
06-16-2007, 04:29 PM
I thought 'bump' meant like jumping of the topic like talking about Magiranger and replying with politics. In other words spam.
You thought wrong. It means double posting in your own thread, when the second post isn't anything that contributes to your thread, thus could've been edited into your original post.

Ryutaros
06-16-2007, 04:30 PM
I should say 'react'. 'Remake' would be Disney going to Japan and getting the Dekaranger actors and redoing the whole Dekaranger episode. 'React' would be getting new actors to act as the real actors and copying the whole episode from there. If you seen the American Power Rangers (which I'm sure you have), yes you did see a Sentai episode 'reacted'.He's making fun of you because the definition you're attempting to apply to 'react' doesn't exist. Remake, revision, take your pick. But yeah, sticking random words together because you can't be bothered to look up a proper word that fits your needs... not the most intelligent-looking thing to do.

Maxell
06-16-2007, 04:37 PM
I'm sorry but, do all of your threads have to end up like this?

Ryutaros
06-16-2007, 04:51 PM
I'm sorry but, do all of your threads have to end up like this?
Yes, because otherwise the one-shot stories would be like any other one-shot and fall off the page after a few days. By bumping and arguing, he feels like he's still getting readers even close to a month after posting.

SPD Gold
06-16-2007, 06:21 PM
Alright thats enough. Back to the episode.
What are some things you liked or disliked about it?

Ryutaros
06-16-2007, 06:48 PM
I liked that it ended.

Seriously, if people were going to have a discussion about your story... don't you think it would have happened back when you posted it? By bumping a finished story to get more attention, you're just opening yourself up for criticism like this. If you're not getting a satisfactory (in your mind) level of attention for your writing, perhaps you might want to step back and realize that what you want to write and what people want to read aren't the same thing.

GalaxyRed
06-17-2007, 12:17 AM
I liked that it ended.

Seriously, if people were going to have a discussion about your story... don't you think it would have happened back when you posted it? By bumping a finished story to get more attention, you're just opening yourself up for criticism like this. If you're not getting a satisfactory (in your mind) level of attention for your writing, perhaps you might want to step back and realize that what you want to write and what people want to read aren't the same thing.

My biggest problem with his so-called "stories" is that he makes them act like actual episodes, and tries to "take scenes out" because he's "running out of time for the episode length", like it's a real episode. Fanfics aren't supposed to be restricted to what happens on the show.

And making his own "episodes", trying to make it fit into the actual series, because he didn't like a certain episode. That part is fine, it's when he basically copies the entire episode from Dekaranger, and just redoes scenes with their Deka counterpart, that's another problem.

Spider-Man
06-17-2007, 04:52 AM
Alright thats enough. Back to the episode.

You don't decide that.

SPD Gold
06-17-2007, 01:04 PM
My biggest problem with his so-called "stories" is that he makes them act like actual episodes, and tries to "take scenes out" because he's "running out of time for the episode length", like it's a real episode. Fanfics aren't supposed to be restricted to what happens on the show.

And making his own "episodes", trying to make it fit into the actual series, because he didn't like a certain episode. That part is fine, it's when he basically copies the entire episode from Dekaranger, and just redoes scenes with their Deka counterpart, that's another problem.

You're confusing me. I don't "take scenes out" at all. I have no ploblem with the episode length. What really confused me was what I bold faced. Did you even see Energi...well...Requiem World. I didn't put in every scene. Read 'Energized' and watch 'Requiem World'. Download it here (http://www.rangerboard.com/showthread.php?t=82118&highlight=Tokusou+Sentai+Dekaranger) or watch it here (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YJfZkPZkJz0). You'll see some diffences.

And do I honestly suck that bad as a writer? Because here the same things said here are said there (http://www.rangerboard.com/showthread.php?t=103545&highlight=Emergency).

Spider-Man
06-17-2007, 01:18 PM
Your translating Dekaranger and sticking in the PRSPD name and characters. That's bad writing. Your doing suggests that you are a bad writer.

Maxell
06-17-2007, 01:42 PM
It's been discussed a lot, in almost in every fanfic that you make. Forget about Dekaranger, make your own stories. You have no limitations making a fanfic but you put them because this is "supposed" to be a PRSPD episode and it's clearly not. Be original, otherwise people are going to say the same things over an over.

Really, I have the impression that you are Bruce Kalish translating every episode that he can. This is not your own episode and for that I don't give you the credit as a writer.

The same happened with SPD and that's why SPD is considered one of the worst series. It was a translation and practically every episode was from Dekaranger. You can't give a writer the credit of making an episode that he clearly didn't make. By you translating this episode you are using other's people's ideas instead of your own.

That's my piece of advice, be original, use your imagination.

Ryutaros
06-17-2007, 02:49 PM
Thank you. At least this way it's not just me again. I mean seriously, you don't see me trying to cram chapters of Den-O into a 42 minute time slot for Buffy Episodes. SPDG, you've got this singular, disturbing fascination with trying to do what the Disney crew finished TWO YEARS AGO. Dekaranger's remakes ended back then. Bruce Kalish doesn't want to hear from you. Most of us aren't too big on seeing the episodes here and there that were removed because they needed the monsters elsewhere or had to cut them for season length. Get over it.

As for your actual fic, you've got this bizarre not quite prose, not quite script thing going that gets more and more garbled as you go on, as if you don't understand the function of the Save key and are getting increasingly frantic to bang the chapter out and post it before your mom makes you go do chores or something.

SPD Gold
06-17-2007, 08:05 PM
It's been discussed a lot, in almost in every fanfic that you make. Forget about Dekaranger, make your own stories. You have no limitations making a fanfic but you put them because this is "supposed" to be a PRSPD episode and it's clearly not. Be original, otherwise people are going to say the same things over an over.

Really, I have the impression that you are Bruce Kalish translating every episode that he can. This is not your own episode and for that I don't give you the credit as a writer.

The same happened with SPD and that's why SPD is considered one of the worst series. It was a translation and practically every episode was from Dekaranger. You can't give a writer the credit of making an episode that he clearly didn't make. By you translating this episode you are using other's people's ideas instead of your own.

That's my piece of advice, be original, use your imagination.

WHAT! You mean SPD was the best series. You know I'm not really Bruce Kalish right? And for the record the Space Patrol Delta episode that used the least amount of Deka footage was 'Zapped' and the Space Patrol Delta episode that used the most amount of Deka footage was 'Robotpoluza'.
But that doesn't mean 'Zapped' rocked (I like it but not only for the few usage of Deka footage), and that doesn't mean 'Robotpoluza' sucked. It depend on how a story is written. Remember I asked about 'Fake Blue' and 'Recognition'? You told me almost every post I make is based on SPD. That's because I like SPD. Back to the point. Remember you were trying to tell me 'Wormhole' sucked because of the story rather than the year it took place in, well I see your point. 'Wormhole' could've been as good as 'History' if not better if the story was changed in a few ways. You must be trying to put my favorite series down for the sake of making me mad. SPD didn't translate every episode and some scences from SPD episodes are not from Deka.

As for my fics:

I do have an imagination and came write based on my idaes. BUT, when I see a good Dekaranger episode (like 'Requiem World' and 'Hard Boiled License') and I find out there's no American version to that episode, I make one up making a few changes and to show myself and others what that ep would be like.

GundamExia
06-17-2007, 08:28 PM
WHAT! You mean SPD was the best series. You know I'm not really Bruce Kalish right? And for the record the Space Patrol Delta episode that used the least amount of Deka footage was 'Zapped' and the Space Patrol Delta episode that used the most amount of Deka footage was 'Robotpoluza'.
But that doesn't mean 'Zapped' rocked (I like it but not only for the few usage of Deka footage), and that doesn't mean 'Robotpoluza' sucked. It depend on how a story is written. Remember I asked about 'Fake Blue' and 'Recognition'? You told me almost every post I make is based on SPD. That's because I like SPD. Back to the point. Remember you were trying to tell me 'Wormhole' sucked because of the story rather than the year it took place in, well I see your point. 'Wormhole' could've been as good as 'History' if not better if the story was changed in a few ways. You must be trying to put my favorite series down for the sake of making me mad. SPD didn't translate every episode and some scences from SPD episodes are not from Deka.

It's called an opinion, kid. Look it up. Some of us think SPD was a pile of shit. I personally only liked about half the season. And for the record, in my opinion, "Robotpalooza" DID suck, just like "Perspective" did.

I do have an imagination and came write based on my idaes. BUT, when I see a good Dekaranger episode (like 'Requiem World' and 'Hard Boiled License') and I find out there's no American version to that episode, I make one up making a few changes and to show myself and others what that ep would be like.

You're pulling a Kalish and straight translating the episodes. And that's not called having an imagination.

Plus, you don't even do it well. You jump back and forth between tenses often and your style is weak.

Basically, I don't think anyone should even consider calling you a writer. You don't deserve the title.

Red_Ranger2003
06-17-2007, 08:31 PM
As for my fics:

I do have an imagination and came write based on my idaes. BUT, when I see a good Dekaranger episode (like 'Requiem World' and 'Hard Boiled License') and I find out there's no American version to that episode, I make one up making a few changes and to show myself and others what that ep would be like.

Haven't you ever thought that...you know...we don't care about what the episode might look like?

Ryutaros
06-17-2007, 08:35 PM
WHAT! You mean SPD was the best series.Uh no. He meant what he said. It's his opinion.You know I'm not really Bruce Kalish right?Not that we can tell, no.And for the record the Space Patrol Delta episode that used the least amount of Deka footage was 'Zapped' and the Space Patrol Delta episode that used the most amount of Deka footage was 'Robotpoluza'.Oh yay, it's the Trivia section from Wiki, now conveniently located on RB...But that doesn't mean 'Zapped' rocked (I like it but not only for the few usage of Deka footage), and that doesn't mean 'Robotpoluza' sucked. It depend on how a story is written.Yes, and we'll get back to that in a minute.Remember I asked about 'Fake Blue' and 'Recognition'?No.You told me almost every post I make is based on SPD.They are.That's because I like SPD.Your point? I like Den-O and manage to post about other stuff.Back to the point.There's a point here?Remember you were trying to tell me 'Wormhole' sucked because of the story rather than the year it took place in, well I see your point. 'Wormhole' could've been as good as 'History' if not better if the story was changed in a few ways.If you say so.You must be trying to put my favorite series down for the sake of making me mad. SPD didn't translate every episode and some scences from SPD episodes are not from Deka.Or we could be putting SPD down because we dislike it. Just a thought there.As for my fics:About time...I do have an imagination and came write based on my idaes. BUT, when I see a good Dekaranger episode (like 'Requiem World' and 'Hard Boiled License') and I find out there's no American version to that episode, I make one up making a few changes and to show myself and others what that ep would be like.Do you? Do you really? We've got three threads here... two of them the 'missing' SPD/MF crossover you want to force on the franchise, and this story. And I seem to recall (but don't want to go look) that people bashed you for turning the Deka/Magi movie into "your" crossover. Kinda like what you're doing. So... where's your imagination?

Maxell
06-17-2007, 08:54 PM
WHAT! You mean SPD was the best series. You know I'm not really Bruce Kalish right? And for the record the Space Patrol Delta episode that used the least amount of Deka footage was 'Zapped' and the Space Patrol Delta episode that used the most amount of Deka footage was 'Robotpoluza'.
But that doesn't mean 'Zapped' rocked (I like it but not only for the few usage of Deka footage), and that doesn't mean 'Robotpoluza' sucked. It depend on how a story is written. Remember I asked about 'Fake Blue' and 'Recognition'? You told me almost every post I make is based on SPD. That's because I like SPD. Back to the point. Remember you were trying to tell me 'Wormhole' sucked because of the story rather than the year it took place in, well I see your point. 'Wormhole' could've been as good as 'History' if not better if the story was changed in a few ways. You must be trying to put my favorite series down for the sake of making me mad. SPD didn't translate every episode and some scences from SPD episodes are not from Deka.

As for my fics:

I do have an imagination and came write based on my idaes. BUT, when I see a good Dekaranger episode (like 'Requiem World' and 'Hard Boiled License') and I find out there's no American version to that episode, I make one up making a few changes and to show myself and others what that ep would be like.

You misunderstood my post completely. I never wanted to make you mad. Do you know what sarcasm is? I used that in the Bruce Kalish comment. It's almost like your 5 years old and don't know how to interpret a post...:shame:

SPD is considered in this board one of the worst series because it was a copy of Dekaranger. I'm not saying it was a complete copy but the season was bad and many members share that opinion. I like SPD but judging by story, character development and plots the season was bad. I respect your opinion but really you're just... I don't care if you know what episode of SPD was "that" or "that" really. If you like SPD it's your decision and I don't care.

If you have imagination, show it by making something original. We can't just tell you this every time you make a fanfic. You should learn by now that if people are giving you the same criticism over and over again it's because something is wrong with your fanfics.

Not every episode of Sentai needs a translation, learn that and remember it forever. That's why DT is probably the most loved season in here, because it was original. And by the way, I'm not putting my personal preferences in my opinion, I'm talking from what I read in the board. And, who gets mad because somebody says that his favorite series was bad? Learn how to accept that not everyone has to agree with you because there's a cold world outside and not everybody is going to agree with you.

And it's not about scenes, it's about plot, story... almost everything was copied. Of course for you that will be very difficult to understand because you are blind by your love for SPD.

And seriously, if you want to keep getting the same bad criticism over and over then keep doing things like this. I think I've been very kind to you in every thread telling you what you need to fix but I was clearly wasting my time.

SPD Gold
06-17-2007, 09:12 PM
Uh no. He meant what he said. It's his opinion.

Well not everyone shares the same opinion.

Not that we can tell, no.

We'll I'm not. This is Bruce Kalish as he only made one post ever.

Oh yay, it's the Trivia section from Wiki, now conveniently located on RB...

Whatever.

Yes, and we'll get back to that in a minute.No.They are.

Okay.

Your point? I like Den-O and manage to post about other stuff.

Good for you.

There's a point here?

Yes.

If you say so.

Sure.

Or we could be putting SPD down because we dislike it.

I like it. I don't care if you do or don't.

Just a thought there.

Whatever.

About time...Do you? Do you really?

Yes. Do you.

We've got three threads here... two of them the 'missing' SPD/MF crossover you want to force on the franchise, and this story. And I seem to recall (but don't want to go look) that people bashed you for turning the Deka/Magi movie into "your" crossover. Kinda like what you're doing. So... where's your imagination?

I really didn't care. The only reason why I took the time and went back and changed it because i was making it as Disney were doing it (which you guys are trying to tell me to stop doing) and I learned that Disney is not allowed to steal Sentai movie footage, cognizant of the fact that Magi vs Deka is a Sentai movie so I made something...origional.

You misunderstood my post completely. I never wanted to make you mad. Do you know what sarcasm is? I used that in the Bruce Kalish comment. It's almost like your 5 years old and don't know how to interpret a post...

Do you take me for a dang fool? I know what sarcasm is. But I will take responsibilty. I misinterpret posts sometimes.

SPD is considered in this board one of the worst series because it was a copy of Dekaranger. I'm not saying it was a complete copy but the season was bad and many members share that opinion. I like SPD but judging by story, character development and plots the season was bad. I respect your opinion but really you're just... I don't care if you know what episode of SPD was "that" or "that" really. If you like SPD it's your decision and I don't care.

If you like SPD or Deka like I do it's your decision and I don't care either.

If you have imagination, show it by making something original. We can't just tell you this every time you make a fanfic. You should learn by now that if people are giving you the same criticism over and over again it's because something is wrong with your fanfics.

I did! With my new and improved Mystic Force vs. Space Patrol Delta team-up.

Not every episode of Sentai needs a translation, learn that and remember it forever. That's why DT is probably the most loved season in here, because it was original. And by the way, I'm not putting my personal preferences in my opinion, I'm talking from what I read in the board. And, who gets mad because somebody says that his favorite series was bad? Learn how to accept that not everyone has to agree with you because there's a cold world outside and not everybody is going to agree with you.

Guess what? I was being sarcastic about the making me mad thing. I wasn;t being sarcastic about SPD being the best series. Dino Thunder is origional but not completly. I;m not just agreeing with you just for the sake of doing it. I saw the first episode of Abaranger and the Rangers' Super Dino Mode and the Black Dino Ranger were in the first episode unlike in Dino Thunder so you're right. Dino Thunder did a bad job copying from Abaranger.

And it's not about scenes, it's about plot, story... almost everything was copied. Of course for you that will be very difficult to understand because you are blind by your love for SPD.

I know. and no im not. I do lke SPD and all but it aint that difficult for me to understand.

And seriously, if you want to keep getting the same bad criticism over and over then keep doing things like this. I think I've been very kind to you in every thread telling you what you need to fix but I was clearly wasting my time.

No you weren't you did a good job actually.

GundamExia
06-17-2007, 09:16 PM
Guess what? I was being sarcastic about the making me mad thing. I wasn;t being sarcastic about SPD being the best series. Dino Thunder is origional but not completly. I;m not just agreeing with you just for the sake of doing it. I saw the first episode of Abaranger and the Rangers' Super Dino Mode and the Black Dino Ranger were in the first episode unlike in Dino Thunder so you're right. Dino Thunder did a bad job copying from Abaranger.

And in doing a "bad job" with copying, they made a good season that was able to stand up on it's own, without standing on a Sentai crutch like SPD.

No you weren't you did a good job actually.

Then why are we still reading bad "fan fiction" (if unoriginal translations can be called that)?

Maxell
06-17-2007, 09:20 PM
Dino Thunder did a bad job copying from Abaranger.
.

I have nothing more to say but this post is just...:o .

Power Rangers does not have to copy the Sentai Version.

GundamExia
06-17-2007, 09:21 PM
I have nothing more to say but this post is just...:o .

Sad, isn't it?

Maxell
06-17-2007, 09:24 PM
Sad, isn't it?

I just have no words to describe this. I kind want to know how old he is, maybe that can explain everything.

SPD Gold
06-17-2007, 09:26 PM
I have nothing more to say but this post is just...:o . Power Rangers does not have to copy the Sentai Version. And in doing a "bad job" with copying, they made a good season that was able to stand up on it's own, without standing on a Sentai crutch like SPD.


I was actually being sarcastic.

Then why are we still reading bad "fan fiction" (if unoriginal translations can be called that)?

I just wanted to imagine and write what an American 'Requiem World' would be like.

Ryutaros
06-17-2007, 09:29 PM
I was actually being sarcastic.No you weren't. Stand by your damn fool opinions when someone calls you on them, son. Telling everyone you've been being sarcastic when they smack you just makes you look stupid and weak-willed.I just wanted to imagine and write what an American 'Requiem World' would be like.Yes, and what we're telling you is that it wouldn't have been a Japanese "Requiem World" with the names changed.

GundamExia
06-17-2007, 09:30 PM
I was actually being sarcastic.

Mmmmm, I love the n00b defense of "I was being sarcastic". It's funny every time I see it.

SPD Gold
06-17-2007, 09:36 PM
No you weren't. Stand by your damn fool opinions when someone calls you on them, son. Telling everyone you've been being sarcastic when they smack you just makes you look stupid and weak-willed.Yes, and what we're telling you is that it wouldn't have been a Japanese "Requiem World" with the names changed.

:mad: SHUT UP!... ... ...dang pest.

GundamExia
06-17-2007, 09:42 PM
:mad: SHUT UP!... ... ...dang pest.

Awwwww, mad that he just bitch slapped you?

SPD Gold
06-17-2007, 09:45 PM
Awwwww, mad that he just bitch slapped you?

Uhh I did not get smacked at all...n00b.

GundamExia
06-17-2007, 09:47 PM
Uhh I did not get smacked at all...n00b.

:005:

Wow....so I'm the n00b here? Haha. I'm not the one who translated a Sentai episode, called it "an original work", and then hid behind "I was being sarcastic" every time a valid point was made.

Ryutaros
06-17-2007, 09:48 PM
Awwwww, mad that he just bitch slapped you?Hey hey hey. I respect my bitches. Besides, when you've got bruised bitches, it's harder for them to turn tricks.Uhh I did not get smacked at all...n00b....he's been here for two years and has over 7,000 posts. Are you really the best person to be calling anyone a n00b?

SPD Gold
06-17-2007, 09:51 PM
:005:

Wow....so I'm the n00b here? Haha. I'm not the one who translated a Sentai episode, called it "an original work", and then hid behind "I was being sarcastic" every time a valid point was made.

:005: :005: :005: (Laughing... ... ...)

(stops laughing)

:shame:
Cut da crap...both uh ya'll.

Red_Ranger2003
06-17-2007, 09:51 PM
Ooh, you've taken a beating! A rebuttal, SPD Gold?

Whatever.

Okay.

Good for you.

Yes.

Sure.

I like it. I don't care if you do or don't.

Whatever.

Yes. Do you.

...
I really didn't care. The only reason why I took the time and went back and changed it because i was making it as Disney were doing it (which you guys are trying to tell me to stop doing) and I learned that Disney is not allowed to steal Sentai movie footage, cognizant of the fact that Magi vs Deka is a Sentai movie so I made something...origional.

No, that was not original. You can't even spell original.


Do you take me for a dang fool? I know what sarcasm is. But I will take responsibilty. I misinterpret posts sometimes.

Guess what? I was being sarcastic about the making me mad thing. I wasn;t being sarcastic about SPD being the best series. Dino Thunder is origional but not completly. I;m not just agreeing with you just for the sake of doing it. I saw the first episode of Abaranger and the Rangers' Super Dino Mode and the Black Dino Ranger were in the first episode unlike in Dino Thunder so you're right. Dino Thunder did a bad job copying from Abaranger.

That's why many people LIKED Dino Thunder. Because it was original. Or as you say, origional. Stop talking like Sentai and Power Rangers is the same thing! You call Jack and Sky Dekared!
I was actually being sarcastic.
...right.


I just wanted to imagine and write what an American 'Requiem World' would be like.

THEN KEEP IT IN YOUR IMAGINATION.
:005: :005: :005: (Laughing... ... ...)

(stops laughing)

:shame:
Cut da crap...both uh ya'll.

So you can't think of anything to say...so you laugh for no reason. :rolleyes:

SPD Gold
06-17-2007, 09:54 PM
Seriously...ya'll make me wanna blow somebody's brains out...not that i would anyway...but still...if you don't got nothing decent 2 say shut up...especially you Red Ranger 2003. I had too many arguments with you.

GundamExia
06-17-2007, 09:56 PM
Seriously...ya'll make me wanna blow somebody's brains out...not that i would anyway...but still...if you don't got nothing decent 2 say shut up...especially you Red Ranger 2003. I had too many arguments with you.

Why would we have anything decent to say about a one star story from a guy who doesn't know the meaning of the word "original"?

So you can't think of anything to say...so you laugh for no reason. :rolleyes:

It's another typical n00b response.

Red_Ranger2003
06-17-2007, 09:57 PM
Seriously...ya'll make me wanna blow somebody's brains out...not that i would anyway...but still...if you don't got nothing decent 2 say shut up...especially you Red Ranger 2003. I had too many arguments with you.

I am not trying to argue with you. I am just simply pointing out your mistakes and you are always acting like everything you do is right and everyone in the board is a n00b.
Why would we have anything decent to say about a story from a guy who doesn't know the meaning of the word "original"?

Or even spell it?

...

I was pointing out a spelling mistake.

SPD Gold
06-17-2007, 09:58 PM
Why would we have anything decent to say about a one star story from a guy who doesn't know the meaning of the word "original"?

I know what the word "original" means...dang fool!

Original: Not stolen from a particular source and came from oneself...in other words...not plagirized (however the freak you spell it)!

GundamExia
06-17-2007, 10:00 PM
I know what the word "original" means...dang fool!

Original: Not stolen from a particular source and came from oneself...in other words...not plagirized (however the freak you spell it)!

Then how was your story original if you stole plot, characters, etc?

Red_Ranger2003
06-17-2007, 10:02 PM
Then how was your story original if you stole plot, characters, etc?

ZING!

...

Once again, not trying to argue. >_>

SPD Gold
06-17-2007, 10:08 PM
Then how was your story original if you stole plot, characters, etc?

HUmm?

I don't remember Umeko morphing at all when fighting her evil clone!
I don't remember an Abaranger character cameoing in 'Requiem World'!
I coulda sworn i didn't put anything about Z about to be hit by a bus or some crap like that!
I don't remember Umeko morphing when fighting those evil teddy bears in her bedroom!
Last time I checked Umeko was aboard a subway train rather than a bus.

Not every aspect of this story is taken from it's japanese version. As I said, watch 'Requiem World' and read this and juxtapose and you'll find discrepancy...

GundamExia
06-17-2007, 10:10 PM
HUmm?

I don't remember Umeko morphing at all when fighting her evil clone!
I don't remember an Abaranger character cameoing in 'Requiem World'!
I coulda sworn i didn't put anything about Z about to be hit by a bus or some crap like that!
I don't remember Umeko morphing when fighting those evil teddy bears in her bedroom!
Last time I checked Umeko was aboard a subway train rather than a bus.

Not every aspect of this story is taken from it's japanese version. As I said, watch 'Requiem World' and read this and juxtapose and you'll find discrepancy...

Oh, so suddenly taking a plot and changing five things counts as "original"?

Bruce better watch out or he might be replaced.

Red_Ranger2003
06-17-2007, 10:13 PM
HUmm?

I don't remember Umeko morphing at all when fighting her evil clone!
I don't remember an Abaranger character cameoing in 'Requiem World'!
I coulda sworn i didn't put anything about Z about to be hit by a bus or some crap like that!
I don't remember Umeko morphing when fighting those evil teddy bears in her bedroom!
Last time I checked Umeko was aboard a subway train rather than a bus.

Not every aspect of this story is taken from it's japanese version. As I said, watch 'Requiem World' and read this and juxtapose and you'll find discrepancy...

In that case, SPD is one of the most original seasons of Power Rangers.

You took the plot and added and changed a few things. Isn't that what almost every power Ranger episode is like?

Ryutaros
06-17-2007, 10:22 PM
*giggles and eats popcorn*

GundamExia
06-17-2007, 10:23 PM
*giggles and eats popcorn*

Good show, eh?

GreenNinja
06-17-2007, 10:28 PM
You took the plot and added and changed a few things. Isn't that what almost every power Ranger episode is like?
Careful, he might read that as a compliment.

Spider-Man
06-18-2007, 09:25 AM
I know what the word "original" means...dang fool!

Original: Not stolen from a particular source and came from oneself...in other words...not plagirized (however the freak you spell it)!

Time to start using that meaning, Goldie Locks.

Ryutaros
06-18-2007, 11:32 PM
Honestly, nothing in fanfiction is original. Nothing. That's the nature of fanfiction. You're playing in someone else's sandbox. I had this discussion with my sister today, because she's been getting a lot more direct fan art commissions lately.

What makes a fanfic readable is how much the author follows the source material. If I wanted to watch subbed Dekaranger, that's what TVN is for. It's what they do. But I don't. I want to read something new. And honestly, the 'new seasons' where someone takes the six MMPR teens and gives them slight personality adjustments before trying to rewrite the series... even that's more original than this.

Spider-Man
06-19-2007, 01:56 AM
TVN does subbed Dekaranger.

>_>

<_<


Just sayin.

Ryutaros
06-19-2007, 02:07 AM
Son of a...

Okay, they need to stop putting S and D next to each other. That's just asking for trouble...

GaiaRanger
06-19-2007, 07:17 AM
Hmm,
SPD Gold, perhaps you should make a fanfic where the SPD characters meet the Dekarangers. Considering no episode has had that, if you could do that your whole "I'm original and creative" can actually mean something.
Or make a fanfic of SPD of something that never happened in Deka. Whatever